My name is Luca. Or ‘Cherry Picker’ as I’m more widely known. I got that nickname for two reasons. The most obvious one was for bangin’ broads who could probably pass for my daughter’s age. Freshman usually who wanted to experience a slice of what it was like to actually be somebody for once. I run into them at bars and restaurants. Usually when they see the way I dress, fancy suit and all, hair slicked back, and the respect I immediately get when I walk through the door, they’re interested from the very start.
The second reason they call me ‘Cherry Picker’ is because I’m the Capo (Captain) for a team of wiseguys both made, and wannabes. But each man has to earn their right to become a ‘made man’ in the family. How do they do that? Are you askin’ me about my business? Look, whoever’s readin’ this, you seem like someone with a brain who can read between the lines, a little huh? My task to make a man part of the family usually goes something like this.
There’s someone the family needs taken care of. I pick out who needs to become a cherry and give it to the guy tryna make it in the family. Next thing you know, this guy winds up found dead in a ditch somewhere. Head like an exploded cherry.
But I’m a family man. I’ve got a wife, a son and two daughters. All of which are still mostly in the dark about my line of work and my wife, god bless her, looks after those rascals while I go to meetin’s and talk business with my associates. I own a restaurant downtown. Say…we’ve got an openin’ for a waitress if I’m rememberin’ right? A pretty dame like you around the place would surely spark some life back into it. Put some shine on it! Why don’t you come by tomorrow? 10am sharp. This is not a request sweet heart. Don’t let Papa Luca down now huh?
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Hi there, thanks for getting through that if you did and even if you don’t want to play with me I appreciate feedback on the breaking the 4th wall style I narrated in. It won’t be like that for the actual scene, it’s just stereotypical of mob movies to use 4th wall breaking narration at times to push the story along (goodfellas for example).
I’d like to play a scene where I play a respected, powerful mob captain and take you on the journey to becoming my mistress, and partner. You’d eventually be in on the life, starting off with me giving you a job as a waitress so I can study you more closely. It’ll escalate to me buying you things, casual flirting, pretty full on flirting, making you my mistress, buying you a car and a new apartment etc, before finally you become my most trusted partner and friend who I share my work day with (an honour only reserved for the right kind of trustworthy mistress.)
If you think you’d be interested in something like this I’m open to both long and short term styles. I tend to write in first person, I have no limit on what length you write as long as it’s clearly not lazy and/or serves the story.
We could play out a series of short scenes together, or one long scene with some time skips of weeks at a time going by. I’d fill in the gaps in either situation with a 4th wall break narration paragraph just to get us to a new scene, etc.
I’m in this for the fun, not because I want to write a crime/romance novel, this is erotic literature after all. So we’ll get pretty freaky once we start our affair! I promise you!
Thank you for reading all of this if you did! And this prompt is always open! Feel free to get in touch any time no matter when you see this!
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/i14j25/m4a_playing_f_falling_for_a_mobster