First erotic scene. Want feedback. (Sorry it is very long). #eroticmassage #vacationsex

Jenny wakes up with a smile on her face. Although she is alone in her bed, she still feels the warmth she feels when she is with Jerry. Internally she compares how her body feels to ‘runner’s high’ as every inch of feels this euphoric buzz. She has only known this man for 24 hours. This behavior is not like her. “I’m going to steer into this, and we will see what happens”
Jenny mentally switches gears to her first full day in Bali. She woke up 10 minutes earlier than scheduled. She has planned a full itinerary for the girls. Even a Plan A and a Plan B in the event is raining. She scrambles for her phone to see if the forecasted storm stayed to the south like she had hoped just as a clap of thunder rang from outside her window.
She quickly gets scrambles to the window of her beach side room. The weather geek inside her loves to watch thunderstorms. She knows this complicates her itinerary, but she is relishing in this opportunity to enjoy a cup of coffee and watch a storm over the Indian Ocean. She also givers herself the mental note that she can enjoy java bean coffee in such close proximity of the island of java!
As she starts the coffee maker, the door bell to their suite rings. She scrambles for her robe thinking that Katie must have gotten Starbucks delivered to their room. She looks out the peep hole and it looks a resort employee is outside with room service.
“It isn’t like Katie to break away from my itineraries and order room service, what could this possibly be”. She opens the door quickly out of curiosity.
“Excuse me, but we didn’t order room service,” she says to the man in the hallway. The man slowly nods with a smirk on his face and delivers a folded note to her.
“Compliments of Mr. Jerry Jackson, Miss. Shall I enter with the food?” the employee asked waiting for Jenny’s approval.
Jenny folds open the note and reads “sorry to intrude upon your itinerary, but I didn’t want to wait until tonight to see you again. I took the liberty of upgrading the girls’ massages to full-service spa memberships. They will be ok. After you enjoy your meal, you’ll learn more about the plans I have for us”.
Jenny finishes reading and waves the man in with her hand. He asks if Natalie and Katie could join them in the living room for a surprise.
Jenny knocks on their doors and says room service is here and that they need to come out quickly.
Katie shouts back “I thought we were doing brunch on the beach this morning”?
Jenny yells back “look at the window, Kate. I called an audible. Now get your ass out here!”
All three girls are now standing in the living room with an immaculate spread of breakfast in front of them. The resort employee holds two envelopes in his hand and says, “Natalie and Katie, your massages for later this morning have been upgraded to full-service passes at our spa. The details can be found in the envelopes. Please, enjoy your meal and we will see downstairs in 1 hour.”
Katie shrieks with joy, “SPA DAY…Jenny how long can I spend in the spa?”
Jenny didn’t know how to answer this. This is an unusual feeling for her, not knowing what is going to happen. In attempt to take back some control of her day, “We are going to meet back here at 2pm”.
The girls sit down and enjoy their meal together. Natalie is a much better mood now that she has gotten a full night sleep, and Katie is happy to have enjoyed a wild first night in Bali. They are happy to be sharing this moment together as best friends.
As she dishes her portion of scrambled eggs onto her plate, Jenny looks over to Katie, “sooo…how was Elliott last night.”
“Was that his name?!”, Katie says making an intentional shocked face with her mouth in a “O’ shape.
Natalie throws a pen at Katie and said “You did not have sex last night,” feeling slightly sorry for herself internally but still enjoying the moment with her girls.
“Uh yeah I did!”, Katie shrieks and the girls laugh together.
Jenny takes a bite of her waffles cherishing the moment with her friends. She analyzes the situation and realizes that Jerry’s plan isn’t going to intrude on her time with her friends. She reiterates to herself that she is ok with this. Not knowing what will happen excites her.
They finish eating breakfast and they get ready for their spa day. Jenny doesn’t know how to get ready. She walks to her phone and has a text from Jerry. It is a picture message. The text is a picture of massage table in his condo. It read: “Don’t be jealous of your friends’ schedule. You’ll be getting your own private massage”.
Jenny lost her breath. She was ready for private time with Jerry.
