*This is my first legit piece of writing so don’t be too harsh. I would like and warmly welcome some constructive criticism on how to improve my writing.*
A man is taken by a succubus in a time of weakness and turned into the woman he was meant to be.
Chapter 1
George was walking home from his job at ‘Jude’s Law Offices’ when he was pushed into an alley by a group of four men. They were taller than him by at least a foot because he was only 5’1”, and way more muscular. He could be mistaken for a girl if he’d lost weight and used make-up. The guy George assumed was the leader stepped forward and flicked out a switchblade.
“Hey, pretty-boy. Why don’t you open up that wallet of yours and show us what’s inside?” He pointed the knife at his briefcase and kept eye contact with George.
“O-okay. Just please don’t hurt me,” George stammered as he fumbled with the locks on the case. He didn’t keep anything in his briefcase that wasn’t work-related and hoped the guys would leave him alone if they saw that he had no money. He got it unlocked and opened it to show the men that he had nothing but paperwork, but they started sifting through and grabbing the papers. When they took one that seemed to satisfy the boss, they tossed the briefcase aside and looked down at George.
“Well, George. Since you were cooperative I’d like to give you a gift. I won’t kill you, but I will beat you within an inch of your life and politely ask that you drop your case against me. Can you do that?” The leader stepped closer to George until he was up against the wall.
“Please. Please don’t hurt me. I’ll do whatever you say. I’ve got money, just please don’t hurt me,” Dave’s pleading quickly turned to sob as he was backed into the wall.
“Anything? Hear that fellas? Little George here is willing to do anything,” The leader laughed. “If that’s the case, why don’t you take off your clothes? I wanna see how far you’re willing to go.” George looked at the man with shock and embarrassment. He didn’t expect the request and froze, thinking about what the man had said.
“I said strip!” The man yelled forcefully. He slapped George in the face, which snapped him out of his trance and George did as the thug said. When he was down to his underwear he stopped.
“Well? What are you waiting for?” The man said with an evil grin. “Panties too.”
“B-but…” George could only stammer the first word before the man slapped him again, knocking him to the ground.“Do as I say. Unless you want the beating instead.“No no no. Please don’t,” George pleaded. He got up and removed his briefs. “Now what?”
“On your knees,” the man said in a demeaning and demanding voice. George did as he was told and sat on his knees. The man unbuttoned his pants and removed his flaccid cock. George looked up at him with a pleading look in his eyes, but the thug didn’t care. “Start sucking.”
George looked back down at the dick in front of his face. It smelled salty and musty like he’d just been working out. He closed his eyes and opened his mouth. When the man entered George’s mouth he groaned with pleasure. He placed his hands on the back of his head, but he didn’t force him. George slowly started bobbing up and down, hoping to get this over with. He could taste the little beads of precum starting to form from the thug’s cock. As George sucked the man’s dick started growing. He knew that he’d have more issues the longer he took. He started to speed up when he could feel the large manhood start becoming more rigid. The man groaned with pleasure and started lightly thrusting.
“Oh, fuck. You’ve done this before, haven’t you?” The man asked between groaned. George pulled off the man’s cock to respond, but he started to stroke him to keep his progress.
“No, sir,” George looked up at him and met his eye. He could tell that the man was kind based solely on the expression in his eyes. They were soft and caring. George looked back down at the man’s cock and was surprised at the size. He couldn’t believe that dicks this size existed outside of porn. It had to be at least seven or eight inches and thick enough that he couldn’t wrap his hands all the way around it. He looked back up at the thug as he wrapped his mouth around him again, sucking with more enthusiasm than he thought he had.
He was on his knees for at least five minutes before the man was close. As the man drew closer to his climax he started thrusting harder, but not hard enough for George to stop. He grabbed the sides of George’s head and made him make eye contact.
“Take a deep breath,” he said and George did so. As soon as he inhaled the man started to fuck his face fast and hard. It was an agonizing last thirty seconds, but George would take it as best he could. The man pulled George in one last time and came. He dumped loads of his cum straight down George’s throat and all he could do was swallow and hope it would end soon. The man withdrew his softening member and released one last small load into George’s mouth.
“Show me,” the man said putting his pants back on. George opened his mouth to show him the cum he’d deposited. He bent down to put his face in front of George. “Swallow.” George obeyed and swallowed the cum. As he swallowed, he tasted some and actually liked it. It was mostly salty, with a slight sweetness.
“Shit. I need to get me a piece of that,” one of the thugs pushed past and pulled his cock out, slapping it against George’s face. George opened his mouth to protest but the new man shoved his dick into his mouth before he could say a word. He knew that this man wouldn’t be as nice as the previous one based on the taste of his cock alone. It was musky and sour like it hadn’t been washed in months. He thrust in and out of George’s mouth roughly, making him gag and spit profusely. No matter how hard he tried, George couldn’t get away, so he just tried not to throw up as he was being used. Lucky for George, this man didn’t have the stamina that the first one did and came within a minute. He pulled out and blasted his face with cum. George coughed and sputtered as he tried to catch his breath, getting some of the man’s seed in his mouth. His cum wasn’t like his boss’ at all, being sour and bitter with a chunky texture that made the bad experience worse. The next two men weren’t as bad, but they were still forceful and abused George’s mouth till he was sore. When they’d all had their way with him, the leader bent down to whisper in George’s ear.
“I’m sorry about them, but I’d love to see you again. And I’m sorry about this too,” he slapped George in the face leaving a mark on his cheek. He stood up and left the alley, his posse following behind. The brute bent down and picked up the pile of clothes next to George, leaving him naked, alone, and demoralized.
It was an hour before George stopped crying and sat up. He looked around the alley, taking in the scene of his defilement. He looked over at the pile of papers spilling out of his briefcase and sighed. He couldn’t go back to work without the case files. He couldn’t go home and risk being seen walking home naked. He couldn’t do anything but lay in the alley and wait to die.
“Hey there. You alright?” A woman’s voice came from the end of the alley. He didn’t want to be seen, but he knew he didn’t have much of a choice.
“Please, help me,” George’s voice was hoarse from a mixture of crying and being throat raped. The woman walked up to him and bent down to look him in the eye.
She was tall, even for a woman. He estimated she was around six and a half feet and absolutely beautiful. She was dressed in a woman’s tuxedo and black heels that made her already tall figure even taller. Her long brown hair draped over her eye and down her chest.
“Hey,’ she pulled his chin up to look her in the eye. “It’s going to be okay, baby. I’m gonna take good care of you.” She sat against the wall and pulled him in and let him rest on her. He pulled up against her shakily and almost immediately felt safer. He quickly fell asleep in her arms as she caressed and cradled him.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/kdxjlk/taken_by_a_succubusmmmmmnchumiliation