So this is my first post here, and I am doing it after being dared by a friend so hope you like and feel free to give constructive opinions and let me know if I can continue.
It’s summer, the last week of classes in High School me and my girlfriend Joanne have marked going to my house finish some last after school stupid geology work, in the afternoon.
She’s 5ft tall, fit, Asian like a brunette with brown eyes, D cup with matching ass.
I’m 6ft tall a little chubby blondish with green eyes.
I was excited because Joanne going to my house always mean some kinky stuff happening.
The classes seemed never-ending thinking what I could do to Joanne all afternoon if it wasn’t for the stupid geology. When they were finally over, we meet in the corridor and off we went.
In the walk to my house she started talking about the new cool movie that they did kinky stuff in, obviously 50 Shades, she was interested in those romantic and kinky styles of films for a long time and even read the book, I was truly interested in the kink part of it and maybe take some ideas, but the romantic and drama stuff made me puke a rainbow.
We arrived home, threw our stuff on the floor with a sigh of reliving turning on the AC immediately, and jumped to the bed. Out of nowhere we started making out, she took off her bra under the fantastic white tube top she was wearing, saying it made her very hot and uncomfortable has her boobs kept getting bigger with time. At this time I was fully hard on and ready to get over the making out and do something better, if you know what I mean hahaha. But she kept saying we must do the geology work and have fun later, even if don’t like it she was right.
After some time doing the stupid work I was out of my mind as her nipples kept getting hard with the AC fresh air, my hard-on was never fully gone, wishing it end soon so we could do something for the sake of my mental health. And it was to my surprise, but as we turned off the computer and shut the books close she received a text from a friend saying today was the last time that 50 Shades was on cinema. Immediately she said we were going and went to the bathroom to put back her bra, how could I say no to those brown eyes, even if my cock is still aching in my pants, she promised we would still do it later with a evil smile on her face, grabbing me over my pants and kissing me. OKAY! now I couldn’t say no.
After turning off the AC (because money doesn’t grow on trees), and wait for her in the bathroom we left the house and walked for a bit we finally arriving at the cinema, with the movie almost starting, giving us only time to buy the tickets. It was relieving to finally sit at the cinema chair with the AC booming after a walk in the hot sun (it’s really hot in my city). Again she started complaining about her bra and I just say to her, “if it is so a bad why don’t you take it?” in a joking tone, she looks around and the room wasn’t full and we were in the end row sits as always, she considers it. As soon as the ads ended and the light went off she took it off in front of me revealing her full hard nipples again. The film goes on, I try to ignore her nipples and my growing hard-on but it’s impossible in hope of some relive I put my and on her leg trying to don’t go over her short blue skirt she notices me but tries to ignore it, unsuccessfully, after 2 minutes e feel her trying to catching a breath, putting her hand on my leg, gripping it hard. With that my cock got harder, and as harder it got the more I went under her shirt a form as payback for later but with that the more she gripped harder and closer to my cock. As I was finally going the full way under her skirt suddenly the light went on, it was break time, the lights scared me and I missed the opportunity, with the lights on she could see my enormous bludge, giving it a little rub teasing me. We thought of buying some popcorn but the foreplay was too good to abandon so we just teased each other in the meantime.
Soon the light went off again and the foreplay started again with me finally reaching her wet pussy only to discover she wasn’t wearing any panties on this whole time, she was a dripping mess both from the movie has from my hand. The movie chair was so large I sit her in the middle of my legs and fingered her hard as I closed her mouth with my other hand muffling her light moans. She was finger-licking good, after this, she undid my bottoms, kneel, and sucked me off for a bit not letting me cum swirling her tongue around my head. As a gentleman i always make sure she cums first but this time it was so difficult, her blowjob skills were incredible and the doing it in public helped my arousal. Before i let myself cum, i grab her and throw her to the chair and return the favor licking her, she made much effort to be quiet but soon we realized it was impossible. … We needed a quieter place.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/hvlbcr/the_geology_after_school_work
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I like your stuff, my only piece of criticism would be to maybe proof read your stuff once or twice other than that your on the track to making some good stuff