What I think she thinks is going to happen when she says the words, “Make me,” is that I will bend her over the foot of her bed, press her face into her own bedcovers, and spank her at length.
I think she thinks this because I have spanked her every time we’ve played since we started playing, usually in response to her behaviour, which at times is specifically calibrated to make me want to spank her.
She’s behaving the way she behaves when she wants me to spank her when she says the words, “Make me”. Which is to say that she’s scratching at me, snarling at me, pulling faces at me as I hold her by a handful of her hair. She is refusing every instruction I give her, including the instruction to suck my dick that immediately precedes her saying the words, “Make me.”
She is also pointedly not ending every utterance she makes with the word “Sir,” which is something that we have pointedly agreed she will do whenever we play.
In the immediate aftermath of her saying the words, “Make me,” we stare at one another. I believe that, at this point, she thinks I am about to spank her.
Instead I say, “Okay.”
The look on her face (almost smug) freezes. I have deviated from the script that we have played by every time that we have played. The script dictates that, ordinarily, she would now find herself facedown on her bed, being spanked at length.
But instead I pick her up by her hair, one hand around her neck, and push her into the bathroom, into the open cubicle of the shower, her back against the cold tiles, and pin her there while I unhook the shower head. While I run the water cold. In the moment before I direct the jet of icy water over her body I note that her eyes are very wide.
While we are in the shower and I am dousing her with cold water she looks at me with those eyes in a way that is very different from the way she looks at me when she wants to be spanked. Her cheeks pink and she huffs a few shuddery breaths, and her hands make claws, which she slaps back against the tiles against which she’s pinned.
Afterwards (that is, after she says the words, “Make me,” and I put her in the shower and I douse her with cold water for two long minutes, then bring her out, shut off the water, wrap her in a towel) after all that we return to where we were in her room when she said the words, “Make me.”
Thereafter, she no longer behaves the way she behaves when she wants to be spanked. Instead she does everything – every single thing – that she is told to do, without the slightest hesitation.
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Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/dvb0ve/make_me_mf_bdsm
Well, that made me react in a way I didn’t expect. Nicely written!
Very nice ?
Perfect.