The girls walked to the hotel lobby and Natalie and Katie entered the spa. Jenny noticed a man in a tuxedo holding a sign that says “Jenny”. Jenny sheepishly walks up to him and says “Umm..I’m Jenny”, while raising her hands.
“Right this way, Miss”, the chauffer said. They walk out to the black Lincoln and the chauffer opens the backdoor for Jenny. She steps in. She giddily awaits her arrival at Jerry’s place. The short 5-minute ride to his condo felt like an eternity. The driver pulls the car up to the curb in front of Jerry’s garage. Jerry watches from his master-bedroom window as Jenny steps out of the Lincoln. He rushes to greet her.
“Bienvenue chez moi, ma dame”, he says with both arms open preparing for her embrace.
“Your French is still terrible”, Jenny teases as she playfully pushes him in the chest. Then she grabs his shirt and pulls him in for a hello kiss. She stands on her tip toes and leans in. Jerry takes her cue and placed his left hand behind her head and his right hand on the small of her back. They sink into their kiss. All of Jenny’s defenses fall away when she’s in his arms.
Jerry leads her to the front door. Jenny is excited to hear about this condo that she heard about from Katie last night. Both are eager for what’s to come so Jerry gives a very abbreviated tour of his upper level to Jenny.
The massage table is set up downstairs in his living area and the outer wall is closed. They have all the privacy they need. Jerry has lit candles around the massage table and is playing soft soothing music. Jerry suggests that she gets comfortable on the table.
Jenny takes off of t-shirt and is wearing a white sleeveless wife-beater underneath. She isn’t wearing a bra. She then takes off her sweatpants and is wearing white cotton panties underneath. Jerry walks over to the microwave and begins heating the massage oil.
Jenny lays down on her stomach on the massage table, taking in the moment for herself. She’s never gotten a sensual massage for a man she was interested in romantically. She does not know what will happen next, but can’t wait for what will happen next.
Jerry walks over with a bowl of massage oil. He puts it down on the counter next to the massage table. “Would you like to do some stretches first?” He asks. Jenny, not knowing what to expect agrees.
“Sit cross-legged facing that direction”, he commands and Jenny quickly follows his commands.
Jerry comes behind Jenny and puts his firm hands on her triceps adjusting her alignment. He then takes her right arm and holds it over her head, Jenny looks up at him with smile.
“What is he doing to me,” she wonders to herself.
Jerry is kneeling behind her as she sits cross-legged facing away from him. His left hand now rests on her neck and he presses her head downward while gently pulling her right arm behind her head. His left hand quickly takes her right arm and holds her wrist. Jerry’s right arm now reaches down her right side and slowly slides up to her rib cage. Jenny melts into his hands.
“Oh my god this is so hot,” she internalizes what is happening and bites her lip.
Jerry is ready to switch arms. He pushes her head down in the opposite direction and lifts her left arm above her. Repeating the exactly same step to the other side of her body. Jerry analyzes her body and thinks to himself, “she is a little tense. I need to get her to fully relax”.
“Breathe in and count to four,” he directs as his left-hand presses on her left oblique muscle. Jenny obliges. Jerry finds a not between her neck and right shoulder and gently kneads it in circles. She looks down and breathes out deeply.
“when does he want me to get naked. How long is he going to tease me with a real massage?” her mind is still racing with many questions about what is happening.
Jerry then asks her to connect her hands above her head and places his palms underneath her elbows. His knees now held her posture in line and straight. Jenny leans backwards and can feel his erection in his pants. She smiles to herself. She knows this is going to end in sex and her uncertainties slip away into nothingness.
Jerry dips her down to her left and Jenny feels her back gently crack and your right-side muscles stretch. Again, on the other side. Now Jerry asks her to raise both hands into the air. Her holds both of her wrists with each hand and firmly slides his hands down her arms to her shoulders and down the sides of her body. Jenny followed his right hand with her eyes.
