1st Story – Daddy/Spanking Fantasy – feedback invited!

You have been an extremely naughty girl. Disrespecting your elders and being very selfish. You are not too old to be punished. It’s time to teach you to respect and serve. When I tell you to do something, I expect it done with zero talkback. Loosing track of time in your room texting your friends, watching videos and playing games is no excuse.
 
Baby, get over here. I have no idea who taught you to be so selfish but I’m going to help you unlearn that right now!! Stop looking at me like that. Do you think I want to have to teach you how to respect your elders? Don’t you realize how frustrating this is. I thought you were listening when I spoke and watching me as I showed you the right way to be. Have you ever seen me disrespect my patents or anyone from their generation? Of course you haven’t, because I’m not selfish. I serve my elders because they have done so much for me. 
 
Now take off your shorts. Don’t you start crying now. I’ll give you something to cry about in a minute. You are being selfish again. This is going to hurt me a lot more than it’s going to hurt you. The pain of failed parenting is nothing compared to a spanking. You are not even going to feel this tomorrow, but the sting of your selfishness is going to live on in me for a very very very long time.
 
Baby, your shorts. NOW!! Stop stalling. That’s it. Oh my!!! Where are your panties? Good girls wear panties, right? Forget it, I’m not talking about this anymore. Get over here. Lay down across my lap. I really thought we wouldn’t have to do this again. But you have left me no choice.
 
Obviously, 10 wasn’t enough for you to learn anything about respect. Today, we are going to do 15. And you are going to count them. If I cannot hear you counting and saying clearly, “sir, I have been selfish, and I promise to change” then it doesn’t count.
 
Baby, this really hurts me. Your bum feels really soft. I don’t want to have to turn it red, but you are just not listening. 
 
When am I going to start? What, do you think you are in charge here? I’ll start when I feel like it!! I’m going to keep rubbing this pretty bum of yours as long as I please. Right now, you need to stop asking me questions and start thinking about why you are over my knee. I’m really worried you are not learning your lesson. I don’t want to have to teach you this again. We both know I take no pleasure in this. We both know how much this hurts me. As I rub my hand over your bum do you know what I’m thinking about. I’m thinking about what I could have done differently so that you wouldn’t have turned out to be so selfish.
 
SMACK.  
 
Don’t start crying now. What are you doing? Quit squirming so much. You are rubbing my shorts when you do that. Well, there you go not listening. I told you very clearly what you have to do. This is exactly why I don’t think you listen, and I don’t think you learn. Did you count? Did you remember what you are to say? Obviously not!! Baby, you know I love you, but this is really disappointing. Let’s try this again.
 
SMACK
 
That’s better. That’s right, one and it’s nice to hear that you know you have been selfish, and you promise to change. But promises are just empty words. You need to start showing me you respect me and are ready to serve me and my generation with respect. Baby, you really need to stop squirming. Your making this very uncomfortable for daddy.

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