Hey Reddit! This is my first time writing a full piece of erotica, and it’s mostly unedited. Any feedback is greatly appreciated!
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Your hand hesitates for a second, an inch away from the door.
*Is this really happening?* You think. *And is this a good idea? Nah, fuck it. I’m probably never gonna get an opportunity like this again.*
You tap your hand gently on the door. No going back now.
A soft and familiar voice rings from inside the apartment.
“Enter!”
The door swings open as you push gently. A figure stands silhouetted in the moonlight shining through the apartment window. You can’t see her very clearly yet, but you can tell who it was without even thinking
“…Sasha….”
The name escapes your lips, and I turn towards you. “Come on in! Just because I have all night doesn’t mean you should waste time!” I say with a giggle and a smile.
Your mild kicks into overdrive as you take a few steps inside, closing the door behind you. The only light is the moon shining in through the floor to ceiling windows stretching across the far wall. Your eyes dart over my body, taking in every detail of the girl in front of you.
We were great friend back in highschool, and you had a crush on me for several years, but could never say anything. I would hang out with you almost every day after school, go to parties, stay up late watching movies, but nothing more. Less than a year after we graduated, you finally caught on. I was really into you, too. Alas, it was too late, or so you thought…
A few messages on Snapchat was all it took to reunite, and finally take care of what we had both been longing for all these years.
I’m wearing that same purple hoodie you could recognize from a mile away, unzipped, revealing that I’m wearing nothing but a sports bra underneath. Your eyes drift down to my skirt, which only extends a few inches past my waist. Your gaze slips down again, onto my thighs, onto the fishnet stockings I’d catch you stealing a glance at every so often.
*Snap! Snap!* “Oi! You! Ya there?” I’m standing inches in front of you. Every detail…. Right in front of you…I’m saying something to you with a suggestive smile, but you can’t understand it…
“I’ll take that as a yes, then!” Before you can react, I reach upwards and grab onto your face, pulling it towards mine. My hands are soft and warm, just as you’d imagined them.
The instant my lips touch yours, you feel a jolt, like a bolt of electricity, snapping you back to reality. You taking in every last drop of the moment.
I pull away, my eyes have a deep glow to them, dark with intense arousal as I gaze deep into your eyes, grinning. “Come with me”
I lead you over to the couch. Normally if would have a beautiful view of the city, hundreds of thousands of people living their own lives, lit by sodium vapor lamps as they rushed from store to store, hotel to hotel, car to car, bus to bus.
But now was not the time to enjoy the view, or at least not the one out the window. You had a view of your own, better than any metropolis could ever provide. You find yourself sitting down on the couch, slightly reclined, and I sit down on your lap, straddling your legs in the “W” sitting position.
We lean together, your hand on the small of my back, my hand on the back of the couch, propping myself up as I lean into your kiss.
You feel my other hand reach slowly down to your groin area, right in front of mine. It drifts down to your button and fly, undoing them both as if on its own, without thought. As my hand slips into your pants, you flinch as I touch what you’ve been holding back, twitching as I rub gently through your underwear.
I shift my body slightly, reaching under me to grab onto your waistband, lowering it, my heart pounding so loudly you can almost hear it. You feel every twitch, every movement of my body’s excitement as I grind gently on your cock, straining against your underwear as I press my lips harder on yours, rubbing your chest and back…
I pull my lips away from yours, a string hangs between our mouths, quivering as I breathe heavily. “This– I….” I stammer. “I’m nervous as hell, I can’t do this alone. You need to take some initiative, too.” I take your hand, placing it on my chest. My tits feel soft and warm, even under my sports bra, my pulsing heartbeat pounding against your hand as you give a gentle rub and a squeeze…
I blush deeply, my face turning scarlet even in the dim moonlight.“Go on… take it off…”
You reach your other hand up, fingers shaking with excitement, grabbing the zipper running down the middle with one hand, and the hem on top with the other. Your fingers brush my bare skin, warm, soft, and supple beneath your touch. You pull down on the zipper slowly, until you reach the end. One tug and the front of my bra splits open, the straps sliding down over my shoulders.
And there they are, twinkling in the moonlight, just inches away. Soft, smooth, rounded, a small nipple poking out, from each. Your hand, as if on it’s own, reaches forward and cups my left breast, the nipple sliding between your middle and ring finger as you massage it slowly.
I shift forwards placing my hands on your shoulders. You close your eyes, taking in the feeling of my right breast brushing up against your cheek as you give the left nipple a little pinch. I let out a small squeak, my body growing heavier on your lap.
You feel movement again as I begin to grind against your cock this time. Your lips touch the nipple of my right breast, your tongue swirling around. I let out a little moan as my back arches.
“Ohhhh… that feels sooooo goood…” As I grind, I reach my free hand down to the two areas rubbing against each other. It grabs the hem of your underwear, pulling down until your cock pops out, then reaching to my own panties, pulling them off the the side.
