Journey to the land of the sex god - part 1 [FM] [Poem] [Poetry] [Erotica]

You thought you could get inebriated

only with either drugs or wine.

But the pleasures I’ve created,

will have you reach for the divine.

It feels like you’re lost in a dream,

the slow caresses of my hand on your skin.

In my realm where pleasures reign supreme,

your path to ecstasy still has to begin.

Let me use the power of my tongue,

emitting no sound, it’s tracing all over you.

Lost in the desert for so long,

thirsty, you finally found some dew.

And the little dewdrops soon become torrents,

and rivers and seas and oceans.

Navigating of the pleasure all its currents,

stirring strong and new emotions.

And the flood of pleasure has you gasping,

panting – your body’s almost dancing;

your hands tighten, clutching, grasping,

trying to hold on – while reality is vanishing.

And after the universe has vanished,

and you’re floating in the sea of pleasure;

you realise how far you’ve travelled,

to uncover this hidden treasure.

End of part 1

Note: this is my first time writing an erotic poem and the first time publishing one of my works, so feedback would be deeply appreciated