The Night Dawn met Amanda — First attempt at writing

You weren’t going to go out… No, but I convinced you to attend this soirĂ©e, and now as you stand amidst the suits and ties, linked to stilettos and double D’s, overhearing the typical yawn of boring business talk around you, your green eyes scan the crowd intently… looking for something to distract your attention, something to excite you once again, something to make your life full-filled and meaningful once more, something like me, but just a little different.

You feel a strong hand across your tummy, although the touch familiar, you still jump a little as my lips reach your earlobe, I whisper “sorry I’m late Kitty Cat” Placing my other hand on your lower back I turn you towards me ever so slowly. My beard oil, after shave, and cologne mix to make a beautiful bouquet of aroma that entices you closer to me. I kiss you softly at first, and you taste the mint I must have been chewing, then deeper as I feel you melt into my arms.

As I finish up our kiss with a final loving peck, I ask if you quietly if you would like a drink, “wine” you reply, and I excuse myself for a moment, making sure to touch and squeeze that glorious ass of yours as I pass by. You return to scanning the room intently with those beautiful dragon eyes I love so much. Still nothing catching your eyes until…

You see her across the room, Tall, blonde, perfect tits and body, confidence to blow anyone away, with a red dress that grabs her physique in all the right ways, your heart flutters and you look away for a moment, but have to look back, and drink in her beauty once more. The elegance of her movements make you hot downstairs, you feel the warmth starting in your belly. You feel your labia becoming moist… You jump again as I return, and hand you your glass of red wine in a nice crystal stemmed glass.

“What caught your eye beautiful”, I ask in my sultry tone. You look into my eyes, then look at the lady in Red and back to me with more of a thirst in your eyes than before, you struggle to get the words out at first, but the warmth in you panties is driving you completely now… and you whisper to me, “I want you to get her for me”. “Who” I ask excitedly, as I look into the crowd of people, wandering through the club.

“The blonde in the red dress” you whisper in my ear as you lean closer into me, your hand sliding down the front of my suit to my crotch, you feel I have already started to stir at the thought of you wanting another woman. You had done it before, but not since we had met, and not in the way you wanted it to happen… now was your opportunity, you had to take it, and the excitement was making you tremble inside.

I see her across the room, and the excitement flows through me like an explosion, hitting me like a ton of bricks. I turn my head to you and whisper “my god she’s fabulous Dawn, how do you want this to happen Kitty?” your sultry eyes filling with desire, you look at me and say “I want you to seduce her first, then tell her about me as I watch”. You take my wine from my hand, kiss me ever so lovingly and say, “go get her tiger”, and slowly walk away from me to the corner of the bar where you will be able to sit, and watch me comfortably, as I attempt to woo the lady in red.

I tower over everyone as I make my way through the crowd like a shark in the ocean with a scent of blood on it’s mind. My masculine physique enticing your desire further, you love watching me walk, the confidence I display makes you wet on a regular day, being in a suit and about to seduce an interest of yours, you find it very hard not to explore yourself with your fingers as you watch.

I disappear from your sight for a moment as you intently watch the lady in the red dress make love to the beat of the song playing and it mesmerizes you. The elegance and confidence of her movements tell you she is a dancer, or at least enjoys being watched, this turns you on more and more and you are now slowly lifting your dress for access, the heat pouring from your crotch now, you sigh a breath of pleasure as your finger lightly swipes your clit in passing. You scour the room quickly to ensure no one is watching you, but then again… you think to your self, maybe I want someone to watch me… and keep going without remorse.

I appear again and am heading towards our beautiful blonde. The dance beat finishes, and you watch her as she playfully laughs with her friends, as they begin to leave the dance floor. A new song begins… and now you know exactly where I disappeared to briefly before moving to the dance floor to meet our new acquaintance, and you’re hoping I did exactly what you think…

A soft beat warms the room, the lights dim and become very romantic with a wash of red flowing in the room. A subtle drum and snare beginning, as the synthesizer kicks in you know exactly what song is about to play, it’s Chris de Burghs “Lady in Red” and you have to giggle…. You see it as I catch her eye as she’s walking towards me… *”I’ve never seen you look so lovely as I did tonight”*… she moves to change her direction ever so slightly to avoid running directly into me… *”I’ve never seen you shine so bright”*
…I also side step just in time to lightly touch her hand as we pass, two ships in the night.

She pauses as she grabs the tip of my fingers with hers, I turn slowly and you watch as the two of us meet, almost eye to eye, in the middle of the dance floor, my 6 foot 3 inch frame towering over her, you know everyone is watching us, and this begins to drive you mad with desire, your fingers playing more now, you muffle a moan and remind yourself you must be quiet for a little while longer.

