“The hostess was fawning over Michael and I rolled my eyes watching her flirt with him in front of me and making sure to unbutton her shirt revealing her big boobs”
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Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/g6jlvn/underneath_my_stepdaughter
I couldn’t get through the first paragraph. Did the writer proofread it at all?