I stood by the bathroom door watching him lather his hair up. His chocolate skin’s silhouette showed subtly through the steamy, glass shower. I loved his body. He stood at 6’4, 210 pounds of sexy. My mind immediately started thinking of all the ways he pleased my body. He knew exactly how and where to touch me or lick me to drive me wild.
“Kim”… , he called from behind the glass.
I immediately came back to reality where I noticed I had gotten wet just thinking about him being inside of me.
“You just gonna watch me lather up Buffalo Bill?” .. he laughs as he splashes some water on me from his fingers.
He rinsed off the rest of his hair and motions for me to throw him a towel.
I tried hard not to stare at his dick. It was 8 inches of thick dark veiny pleasure.
“Don’t forget to lotion up”, I say
“How bout you do it”.
I knew he had probably sensed that I wanted him but wanted to tease me until I asked for it.
I grabbed my mango and Shea butter and started to rub it over his tall body. I started at his shoulders ,slowly kneading it into his cocoa colored skin. I make my way down to his back. The butters gave his skin the sexiest shine.
I turn him to face me and start rubbing the butters all over his chest.
…..I stop and look up at him
His big brown eyes meet mine. He kissed me on the forehead and tells me thanks.
He tightened the towel and leaves the bathroom. I come behind him.
At this point I was almost soaked. My hands on his body made me hot with excitement.
“I’m about to get comfortable and watch that new movie babe”.. I say from the closet.
“I’ll be there after I submit my paper”
I take off my leggings with my round, plump butt facing him. Not seductively but enough for him to get a good look.
I turned to the side and remove my shirt and bra. I can see that he’s peeking a bit over his computer. Eyeing my big nipples and side view of my ass.
“Is it okay if I wear this?” I asked holding one of his shirts.
“Yeah”, he says, pretending that he was focused on his homework the entire time.
I slipped his huge shirt over my head. It reached just below my butt, Barely showing my silky, blue panties.
I grabbed my blanket and made my way onto the living room couch. I’m still wet… but waiting.
Minutes later he comes in and sits beside me. He’s shirtless but has his Harry Potter pajama bottoms on I got him on his birthday.
“Good movie?” he asks while glancing at the screen
“Sssh”, I say playfully while hitting him with a pillow.
He laughs and cuddles up to me. He lifts me up and lays facing the tv and puts me comfortably between his legs. I love laying with him like this.
As I’m engaged in the movie, I feel his hands slowly trying to lift up my shirt.
“Babe, no” , I say, knowing I would love nothing more than for him to play with my nipples and finger my wet pussy. It almost hurts to say
I get wetter knowing that he’s ready for me.
“Fine, fine, fine” I’ll enjoy the movie.
I can feel his dick becoming hard on my back. I can’t wait.
Before I knew it. I feel his hands rubbing my thighs. They opened by default.
“Oh so you do want it” he laughs
He starts pinching my nipples through my shirt. I throw my head back and he meets me with a slow wet kiss. I can feel my pussy throbbing through my panties.
He lets go of one of my breasts and gently wraps his strong hand around my neck. He slips his long tongue tongue in my mouth.
I moaned in his mouth.
His hands slipped into my panties.
“Wow baby, you’re so fucking wet”.
He starts rubbing his fingers on my clit. All while playing with my bare nipple. I feel his warm lips kiss and suck my neck. It’s enough to almost make me cum but I want more. My clit and pussy are throbbing with desire.
He gets up and gently pulls me to the end of the couch. He takes my drenched panties off.
“Take that shirt off”.
As I’m taking the shirt over my head. I felt his warm mouth engulf my pussy.
I throw the shirt to the floor and watch him lick and suck all of my juices. His thumb is circling my clit while his tongue works in and out of me. He grips my legs holding them open. And sucks my clit until I’m shaking
I writhe with pleasure.
“Yes baby!” I scream.
He stands up and takes off his pants. I notice that the couch under me has a huge wet spot.
I look up and see his hard dick. It’s ready for me.
I sit up to put it in my mouth but he pushes me back, makes me hold my legs, and enters my pussy.
“Damn” he moans.
He starts thrusting in and out. He leans forward and circles my nipple with his tongue. He starts sucking which drives me crazy.
He puts his finger in my mouth, I suck it and he starts playing with my other nipple.
I start gripping him with every stroke. I can tell he’s ready to cum and so am I.
He quickly picks me up with both legs on top of his arms. He places me against the wall and starts fucking me. I can feel the pressure in my stomach. My eyes water
I moan & I match his stroke. I look into his big dark eyes and kissed his lips. He bites them.
My 5’8, 170 pound ,curvy frame can’t take it. I feel the warmth and wetness rise out of my body. I squirt and come all over him.
He’s still fucking me and I’m losing it. I scream “Yes Daddy!” ….
He Moans louder than I’ve ever heard before and cums inside me. His warm cum fills me up.
My body is quivering and aching. He gently puts me down and motioned for me to come to the bathroom. I can barely walk. My legs feel like jelly.
He cleaned us up and kissed me on the forehead
To be continued……..
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/e6owmk/new_first_erotic_story_mf_its_short_all_critique
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First of all nice job. Very fun for a first attempt. I think it gives a lot of detail and that can sometimes take away from the excitement as people cant project parts of their desires into the story but it still good. That is a hard thing to do. the way you have it can make it much hotter for people who can relate such as yourself.