*”I’ve never seen so many men ask you if you want to dance”*… I pull her closer to me and you can see me whisper something in her ear, her hands on the front of my suit she is feeling my muscular physique, and you know she is interested, and your butterflies consume your tummy as her hands move down to my hips… *”there looking for a little romance, given half the chance”*

As I stop whispering, you see a warm and sexy smile wash across her face, she is stunning and almost a perfect 10, you watch as she nods playfully and moves closer to me, her hips begin making love to mine as we sway to the music and explore each others bodies with our hands. …*”I’ve never seen that dress you’re wearing”*…, we are turning slowly in beat, you catch my eyes from across the room, and I smile a devilish grin before smelling her hair, and kissing the nape of her neck as you watch. …*”Or the highlights in your hair, that catch the light”*…

You see her delight, and she increases grinding her tight little body all over me, the warmth and tightness in your belly has you so excited you try to stop playing with yourself for a moment, but it is too late and the gush you experience makes you buckle in your chair, and your legs begin to shake. *”I have been blind”* … you need a moment to catch your breath *”Laaaaaaady in red…”*

Sipping your now almost empty red, watching as the 2 of us flirt and dance the dance of love, you see her move in for the kiss, the cadence of our movements slow a little, but stay completely in unison with each other, you can see she kisses masterfully as she put her tongue in my mouth, my hand raises from her lower back to her neck, under her long hair I hold her head almost lovingly as we explore each other intimately with our lips, tongues and hands.

The anticipation you feel as the song begins to wind down is overwhelming, you can see it’s going really well, you are so turned on right now, and are anxious she might be the one, the one to bring you the joy you have always felt you needed, not more than with me, just in a different way, and a way that is made that much better by being with me while it happens.

The song stops, we are alone in the middle of the dance floor, the quiet between songs is deafening, almost as if the entire room had stopped what they were doing to watch the 2 of us interact, almost as if they had been doing exactly what you were doing while we danced, almost as if this was completely meant to be. We stop kissing and I whisper something in her ear, her face lightens up like the fireworks on the 4th of July and you can see she is visibly excited.

As her mane of blonde hair shuffles with the movement of her head, she quickly scans the room until she meets your eyes, The smile that washes over her face makes you have goose bumps, and you find it hard not to look away, you read her lips as she talks through her smile, “Is that her” she asks me, I look up at you, and without looking away, the 2 of us staring into your eyes from across the room, I whisper in her ear “yes it is, you like?”

She steps back from me a little, turns her head to me and looks up, nodding with a naughty grin she grabs for my hand… turns towards you, and without breaking eye contact and smiling profusely, we make our way across the dance floor towards you. You feel your face flush immediately and are glad the room is dimly lit, you want to hide your embarrassment for a moment, then are reminded it is what you want to be feeling, that feeling of unknowing, that feeling of want and desire that you’ve been missing.

You can tell I am saying something to our lady in red as we are approaching, she is nodding in agreement with whatever I am saying and this is intriguing. She is so close now, you can smell her perfume and it is intoxicating to you, her fantastic body is so exactly what you are desiring, her stunning look is what you have been needing, and now as she approaches, and without a word, she squeezes between your thighs and takes your face with her hands and kisses you deeply and without remorse, the bliss you are feeling has never been matched, you melt a little as she turns her face from left to right while exploring you with her tongue. Completing the kiss, her hands drop to yours, and she encourages you to stand.

You stand and meet her, her crooked sinister smile has you nervously excited, and I return with our coats. As I help you and her with your coats, you look to me and question what is happening with your eyes and without saying a word, I smile and wink without responding, I know what you are asking, and I know you are going to love what is going to happen, and I know telling you would reduce the excitement and surprise, so I stay silent and allow the lady in red to dictate your movements as we walk across the dance floor to the exit. You almost don’t notice the jealous eyes you are receiving from both the male and female patrons of the bar, as everyone can see us and what is happening, it’s clear the romance between the 3 of us, and it makes you deeply satisfied knowing we are about to share something amazing while the rest will be left alone and hungry.

The Uber was fast, and is waiting for us as we leave the bar, I open the door for our lady, she enters from the passenger side and shuffles to the left, you follow her in and I after. a quick instruction to the driver and she already has her hand up your dress and is kissing your neck. She moves your panties to the side and whispers “you’re so wet for me mmmmmm” you moan in compliance and allow her to enter you slightly with her fingers as she is licking and sucking your earlobe and neck. She’s done this before, you can tell, she is listening to your breath and movements while she plays with your clit. I am watching the 2 of you interact and gently rubbing your breasts and nipples, as you’re stroking me through my pants, she brings you to climax in the back of the Uber and you notice the driver looking at us in the rear-view mirror, and you almost climax again but restrain yourself as we make a quick turn.

We are at the hotel now, still no words have been exchanged, just giggles, sultry smiles and loving caresses as we prance through the courtyard… her on your arm, and me on yours. The elevator opens and we all sigh a sigh of relief as it is empty, you enter first moving to one side of the mirrored elevator, she the other, and I move to the center back. the doors close and you allow the lift to go up a few floors before pressing the emergency stop and look to me. The thirst I see in your eyes is immediately recognized and I turn to the lady in red, with a brisk movement, I pull her to me, kiss her deeply and turn her towards the back of the elevator facing the mirror.