After this, Jerry asks if she can take her top off and lay on her stomach as he walks over to get the oil. Jenny quickly takes off her top and throws it on the floor. Jerry sneaks a peak in his peripheral vision to see her perky tits bounce and she releases them from her shirt. Her left nipple is all he can see at this angle and it is standing erect, waiting to receive the proper attention it deserves.
Jenny’s hair in pig tails and out the way. She lays down topless on the massage table and adjusts her panties to make her ass look sexier.
Jerry suggest that she should take off her panties too. Jenny quickly pulls them down with her rand hand and she adjusts back up to her side to the take them off down to her feet. Her ass pointing right at Jerry he sees everything between her legs and he can hardly wait to please his lady.
Jenny hands her white panties to Jerry and he takes it in his hand and folds them and places them on her sweatpants. Jerry comes back with a soft white towel and places it over her buttocks. Jerry knows the towel is more convenient to remove when things get heated, but still provides anticipation for what is to come. Jenny is confused as to why he’s putting clothes on her.
“This is the first time a man covered me back up when I got naked. Does he like my body?!”, she began to worry.
“I’ll get back to this soon”, he says comforting her. She smiles with her head pressed down into the table. This is the most erotic experience of her life and it’s only just beginning.
With her towel in place, Jerry grabs the bowl of oil and stands and her head. He grabs her arms that were dangling over the side of the table and lays them by her side and gently traces her chocolate skin back to her head.
Jerry forcefully rubs his hand together to make sure his hands are warm and firmly presses down on her shoulder. Jenny seemingly melts into the table in complete bliss.
Jerry know presses both hands on her back four centimeters above the towel. His fingers move down to the side of her body on each side moving in this circular motion on her back. He pours the oil from the bowl over her entire bare back and gently rubs his hands over her slick and soft skin. He hands gently running up down her arms and back.
Jerry straddles Jenny’s head so he can reach her entire back. Jenny can’t help but imagine how close she is to Jerry’s penis. But she sits there and waits for her turn.
Jerry works the side of her back with both hands and grazes her side-boob and Jenny breathes deeply feeling his strong hands touch even the side of her chest.
Jerry starts back at her shoulders and slowly moves his hands down her back and finally moves under the towel. Bringing the oil to her ass he grabs both cheeks firmly and then rushes his hands back up her spine.
He moves the towel down to where her legs meet waist, exposing her naked bottom again to Jerry. He pours oil directly onto her backside and Jenny sighs in ecstasy.
He takes both of his eager hands and spreads the oil over upper thighs and gently squeezes her perfect. Jerry can’t believe a woman with such a sweet, cute and lovable personality has such a sexy body. He continues to admire and examine every inch of her body.
Jenny lays her head sideways in the head-hole of the massage table as Jerry again straddles her head with his knees beside her head on the massage table. She enjoys watching Jerry’s leg muscles flex as he stretches over her naked body. Her eyes travel up to Jerry’s short white athletic shorts and the bulge going down the side of his leg. Her lips open and she breathes in deeply.
“When will little Jerry come out to play,” she wonders. He begins to massage closer to where her lower butt, legs and vagina intersect with both hands. His fingers touch her pink vagin for the first time and they firmly stroke back up to her curvy backside.
Jenny gasps when oil is poured directly onto her lady bits. She knows Jerry’s fingers will soon follow and anticipates the pleasure. Both hands delve deep between her legs and spread the massage oil over every surface area of Jenny’s sweet pussy. His hands circle back to her inner thighs and back up to her backside. He continues to tease her with these circles teasing Jenny with only gradual touches of pleasure.
Jerry takes his right hand up her right thigh and slowly squeezes her leg with his thumb and middle finger on the way back to her lower back. Jenny lifts her pelvis when his hands are near where he wants him to touch.
Jerry smiles every time she lifts her body towards his fingers. “I’m going to continue to tease her for a little bit longer”. Jerry stands up to her side and puts his hand under her vagina, placing his hand her lower stomach and gently lifts her midsection off the table firmly pressing his forearm between her legs. He takes his hand back and her body falls back down the few centimeters back to the massage table.
Jenny pleads in her mind for him to stop the teasing and focus only on her dripping-wet vagina.
