First attempt at writing

Thought I’d give it a go, first time trying to write a short story;

One Saturday Afternoon

It all started one Saturday in the autumn. I woke up late and needing to run some errands, I quickly threw on some clothes and ran out the door.

While I was out I needed to stop for some petrol and it was at the garage that I bumped into an old friend. We had some history, nothing serious, we’d had some casual fun a couple of times in the past after drunken nights and it was just one of those things that fizzled out and we carried on with our lives.

It had probably been a couple of years since we saw each other and she hadn’t changed a bit, she was stunning, her hair blew gently in the wind and her eyes were deep pools I could get lost for days in. We stopped to say hi for a minute, the usual ‘what you been up to’ chat but I was seriously pressed for time and needed to get my errands done before closing time. I said it was great to see her but really had to dash and she suggested calling by hers after I’m done so we can catch up over a cuppa, ‘it’d be nice to catch up with you again’ she said. At this point I had to agree and my heart skipped a beat at the thought, she lived not too far away and so I said ‘sure, I’ll give you a call when I’m done and see if you’re free’.

I was keen to get finished up as soon as I could, excited by the anticipation of what our ‘catch up’ might be like. I actually missed her though and even if it turned out to be literally a cup of tea then I’d happily sit there dreaming into her eyes while sipping my tea making the moment last.

The time finally came when I was done and sent the ‘hey, still free to meet’ text. She didn’t hang around to confirm and told me to swing by. When I got there and she opened the door it was clear she hadn’t long got out of the shower, she was wearing some tight shorts and a vest top that clearly showed her figure well, her hair was wrapped up in a clean white towel. I stepped in and we went to the kitchen, she put the kettle on and continued the ‘what you been up to’ chat but all the while I couldn’t take my eyes off her and had all the good times we had running through my memory bank. Now was not the time to become aroused, in my haste that morning I’d thrown on some joggers and a jumper and had nothing on underneath, sometime I enjoyed going out ‘comando’ but joggers were perhaps a little too loose for this occasion.

I could feel myself starting to get hard and not wanting it to be obvious I suggested we go to the living room and catch up somewhere more comfortable than the kitchen, as I turned to walk out into the hallway I’m sure I caught her take a glance and clearly see the outline of my arousal.

  I sat down on the sofa and she sat next to me, a lot closer than I’d expected her too. The conversation soon turned to if we were both single. It turned out that luckily we were, it was at that point she put her hand gently on my leg and said ‘well it looks like you’re pleased to see me at least’ indicating down to my lap where I had lost all control and grown hard at the thought of what might be. We both looked down and I kind of shyly smiled at her, ‘well we did have some good times in the past’ I said. She slowly started to slide her hand further up my leg and said ‘we sure did’ she lent forward slowly breaking eye contact to look at my lips, she smelled so sweet and I leaned forward to reach her lips with mine. We kissed softly to start, with light flicks of our tongues coming together, her hand all the time reaching further up my leg to reach my hard cock. She began to feel me through my joggers and kissed me harder, my cock tensed so hard under her touch. My hand reached around the back of her neck pulling her in tighter, the other hand moved over her shoulder down to her breast, I slowly felt her and stroked her nipple making it hard, I could feel her arousal as she kissed me harder still. In the moment I hadn’t realised she had reached inside and taken my cock out, she was now softly stroking my length and teasing the head slowly between the tips of her fingers.

  She moved from the sofa to her knees in front of me, took the towel off and let her cool wet hair land in my lap as she lowered her head, strangely this felt nice against my now red hot skin. She took the tip of my hard cock in her mouth gently sucking and flicking it with her soft tongue all the while slowly stroking it’s length with her hands. Her lips felt amazing and my cock started to throb, I wanted this moment to last forever but knew it wouldn’t be long until I exploded with pleasure inside her mouth. I pulled her head away and made her look into my eyes ‘lets go upstairs’ I said.

We got to her bedroom and I pushed her down onto the bed, I wanted to repay the favour from earlier and also prolong my imminent orgasm. I slowly kissed her neck, all the while running my fingers over her body, I worked my way down slowly and softly kissing as I went, I pulled the straps down from her top and exposed her breasts, my lips gently brushing across her nipple and I gently flicked them with my tongue. Lower still I reached her stomach, softly kissing as I pulled her shorts down. I kissed her inner thigh and ran my tongue further towards her to tease as I then slowly ran my tongue down the other thigh. She squirmed under me aching for me to taste her. The tease was over, I slowly kissed her and began to lightly lick her clit with soft flutters from my tongue, she tasted sweet. She arched her back and let out a soft moan and I softly sucked on her clit all the while flicking it with my tongue. She couldn’t take it any more, she pulled by head back up towards her and said ‘just fuck me’. My cock was hard and throbbing to be inside her.

I couldn’t help but tease her more as my lips moved back up her body, I kissed her lips and at the same time teased her clit with the tip of my cock, she was trying to pull me in hard but I continued to tease, rubbing it up and down her feeling how wet she had become. I slowly started to slide inside her, she moaned out in pleasure as my length slowly entered her. She felt amazing. We were together as one in pleasure as I slid my cock inside her slowly but pushing hard against her. After a few minutes we both came in an explosion of ecstasy, it felt incredible to come inside her.

Afterwards we laid there together for a few moments, not a word was said as we both just laid there numb from the feeling of pure pleasure. In that moment everything was just perfect.

Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/i8d5j4/first_attempt_at_writing