Hi, this is my first time posting, I have written pieces of erotica for my Babe and friends that ask for it. Would love feedback. This is part one of a few chapters hope you guys enjoy!
–WrenLiz
It was a beautiful drive up the mountains of Arizona. I was sitting in the passenger seat with the window rolled down and my husband was driving our jeep wrangler. We had a fun playlist of 80s on and we were singing our hearts out. We had been planning this trip to Sedona for a while. We had been making it a tradition to come up every year for his birthday, and it was finally time to disappear from our busy everyday lives for a weekend.
Sedona was beautiful in October, different colors of orange, red and yellow, with a backdrop of red iron cliffs and bright blue sky. It’s the scenes that post cards are made of. We had picked out a cute little cabin that wasn’t too far out of town but just far enough where you could still see the magnificent stars that painted the night sky.
Although we had planned to see the night sky I had a feeling we wouldn’t be paying much attention to the sky. I glanced back towards the duffel bag, and smiled. That duffel bag was full of memories and toys. All charged up and ready to be used. Babe grabbed my hand and kissed my fingers.
“We will be there soon, then we can relax”
I leaned across the center console, and kissed his neck,
“Oh Babe, I don’t plan on relaxing much, I’m expecting this trip to be full of rigorous activities”
He lets go of my hand and squeezes my thigh,
“Good, because I’m not going to let you sleep a wink, Sweetheart”
After another hour or so of driving, singing and teasing each other, we arrive at the cabin. It was cute, Babe gets out of the jeep, and walks to my door, he opens it and scoops me out of the car carrying me bridal style to the door. Using the key pad I unlock the door, Babe steps inside, and carries me straight to the bed and drops me on it. I laugh and pull him down on top of me. Our lips lock and my legs wrap around his waist. I have one thing on my mind and one thing only. I want his clothes on the floor and I want to be screaming his name. I reach to take his shirt off, but he stops me.
” Sweetheart, everything is still in the car, we should probably get our stuff before we get too carried away.”
“Fine,”
Babe rolls off the bed and walked out to the car to grab our bags. I take this moment to freshen up in the bathroom. I turn on the shower and peel off my clothes and stepped into the shower. The water is hot and it feels like it’s searing my skin,
Perfect, just the way he likes it.
I then rinse my hair letting the water rush over my skin. I lean my head back and get my hands fall from my hair, down my body leaving a trail with my fingertips. The feeling gives me goosebumps. There’s a cool breeze that brushed my back and replaced with a tall body, behind me.
“May I join you?” Is whispered in my ear,
I turn around and place my arms around Babe’s neck and pulled him into a deep passionate kiss.
His hands are gripping my ass, pulling me closer to his body. Our tongues quickly dance, swirling around each other. I feel his dick grow and press against my stomach.
I break from the kiss and slowly sink to my knees, keeping eye contact, I opened my mouth and lick his throbbing dick. The moment my tongue touches, it jumps, I trail kisses down his dick to his balls. I use the tip of my tongue to tease his balls, and I watch as a shiver ran through his body. I am in complete control. This brings a smile to my lips, still using my tongue I trace it up to the head of his dick. It’s at this point I slowly take the tip into my mouth swirling my tongue around it, making my way up and down his shaft. I make it almost all the way down his shaft when I feel hands on my head, and Babe thrusts hard down my throat. Gagging slightly I relax my jaw and throat, I let him fuck my face for a bit slowing slightly for little breaths. My jaw started to tire, I pulled away and slowly stood.
“Fuck, you are good at that,” Babe pushes me up against a wall while kissing me, he breaks the kiss and sinks to his knees. Lifting my right leg over his shoulder, he kisses the inside of my thighs. Slowly like a lion stalking his prey, he makes his way to my lips. Teasing me he slides his tongue through my lips and against my clit making me gasp. That gasp was his que dive further, to really taste me, taking his time his tongue swirls around my clit, switching between the swirling of his tongue to lightly sucking and biting my clit. My fingers are in his hair trying to pull him deeper into my pussy.
He moves to my opening, and slides his tongue into me.
“Mmmm, fuuck” I moan, head leaning back against the shower wall. Babe is now in control, and he knows it. He uses his tongue to thrust in me, alternating between thrusting and swirling, then marking his way back to my clit to tease me more. It feels so amazing, I became vaguely aware of the water that is still on, I release my hold of Babe’s head and turn off the water. His eyes snap open and look at me.
Short of breath I manage to get out ” just because I’m in heaven, doesn’t mean we need to waste water”.
He chuckled and leaned back just a bit.
“Shall we move this out of the shower or shall we stay here?”
Quoting one of my favorite movies I tell him “take me to bed or lose me forever.”
It doesn’t take long for him to stand up, Capture my mouth with his and we make our way out of the shower and to the bed, not bothering to dry off.
When we reach the bed Babe picks me up and throws me on the bed and proceeded to continue where he left off. His face buried deep in my pussy. My Legs thrown over his shoulders, my hips are being hugged and his tongue is working miracles. I put my fingers in his hair and encourage more, to this he releases my hip with one hand takes a break from cleaning my pussy with his tongue to licking and sucking his fingers. Once his fingers were good and wet he returns his attention to flicking his tongue against my clit while sliding his fingers in to me.
The moment his fingers enter me, my body is set on fire, I hear a chuckle, when my body arches against his fingers. He starts to pump his fingers in me curling them upwards knowing all the right spots to hit. My hips involuntarily grind against his mouth and fingers. I feel the fingers stop and I let out a whine.
“You like that? Do you want more?”
The fingers pick up faster,
I can hardly speak, but I managed to moan out
” Yes Sir”
Those two little words change the whole dynamic. For now I would be his play toy and he was going to make me feel pleasure like never before.
At the sound of “Yes Sir” I knew I was no longer in control.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/d7ir7u/escape_to_sedona_part_1_mf