Jerry asks her to flip over on her back. He places a towel under her head as Jenny rolls over exposing her breasts completely to Jerry for the first time. Jerry gulps and his heart skips a beat at the site of her beauty.
Jenny’s C-cup breasts sit atop her dark sexy stomach. Her vagina is adorned with well-trimmed pubic on top while the rest is waxed cleanly. She has small and dark brown nipples, the size of a chick pea with big areolas with a circumference of the size of a wine glass, degrading from dark brown in the center to the chocolate brown until it matches the rest of her silky soft skin.
Jerry eagerly pours oil over her chest and rubs them with his hands. He rubs circles around her erect nipples with both hands finally touching them. Jerry’s exhilarated over the sexiness of her body. “Your body is perfect,” he says to her and Jenny is comforted to know he’s into her body. He stands next to her body on her right side still.
His hands spread the oil down onto her stomach and down to the front of her legs. As he moves past her lady garden one more time, Jenny grabs his wrist and looks at him. The stare at each other for a moment and she says “Please! Now!”.
Jerry obliges and both hands jump at the chance to give Jenny the pleasure she craves. Jerry’s left hand reaches over her and slowly touches the top part of Jenny’s vagina, but isn’t ready to touch her clitoris just yet. His right hand focuses on the entire outer lips.
“She is so wet,” Jerry says to himself as his left hand finally touches her clitoris and Jenny moans for the first time out loud. Jerry smiles and is excited to continue.
His right middle-finger and ring-finger are held tightly together and the fingertips together burrow towards the entrance of her tight hole. Jerry’s eyebrows raise and how perfect she feels on the inside. Jenny continues with a soft whimper with each slow thrust inside of her. His left hand focuses on rubbing circles on her clitoris.
Jenny is melting into the table in pleasure. She looks back to Jerry’s bulge in his shorts and she reaches over and can touch Jerry’s left leg. She pulls him to stand closer to her and her hands slowly moving up her leg. She feels the tip of his bulge with her fingertips and then reaches up to the base of his shaft to gauge how big it might be.
Jerry continues to give her pleasure but looks back at Jenny and asks, “would you to massage me too?”. Jenny nods eagerly and bites her lip. Jerry smiles and pulls down his shorts and steps out of them. He stands back up as his erection swings up from the momentum. Finally, it stops waving and she admires it for the first time. Nearly 21 centimeters long with a slight upward curve. Jenny covers her mouth in surprise and reaches up with her right hand to touch it for the first time.
Jerry pours oil on his penis while still continuing to finger her with his right hand. She leans up from her seated position to play with his cock and balls with both hands. First, she strokes his dick slowly with her right hand while tickling his balls with her left hand. And then alternating the roles of each of her hands. Finally, both hands stroke his enormous love-stick as if she is worshipping it.
Jerry, while loving the pleasure she is giving him, still knows this is about Jenny’s pleasure. He begins to feel the walls of her vagina contracting. Jenny’s head falls back to the table and her hands grab her pillow to hug it.
Jenny is getting irregular bursts of pleasure in her abdomen, knowing an orgasm is approaching she sinks into to the table. Her muscles begin contracting and her body jolts in pleasure as she begins to lose control of her body. She hugs her pillow tightly with her right hand and her left hand holds her left breast. Her toes curl and she lets out loud moans of pleasure. Jerry fingers her vagina ferociously with short and very rapid strokes, almost quivering-like on her clitoris.
She is about to cum. Her body is about ready to explode like a massive wave going over her entire body. Her abdomen clutches, her back arches and her legs flex. It’s as if her stomach is being sucked into itself. It’s as if her body is a cloud and a powerful wave of honey infused water is tearing through her.
She screams in pleasure as she begins to squirt on the Jerry’s hands and massage table. The feeling of warm, clear liquid exiting her body is very intense against her very sensitive lady parts.
Her orgasm subsides and her muscles stop contracting. Her body falls into a deep state of relaxation. Jerry repositions himself from her side and hops onto the table preparing for sexual intercourse. Jenny is falling into a dream-state and Jerry slaps her pussy with his penis to let her know more pleasure is on its way.
