Yesterday I posted a [cleaner version](https://www.reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/ho0377/goodnight_babygirl_ill_see_you_tomorrow_rape/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x) of this which was the finished version of a commission I made. I received a couple comments and DMs saying they wanted to see the Original Uncensored/Hard Version of the Draft before the censoring so I figured I’d post it separately. Without further ado, I present to you the harder version of yesterday’s post.
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The sun was slowly rising over the snowy peaks of the mountain ahead. Normally, in this time of year people were leaving Alaska to go somewhere warmer and safer. Sara had other plans though. This tiny and cheerful 29 year old, might be standing at a mere 1,60 but she’s determined to travel deep into the frozen Alaskan wilds in order to finally spend some time with her biological dad. It has already been 25 years since her parents decided to end their relationship. Sara never explicitly learned the reason why they broke it off but they were never actually married and from the few times she spent time with her dad he seemed like a sweet man so she understood that it was nothing of her concern. Plus, when your father offers to put you up for a whole weekend in order to try and make up for all the years wasted you don’t exactly say no.
The plane landed on the frozen lake and moved in position close to a nearby wooden pier that was the only thing that her eyes could see in miles that even resembled human touch and civilisation. This was a total polar opposite for her as she is used to the warm climate and hospitality of the Mediterranean where she was raised by her mother and stepdad. Sara stepped out of the plane and immediately felt the shaving cold wind enter her clothes through every single opening as scarce as they were. She felt her temperature drop from her feet between her toes all the way to her busty E cup chest making her pink nipples harden almost to the point of hurting. It was then that she saw her father’s truck coming to pick her.
As the truck stopped right in front of her and then she heard the door creak open before seeing her father walk out of the car. The only reason Sara was petite and delicate is because she got the genes from her grandma on her father’s side, her father on the other side took after every single gene from his father and his father’s father. Standing at a towering 1.98 the burly, bearded, beast of a man hugged Sara and immediately lifted her off of the ground. “I’ve missed you so much, babygirl” he said in his deep voice while Sara melted from the paternal affection she always wanted to feel. They put her stuff inside his truck and immediately rode off deeper in the mountains. Sara was mesmerised by the natural beauty that she was witnessing but her father could not take his eyes off of her. “I can’t wait to do all the stuff I should have done all these years ago” he said and Sara melted again, she finally had the father she craved.
They arrived at his isolated cabin in the heart of the frozen mountain and set her things up in the spare bedroom. “Wow daddy I can’t believe you actually live here all by yourself” she exclaimed. “Yeah some times it makes me crave another human’s touch, especially a woman’s.” He replied.
Sara not thinking much of what her father just said stripped down to a tight pair of light grey leggings that now had a couple large dark sweat spots between her thighs and on her butt, a tanktop that hugged her bursting bosom and tiny pink ankle socks. Her father tried his best to hide it and supress it but the hormone-rich musk emanating from his own daughter’s sweaty body was the first time he was smelling a woman in almost a decade. Her scent combined with the sight of watching a petite, busty, blonde 29 year old prance around your home in clothes that leave little to the imagination are enough to drive anyone insane, let alone a father who has spent most of his life suppressing his violent and downright incestuous urges towards his own daughter. “You look nothing like that cunt of a mother of yours.” He said with a deep almost gravelly voice “You remind me of my mum, your grandma” he added before Sara could even react to what he had just said. She felt the threatening undertone in his voice as the vibe of the room suddenly shifted. “Haha, you guys never really got along well, eh?” she said awkwardly as her father slowly lowered a gigantic piece of wood in front of only door that the cabin had.
