So how was that? First time writing like this

First time writing anything like this so yeah. I guess let me know how it is. ?

Gental kisses on your neck and shoulders as I stand behind you. As I slowly run my hands down your sides exploring whispering “what do you want?” In your ear as I give it a little nibble. Slowly touching you softly feeling for those imperfections I adore. I spin you around slowly as I kiss you. Running my fingers up your spin slowly taking your shirt off as I nibble at your neck. I slide my hands down you pants and grab your ads squeezing it tightly I pull you close as I kiss you. With my other hand I unclasp your bra and let it fall to the floor. I look into your eyes almost lost for a moment but ask “are you ready” I kiss you lips for the last time as I turn your head to kiss your cheek and neck. Slowly working my way down I run my hands down your side’s towards your ass as I kiss your breasts. I pause to play with your nipples, flicking them with my tongue and gently sucking them. I look at you and smile as I move farther down kissing your navel I unbutton your pants as I kiss your hips. Slowly pulling your pants off my tongue starts to wonder, searching for you. I want to taste you. I want to feel your body quiver as I lick you. I lay you down onto the bed as I finish taking your pants off. Kissing you inner thigh making my way to your pussy. I run my hands up your stomach one to you nipple while the other goes to your neck. I lick you until you cant take it anymore. I use my tongue to spread your lips and lick your clit. As I start to lick harder my grip on your neck gets tighter. I pause and come up to your ear. “I want you” I whisper into your ear as I cover your mouth. The excitement is overwhelming. You shake you head yes and ask for more.

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