As I hold the shaft in my hand, I rock my hips forward and backwards, rubbing the lips up and down. Now it’s your turn to moan, a long, deep sigh that breaks your focus on my breasts, as your head tips back slightly.
I take the opportunity to lean in again, this time tilting my head off center to kiss you again. Both of us moan together as I tease the the head of your penis against my clitoris. The intense heat radiating from my vagina is enough to make your cock throb. I lean forwards even farther, lifting my hips up again, your cock in my hand, the tip touching my entrance. The heat is almost unbearable, and you have to concentrate on controlling the growing pressure deep behind your penis…
“Wait, Sasha! Shouldn’t we u—”
I cut you off without hesitation. “I’m on the pill, and I’ve been saving myself just for you. there’s nothing to worry about”
I pull back, grinning. My body lowers, and your cock is enveloped in the slick, pulsing walls of my pussy. The heat is overpowering, you clench your teeth, trying, and failing to suppress a gasp and a moan. It’s tight, too, way to tight…
*There’s no way… it’s far too soon for this.*
“Woahhh, Ha! That’s a face I like to see! You were a virgin, too, right? Don’t be ashamed, even if you cum after like, thirty seconds, that only makes of hotte—ohhh!” My own taunting is cut off by a moan of pleasure as I rock my hips back and forth. My vagina, clamped tightly around your cock, throbs, hard, squeezing down even tighter.
*30 seconds? At this rate, I won’t make it another fifteen!*
Your body shudders in pleasure, and you begin to panic. “Sasha! I–” Your body shudders, and you try to push me away, grabbing my hips, you try to lift me off, your legs squirming, desperate. “This is too much, I need– I– gonna cum if you keep on doing this!” I pause for a second, hot, slick liquid dribbling out of my pussy, sliding down the shaft, dripping onto your balls. I look at you in surprise, and I flinch in ecstasy as my my pussy squeezes harder around the tip.
“Don’t you fucking *DARE!!!*” I hiss, slamming my hips down, grabbing your hand, pushing, it against my breasts, locking lips, with you again, grinding even harder than before.
“Cum if you need to, but I’m gonna cum too, and you’re not gonna take that away from me, got it?”
My words only add to the intense pressure. It’s a losing battle, it’s just too much to hold back any longer!
You inhale sharply, concentrating on holding back, but there’s no going back now. Ten seconds at best.
“Oh, fuck. Sasha! Oh, no, *no no no Sasha please!*”
You feel my body shaking, breasts pressing against your chest, your rapid breathing has turned into moans. My vaginal walls throb around you as I press down, grinding harder and faster. Hot. Intense.
Nothing else exists in your mind as your body gives in.
The orgasm hits you like a train hitting a stalled car. You saw it from a ways away, you thought it was okay, that you could hold out, but all of a sudden, it’s right there. Barreling towards you, an unstoppable force, carrying it with you, as you sit there, entirely at the mercy of nobody.
“Ah! Holy, fuck, Sasha! Oh, *Shit!”* You writhe underneath me as you pump spurt after spurt of your cum deep inside of me.
“Oh god, I can *feel that, oh fuckfuckfuckFUCK!* Ahhhh! I’m cumming too!” My entire body throbs, your cock pinned inside me as you moan, cumming harder than ever. You lean forwards, taking my breast in your mouth again, sucking on one nipple, fondling the other.
“No, no, Haaahh… Don’t do that, it’s too sensitive! *Augh!* No, please!” It’s time for your revenge. Your other hand reaches back behind me, cupping my ass, giving it a squeeze, pushing up, rocking your own hips, pressing your still cumming cock deeper, reaching around, to your clitoris…
A gentle rub is all it takes to send me careening over the edge. My eyes, close, I flush bright pink.
“You asshole…” I say through clenched teeth as my back arches reflexively.
I collapse uncontrollably onto you, falling onto your chest, clutching your shoulders to hold myself up. You feel the heat radiating off of my body as I go limp, my orgasm finally subsiding.
A few minutes pass, and I continue sitting there with your cock still in me. Even as it grows flaccid, I lay on top of you, breathing heavily, the sweet smell of pheromones radiating from my body.
It takes you a few minutes to realize that I’ve fallen asleep from exhaustion. Smiling in my sleep, I whisper your name…
You lift my body off of yours, your cock popping out with a surprisingly loud and wet sound. You watch, awestruck as cum dribbles out of my vagina, and onto your stomach.
You find a blanket, not too difficult due to the them scattered about the living room. It takes a little effort to wrap me up like a burrito, but not too difficult. Sitting down next to me as I lie there asleep, you lift up my head, placing it on your lap. I let out a sigh, you feel movement. You look down to see me smiling, gazing out the window, at the city, 69 stories below.
“It’s beautiful, isn’t it?”
“Yeah…”
Your breathing slows as you realize how exhausted you are, giving into the temptation of sleep.
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