i need an opinion on this smut i’m working on!

i’m currently writing a teacher/student smut, but i’m wondering if i should start the smut in the beginning of the story where they meet in a bar, unknown of each other’s status and they fuck there and meet each other the next day in the classroom or…

the smut is added later on as the relationship progresses between the teacher and student.

anyways, let me know what you think! also i’m sorry if i’m not suppose to post stuff like this on here.

Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/gozv9m/i_need_an_opinion_on_this_smut_im_working_on

4 comments

  1. Personally, I’d love to escalate things slowly with lots of mutual attention, teasing and tension before anything actually happens. Then the bar thing might still happen. That’s at least what I’d find realistic from my perspective as a teacher.

  2. Start in the classroom and end in the bar. Have them meet sophomore year of college. Year of sexual tension. Then they just happen to “bump” into each other at the bar.

  3. Start in the classroom and end in the bar. Have them meet sophomore year of college. Year of sexual tension. Then they just happen to “bump” into each other at the bar.

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