“No, we never did but thankfully I don’t see her in you at all so I have a feeling we’re going to have a great time you and I” her father said as he was now walking, menacingly, towards her. Sara took a couple steps back only to be stopped dead in her tracks by a large cold wooden wall. “Come on, babygirl, don’t make this difficult” he said as he started to caress her neck and cleavage, pulling one of her succulent and full breasts out of her sweaty white tanktop and giving her cold nipple a passionate suck. “What the hell are you doing? Stop touching me!” She cried out in confusion as she desperately tried to get his cold, rough, hands to stop groping her all over her body. He squeezed her exposed breast harder and with tears in her eyes she started punching and kicking to no avail. He grabbed her by her hair and threw her over the large coffee table of the main room knocking down the candles and glasses of water that were once on it before her body ended up on the ground in front of the fireplace. The impact knocked the wind out of her lungs and everything became a little hazy for her as she realised that she hit her head and face on the floor pretty hard. It was then that she felt the slightly cold air of the cabin touch the tight opening of her pink hairless slit as her father had roughly pulled down her leggings and panties, tearing them up, and was now spreading her open trying to take in all the aroma of his daughter’s painfully spread open holes. His belt buckle hit the floor as he kicked her legs open. Sara once again pointlessly tried to resist but her father weighed at least twice as much as her so there was nothing she could do to stop him. She cried and cried and screamed at the top of her lungs but there was no soul in sight for miles, they were all alone and deep down she knew it. Suddenly, she felt it. Her father’s cock was bigger than anything she had ever had inside her. She wasn’t sexually adventurous and it showed as her tiny vibrator and her boyfriend’s painfully average cock had done little to nothing to prepare her hole for the veiny monstrosity that her father’s cock was. In one motion he forced his bulging cock head all the way inside her now torn open cunt bottoming out hard against her bruised cervix as she could feel her vulva stretching beyond tearing and her vaginal walls turning inside out almost as if her whole vagina would prolapse with each backwards stroke of her father’s swollen cock.
“Fuck, I can smell your cunt from here” he moaned to himself as he continued to violate his daughter’s vagina but it was hard to hear over Sara’s gut-wrenching screams and cries. He continued to mercilessly bash Sara’s cervix and every thrust tore her vaginal walls more and more in order to force her to accommodate his cock. He could feel the silky walls of her vagina caress the tip of his cock stroke by stroke as he violently pounded his daughter’s cunt while spreading her cheeks hard, almost as if he was purposely trying to tear her apart. Suddenly he pulled out, his cock now a shade between pink and red from all the blood the destruction of his daughter’s hole had brought out. “My god Sara, we wouldn’t want to get you all knocked up now, would we?” he said while shoving almost all of his fingers inside her “You’re so fucking soft inside, babygirl” he exclaimed while roughly rubbing her clitoris with his thumb and trying to feel her cervix for its opening with his other four fingers causing her more pain than pleasure.
Sara just cried and cried as she was lying on the cold floor of his cabin in the middle of nowhere with her once tight vagina now violently torn into a gaping, dripping, swollen, bloody mess of a hole violently shaking and trying to close her legs while suffering a breakdown. You didn’t have to look hard inside her to notice her swollen and bruised cervix and it was because he had felt it that her father decided not to empty his swollen balls against it as he could tell she was ovulating from smelling her.
Her father walked to the kitchen counter and grabbed a large, half drank, bottle of beer and downed most of it in one go, Sara saw the opportunity and tried to make a run for it leaving countless drops of blood behind her almost like the form of tracks a wounded animal would leave when running away from a predator. Unfortunately for her, she had forgot the large piece of wood that was now blocking what was the only thing separating her and tens of thousands of miles of frozen landscape. He grabbed her by the hair again and brought her face against his cock that was still wet by the wet mixture of her cunt juice and blood that was forced to come out of her pussy. “Suck it” he said but she started to scream and cry uncontrollably while trying to clench her mouth shut. With his second hand he slapped her face mercilessly almost knocking her unconscious before forcing her jaw to open and sending his swollen cockhead all the way down her throat. The sound coming from his daughter sounded like something straight out of a horror film as it was now a combination of crying, screaming and gagging uncontrollably as she was struggling desperately to fight back against his cock that was forcing her to vomit the little food and milk she had on her way there. No man had ever been that deep inside her pussy or mouth but the truth was that at least she had willingly used those holes in the past to pleasure her boyfriend. When her father pulled out of her torn up vagina deep inside she knew what was coming up next, he would attempt to do the same thing to her asshole. Josh, her boyfriend, had been pestering her about fucking her in the ass for years now but the answer was always “no” as she felt that it was something dirty and degrading for her; That was about to change. Sara’s father yanked her head by her hair and left her to gasp for air while ropes and ropes of thick spit and vomit dripped down her chin and onto her breasts. She tried to speak but all that was coming out were loud burps and heaving. Her dad let go of her hair causing her to fall face down on the piece of wood. He grabbed his belt off the floor and used it to tie her long blonde hair together with her arms behind her back giving him the perfect handle to brutalise her sore throat even more by rendering her torso immobile. He grabbed the belt and her hair tightly and once again rammed his cock balls deeps into her mouth, with his other hand now free he closed her nose causing her face to turn from bright red to almost a pale blue due to the asphyxiation while the poor daughter kept churning more and more of her stomach contents. Right before she felt that she was going to pass out he let go of her nose. Sara eagerly tried to catch her breath ignoring what her father’s free hand was doing, suddenly she felt something cold and thin against the gaping opening of her abused vagina. It was then that her dad shoved the beer bottle as deep as he could once again causing Sara to frantically scream and make more gut-wrenching sounds of desperation while choking on his cock, her cunt now torn open once more.