I slowly lift her dress up to her thighs, you can see the black lace thigh highs she has on, as well as the garter belt straps holding them up, the way that you find so sexy. I reach her amazing black lace G-string and pull it to the side, as i was managing her dress, you have already released the monster from its cage and have been stroking it slowly as I get ready. The lady in red in high heeled stilettos, tippy toes up and presents herself to me as you are loving my manhood with your hand. your left hand is now down the front of her panties as you feel her juices flowing, you ever so slowly rub my engorged tip just outside the opening of her pussy, spreading her labia as you move it back an forth.

My penis is jumping with desire as she moans, almost begging for me to fill her up, you oblige by allowing me to enter while you play with her clit, and now yourself, as we being to move together in another dance of the minds and bodies. She loves me being inside of her and you can see she is in the moment and getting close, you step back to get the full view of me fucking our new lady with the veracity of a starving animal being fed for the first time in weeks. I get her to climax and slow my pace, you are full on masturbating while watching us… I turn her to face me, lift her up to my hips, I push her against the back mirror wall, and enter her once again quickly bringing her right back to where she was a moment ago.

Moaning and gasping as she pulls at my made to measure suit, you can tell she is experiencing multiple orgasms as her flush face makes eye contact with you, she moans with extreme pleasure, you feel like you have to pee and begin to rub your clit furiously. You can tell by my cadence and breathing I am close, you allow me to give her another orgasm before dropping to your knees, pulling out my huge glistening wet cock from her pussy, and put it into your mouth so you can taste her sweet juices. You squirt with your orgasm without apology as you finish me off with your mouth, and look up at us breathing sweaty and content and giggle… as we straighten our outfits you restart the elevator to the 27th floor.

We enter the suite and our lady in red leads you to the bed, I move to the chair by the window and begin to remove my suit jacket as i watch her slowly and lovingly helping you undress by pulling your dress over your head and dropping it on the floor, your lingerie grabbing your body in all the right places, in all the right ways. “you’re so hot” she exclaims as she pushes you onto the bed and takes off your left high heel, before motioning for your right, you oblige playfully and she drops the 2nd shoe to the floor and stares at you deeply and with intention, you feel this and the butterflies are back.

She dances slowly as she lifts the red dress up her torso, and over her head, her blonde hair cascading down her shoulders onto her breasts, you want her and lean up to kiss her belly, only to be pushed back down and told, “wait your turn”… beginning at your ankles she kisses you ever so gently following your leg towards your pussy like it’s a trail to an exotic waterfall, she’s at you inner thigh and you are struggling to keep your passion contained, she is so good at this, you’re in absolute bliss and can’t wait for more. “mmmmm you taste so good” she whispers as her tongue gently taps your lower labia, then inside the labia and up to your clit. With a slight sucking kiss, she temps your clitoris making your butterflies turn to that tight warm feeling you know is good.

making her way up and down your labia with her tongue, she explores you like a metronome in time with your movements, in time with your breath. You’re getting close now and she can tell, she obliges by taking your clit in her mouth and gently performing fellatio using your clit like a small penis, “Oh my god” you expel, how did she know how to do this, you cum almost instantly but she doesn’t stop, doesn’t slow, and you cum again… as she continues to suck on your clit increasing the pressure, she begins to explore your opening with her fingers, dancing in and out only slightly as she sucks. You climax again and are starting to go mad with pleasure, she enters you fully now with 2 fingers, no longer sucking on your clit she is paddling it with her tongue.

The come here motion she is doing with her fingers inside of you is right at the spot, she knows what she is doing and you lock eyes with her as she keeps everything going, she smiles and says “you’re close I can feel it baby” you respond with a wet “yes” and your abdominal muscles begin to spasm and the warm wave of orgasm makes you feel feverish, the tension is building so high now, she’s sucking again, and now driving her fingers into your spot, your breath is taken away as you gush the largest orgasm you have ever experienced, the juices from your pussy spray into her face unapologetically and you love it, it turns you on so much it extends the release longer and you squirt again. “okay” you gasp “okay, oh my god, I need a second” as you laugh hysterically she joins you in a chuckle.

I get up from my seat, and begin to undress as the 2 of you watch me, she climbs onto the bed and spoons you from behind gently stoking her fingers along your sexy legs to your belly then breast then back down your leg. I get into bed with you both and kiss you lovingly, “that was amazing Amanda” I said, then she looks at you and laughs and says “oh that’s right, I’m Amanda” you reply “I’m Dawn”, she giggles and says with a smile and wink, “Johnny already told me your name” I kiss you again, and you look at me content and fully pleased, and I say “now, I want to see you take care of Amanda baby” and you know another adventure is about to begin…

FIN

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