Jenny is still on her back with her legs spread and Jerry positions his knees next to her thighs. His weight is supported by his knees and his butt sits on his feet. He pushes into her for the first time. Jenny’s never experienced such a large penis entering her and it hurts a bit at first. Jerry sees this on her face and slows the pace that he enters her.
He grabs her legs for leverage and continues to thrust into her. Jenny is still in a dream-like post-orgasm state her head falls back to the table. Jerry reaches around her left leg now and plays with her clit with his left hand.
Jenny covers her eyes with both of her hands and then moves them up to her hair as she feels another orgrasm cover over her body.
She can only internalize the word “How” before the process repeats itself. She bearhugs her pillow and screams again.
“Is she cumming again,” Jerry wonders with glee. “I’m not even fucking her that hard yet.”
Jenny’s 2nd orgasm subsides and Jerry pauses to let her catch her breath. He takes this as an opportunity to move into a new position. Jerry lays down on his side next to her on the table. He’s going to fuck her from behind while spooning.
“Oh God! Jenny thinks to herself. He’s going to fuck me while holding me in his arms?! This can’t be happening”. She lifts her head back and says to Jerry “fuck me hard and hug me tightly in this position.”
“My pleasure, Jenny”, he says as he stuffs her pussy with his dick.
He reaches around with his right arm and puts it on her left shoulder, and his left arm on her right shoulder, essentially making an X. He pulls her body back to his body. She feels every inch of their skin touching each other and his well-toned arms wanting her, needing her. Jenny has never felt such intense intimacy from a lover. This is most erotic moment of her life.
He thrusts wildly into her. Jerry can’t believe the physical connection they share. He isn’t controlled with thoughts of insecurity of worrying about his performance. He only can think of her, how he feels about her, and wanting her to experience as much pleasure and joy as possible.
The intimacy paired with the pleasure for Jenny is too much and orgasm number three is now coming over her body. She grabs Jerry’s hair behind her as cums again. The honey water purifying her entire body of pleasure so pure she has never felt one like this before.
After this climax she is overwhelmed with emotion. She starts to cry from how special this moment has been for her. Jerry realizes this and stops his lovemaking. He asks “Jenny?”, hoping that she is ok.
She turns around to face him as tears gently roll down her cheek. He smiles at her and kisses her forehead. “I just need some time to take this in a process this. This has been a perfect morning and I have such a deep connection with you emotionally and physically.”
“Its ok,” Jerry says as he hugs her close and she rests her head on his chest. He softly rubs her back with his hands.
“Please tell me you’ve never had a connection like this with another woman,” she asks almost scared of how he might answer.
Jerry grabs lifts her chin so she looks at him and says “this is the best sexual experience of my life. Giving you this pleasure has been the most enjoyable and meaningful sex of my life”. Jenny smirks and an evil look enters her eyes.
“Until now,” she says as she pushes Jerry onto his back. “I’m going to give you the same experience you gave me”, as she climbs on top of Jerry’s muscular body.
Jerry still has his massive erection waiting for Jenny to position herself onto him. She slowly sits down on him and says jokingly “I feel like you’re impaling me right now. You are so massive”. Jenny is half telling the truth, but also stroking his ego knowing that men love penis-worship. They laugh together.
Jenny begins bouncing on his dick rapidly using the twerking motion he taught her on the dance floor the night before.
“I’m going to fuck you like this until your big dick explodes”, as she claws his chest. “Don’t you dare hold it in, I want you to cum inside me”, she demands.
She sees his face contorting, so she reaches back and tickles his balls to send his orgasm to higher levels.
“Ohhhh Jenny”, he yells as he shoots his load deep into Jenny’s vagina. Jenny loves that Jerry shouted her name as he orgasmed into her. She gives slow bounces as his orgasm finalizes.
She lifts herself off his now half-flaccid penis. And she gives Jerry a big hug. Their legs are entwined together as they hug side-by-side.
“That was amazing,” Jerry said to her. “Everything about is amazing.”

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