He started to rhythmically push on the bottom of the bottle as he was trying to force his middle finger in her ass with the fluids that dripped around her holes violently scratching and hurting her virgin hole as a result while the tip of the bottle pummelled her almost broken cervix. Before she could even realise what was going on her father threw her over the arm of the couch and began to lick her asshole. “Mmm you smell so good babygirl” he said as he rubbed her foot while sniffing and licking her ass. He ripped her sock off and gave it a big whiff before beginning to sniff and lick the sole of her foot, aggressively sucking on her toes. With each breath, inhaling more and more of her foot’s intoxicating vinegary smell, with each lick filling his mouth with the salty flavourful goodness he always craved before finally turning his attention again on the next hole he would violate. Sara once again tried to protest but it was futile, her father grabbed the back of her head and pushed it in the cushion of the couch with all his weight while with his other hand he held his cock and began to force it inside Sara’s virgin asshole. “Even your feet smell amazing you dumb fucking whore. Can’t you see you were made for me to use?” He felt her sphincter cling on his cock and resist the force he was applying before eventually giving in and letting his engorged cockhead through while she began to let out muffled screams and sounds that didn’t sound human anymore. More and more of his gigantic cock was forced in her broken asshole as each violent thrust would tear Sara’s ass more and more just like it did to her busted cunt. The sheer size of his member pushed the beer bottle out of her cunt from the inside causing it to fall on the floor while her pink hole made queefing sounds and she began to lose control of her bladder creating a huge puddle of piss and bodily fluids with splashes of leftover beer as they dripped from her vagina underneath her. “You really weren’t ready for anal” He said slapping her ass raw and almost bloody as he felt his cock push against the mass deep in her intestines. His cock tearing her ass into a filthy bloody mess just like her cunt with an off-yellow liquid mixture of blood, shit and other fluids running down his balls, her pussy and her thighs more and more with each deep stroke. Sara still choking on her spit and vomit from earlier tried to once again scream for someone to help but it was pointless. She had got herself in a situation where the only thing she could do was hope to pass out to stop the pain she was feeling.
“You’re going to drain daddy’s balls with that dirty fucking shithole of yours, baby” her father moaned as the tearing and borderline burning sensation in her ass made Sara sob harder and louder and then suddenly he drove the whole thing as deep as he possibly could and Sara began to feel his cock pulsing uncontrollably as he shot load after load deep inside her guts, deeper than any man had ever been. He pulled out and spread his daughter’s holes as wide as he could causing more pain and damage in the process and allowing the soiled filthy load of cum he shot deep in her ass to drip into her gaping fertile cunt “Looks like your breeding hole wanted some after all!” He laughed to himself, looking at Sara letting out one final loud cry before almost passing out and rolling down on the ground bordering a state of unconsciousness as her now destroyed holes were making all sorts of sounds while her father’s seed flowed out of her. He sat in front of her messy face and spread her eyelids open trying to get her attention to prevent her from drifting off completely “Time to clean your filthy ass off my cock” he told her softly before closing her nose again to make her gasp for air and shoving his semi-flaccid cock in her mouth. He thrusted in and out of her mouth causing her to gag uncontrollably while roughly shoving his fingers in both of her holes before wiping the dirty fluids off his fingers on her hips and tanktop making sure to pinch her nipple hard. When he finally had enough he stood up and left her right there in front of the fireplace with a puddle of filth around each and every one of her holes, her eyes once again drifting as she finally fell unconscious.
“Goodnight, babygirl. I’ll see you tomorrow”.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/hokcya/goodnight_babygirl_ill_see_you_tomorrow_original
Can’t say which version was better because I enjoyed both, but I did like that there were more details this time around.