Some Nice Build-Up (Appreciate any comments good or bad)

We are at a friends wedding and we are both looking fucking awesome…you in a slinky black dress that drapes perfect over your tits and ass and you have black thigh highs and fuck me heels. I have my black pinstripe suit on and you are already wanting a piece of me. We spend most of the night dancing getting closer with each dance….feeling your tits rubbing up on my chest and your ass on my cock as you grind it into me….Near the end of the night we are sitting at our table and I put my hand on your leg and start moving it up and down slowly. I get more daring by sliding it under your skirt up to the lace of the top of your stockings. You grab my hand to make me stop but I’m too strong for ya and I keep moving it up. I reach your silk panties and slide my finger inside of them and can already feel your juices b/c I’m making you so wet and you can barely contain yourself as I slide my finger partially in ur pussy and leave it there and just wiggle it a lil as you clamp your legs around my hand as you try not to be noticeable with your eyes rolling to the back of your head. I whisper to you….”lets get out of here” you just moan. We start driving back and I put my hand back right where it was but this time I start fucking you with my finger and you just start squirming around the seat as your juices pour out of you. You just scream out “fuck baby you gotta fuck me now.” I pull over to an empty field where no one is near us. So I pull over the car and we get out and start passionately kissing…tongues going deep in each others mouth and then moving to each others necks and ears ferociously. So you grab hold of my tie and start yanking it off and then going for the buttons ripping them off. You grab me and throw me on the hood of the car. You start undoing my belt and zipper and pulling my pants down to my knees….feeling my hard cock in my boxers you start grabbing it with your hand and cupping it. You pull my boxers down and grab hold of my cock as it is sticking straight up…grabbing the shaft and start licking my balls and working your way up to the head…stopping and teasing it for a second and then working ur way down the other side. You then grab hold of it and start jerking me off…and say “so hard, I want more” all I can reply is with subtle moans as I close my eyes.  You put your mouth around the head and start sucking it and letting up and flicking it with your tongue….You take in a lil more each time you let up…I can’t take the letting up so I grab the back of your head and keep you there pushing you down further on it till it reaches the back of your throat. You look up at me and then go back to work…I can tell how much you like my cock shoved in ur mouth. You let up and start kissing back up stomach and chest…I sit up…and grab you and say….”time to slide it deep inside you” you reply with a passionate kiss…I turn you around and put you on the hood…slide my cock in to ur soaking wet pussy that is dripping on the hood. You wrap your legs around me and put your hands on the back of my head and slide down on my cock. I hold onto ur waist and push you back up as you feel the heat from the engine on ur ass.and you automatically slide back down on the curve of the hood as my cock goes deeper inside you. I feel you exploding as your juices fill up ur pussy in whichever room is not taken up by my bulging cock. I take myself out and slide you back to your feet. I slow down and act like I’m gonna stop which makes you look at me strangely. I wink at you and grab your hand take you to the side of the car. I give you some kisses and nibble a lil and then grab ur hips spin you around and push you face first hard down on the hood as ur ass just sticks out waiting and want to get fucked more as I can see your lips and clit bulging out….u just turn your head and look at me begging with your eyes….I grab my cock slide it back in ur pussy. Slamming it as hard as I can…no slowness I wanna make you cum again and again…I fucking pound you for a bit until I feel you cum again so then I slow it up a lil and pull it out to the tip and slowly slide it back in….ur reaching down playing with your clit as your nipples rub on the hood which is turning you on even more. So I continue pounding you slowly until the point where I feel I’m getting ready to cum. I start pounding harder as you scream “yes baby, fuck fuck fuckkkk” as I start moaning and groaning saying “I’m gonna explode”….As I start fucking you as hard as I can I feel you cum one last time as I explode shortly after…cum gushing everywhere it just won’t stop…it fills u up as I pull out a lil and start stroking and squeezing it to get a lil more out for ya. I reach down with my hands around ur waist and pull you up towards me as I move my hand up to your tits holding them and feeling your hard nipples between my fingertips as you lean back and we have one final gentle kiss as you smile and giggle at me b/c you are still trying to catch your breath and you are still a lil taken back on what just happened.

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