The night air was cold, it caused Alcielas skin to pucker with each icy gust. She stood on the open balcony nude and letting her pale skin soak up the full moon light. The shuffle of coals in the fire and Eldrin adding fresh wood to the fire breaks her trance. She looks over her shoulder to see him joining her on the balcony. his hands are warm as they wrap around her body, she spins in his grip to face him kissing him. She lets her lips linger on his for a moment letting his body heat hers.
“You’ll catch your death standing outside nude, its freezing out here.” Eldrin wraps his robe around Alciela.
“You don’t need to worry about me, I am a grown woman.” She furrows her brows at him. She’s not used to having someone fuss over her.
Eldrin pulls her closer taking in her smell. The sweet smell of flowers clings to her from her bath earlier that night. She wanted to be alone but from his tub he could see through two boards. It was hard to focus on scrubbing himself when he had the perfect place to spy on her. Alciela wasn’t human he knew it but she’d never admit anything differently. It was bad enough he was the son of a noble elven family fraternizing with a human. He was expected to go out and bring home an elven bride. But Alciela had this angelic beauty about her he couldn’t resist. Thinking of her in the bath and her bare breast pushed against his chest he felt himself begin to grow and press into her thigh.
Alciela gave a soft laugh. “What’s on your mind?”
Eldrin laughs. “You are, my angel.”
Alciela rolls her eyes. Her hand slips between them to grip his cock, she feels him jump with surprise. She kisses him before her lips trail down his body. Her tongue traces around the tip of his pink cock as she grips it, stroking half way up before she pushes back into the base. His hands reach up and grip the hair at the base of her skull. She teases him stroking with her hand and moving between flicks of her tongue and small kisses up and down his shaft.
With each flick of her tongue Eldrins erection pulses, he cant take the teasing anymore and pushes into her mouth, he pushes until he’s well into her and can feel the back of her throat on his tip. He’s surprised when he feels her claw him down his back and thighs. She lets him control the pace but he’s soon overwhelmed with pleasure. She speeds up, sucking and twisting her tongue around Eldrin. His cock throbs and he feels an intense surge of pleasure as he erupts down Alcielas throat, mouth, and face. He stumbles back resting on the stone rail of the balcony. Cum still oozing out of his now flaccid member. He looks down at Alciela, his seed and her spit now mixed and running down her chin. Before she can wipe it from her self he pulls her into a deep kiss, pushing his tongue into her mouth leading them in an erotic dance.
She pulls away looking into his green eyes. Eldrin pulls her into him then leads her into the inn room. Laying her on the bed, taking his time to observe every scar, imperfection, and graceful curve on her body. His fingers trace her hip bone and trail between her legs. Surprised to see a human without an ounce of body hair. She’s so much more beautiful than any human he’s seen, her appearance is almost alien. He cant take it, his cock stiffens once again looking at this creatures body. His fingers trace the full lips before pushing inside with little resistance. He kneels and taste her letting his tongue circle her engorged clit, traveling down and pushing it inside of her. Soft moans escape Alciela encouraging Eldrin. He laps at her listening to her moans grow and her body stiffin. He leans into suck on her clit.
Alciela can’t handle the pleasure, she’s nearly screaming as she grips the bed linens. Heat and pressure build up in her groin, his tongue touches all the right spots and she clenches releasing a small flood as she orgasms. Her body now convulsing in her pleasure Eldrin climbs on top of her pushing into Alciela, thrusting easily into her dripping pussy. She moans loudly and wraps her legs around him forcing him deep inside her.
Eldrin can’t last long the pleasure is simply amazing as he reaches up to pinch and grope her large breasts. He thrusts as hard as he can watching the force ripple through her body, he enjoys the sight of breast bouncing from the force of his cock. Her orgasm still ravages her body as Eldrins final few thrusts fill her with an abundance of his hot cum. He groans with pleasure then collapses next to Alciela panting.
He wraps his arms around her pulling her in and covering them both with the furs on the bed. He pushes the hair from her face and kisses her deeply.
Alciela not used to the care buries her face in Eldrins chest. They lay in each others arms until they both drift into a deep sleep.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/d5sxx6/the_experiences_of_a_cleric_oral_penetration
It would really help with readability if you broke it into paragraphs.