It was to be the most important day of her life, and Eshaal was enjoying the week leading up to her wedding. Living in America, she was excited to have found a man, Darius, of her same religion and even country. They had so much in common, and were happy to continue living in America to bring up a healthy and happy family. Being only just 19, she was educating herself at college, but wanted to ensure she had some stability as she grew into adulthood.
Having remained a virgin, Eshaal was so glad her future husband was also carnally unexperienced. They would be able to discover each other together, with no preconceived notions of how sex is. When she was dating around, she had done nothing more than make out and have her chest fondled slightly by a overactive drunk frat boy. But she was so much more excited over the idea of having her virginity taken on a sacred day, even allowing her mind and fingers to wander over herself in the evenings, fantasising about how amazing it would feel.
She was sitting at home on the office room couch, looking over the wedding plans on her tablet. Four more days, and she would be able to celebrate with her family and friends this wonderful bonding of two souls.
Darius, arriving home from work, excited to begin his time off work, walked through the house to find Eshaal, and sat next to her to review the plans with her. But there was an event Eshaal needed to be informed about, to happen this evening while he was out celebrating a bucks night with his friends.
“Eshaal, I’m so glad you’ve made such lovely arrangements for this wedding. My family will be so happy with how this will look”
“Thanks my sweet, its really just reflective of how excited I am to marry you”
She stroked his face, looking lovingly into his eyes, and kissed him gently.
“I’m so happy to spend the rest of my life with you”
Darius smiled, and sat back into the couch a little, with his arm around his to-be wife. She cuddled up to him, and he stroked her hair.
“Well, there is something that does need to happen to ensure that we have the best future life together, my dear. I know your family is a little more laid back about tradition, but it is customary in my family to have your hymen inspected before this can continue.”
“I’m… I’m sorry what?” Eshaal sat up, shocked. “Do you not believe my word, that I am a virgin?? You know that hymens are not even a sign of virginity!”
“It is customary, and my father can always tell if someone is a virgin even without a hymen. He has done this multiple times…”
“Your FATHER is going to do this??”
“Well yes, but he will be monitored by my uncles”
“This is horrific, I absolutely will not submit to this”
Darius stood, looking down on his beloved. He could see the fear in her eyes, and became annoyed that she wouldn’t submit to such a simple test. Maybe she was lying, maybe she wasn’t a virgin. His father would be able to tell him soon. He knew that she would be hesitant, but such defiance was concerning.
“You WILL be tested, and only after my father confirms this for me, I will let you be my wife” Darius shouted, and snatched her tablet from her hands. He stomped towards the door, slamming it shut and locking it, having had the room secured due to the expensive home office and camera equipment he kept in there.
He walked to the front foyer of the house, in anticipation of a visitor he knew all too well.
Hearing a car pull up outside, Eshaal began to panic. Locked in the room, she tried starting the computer to call for help from someone, anyone. But as the computer powered on, she realised she did not know any of the passwords, not even to Darius’s tablet on the desk. She had hoped to generate trust with him by ensuring they both had complete privacy on their computer devices. But now it had come to bite her, and her panic increased. She sat on the couch, and began to weep. Her phone was out in the living room, leaving her helpless.
Darius opened the front door, and saw his father and three uncles exit the car that had just pulled up.
“My father, I am so glad to see you! Please, come in.” He greeted his father with a warm hug of respect and happiness. “I really do hope you can help me find out if my princess is the going to be appropriate to marry”
“I too am glad, I have such pride that you’ve chosen someone who is more likely to be a virgin. Even by the way she walks, I feel as though she has not allowed any carnal desires to fall upon her” his fathers face beamed with a smile. “I hope you don’t mind, but I’ve invited two of my nephews to witness this event, as they must be taught this important tradition”
“I trust you father, and I am glad you are so generous as to offer such a service to these young men.” Darius embraced his father yet again, and invited them into the house as the second car, with the two nephews, rolled into the driveway.
“I’ll be heading out after having a shower, I have a much deserved bucks night to attend. Please feel free to make yourself at home” said Darius, guiding his guests into the living room and showing his nephews where the coffee and tea were. Darius noted their shy demeanour, and felt comfortable knowing that such gentle hands would be inspecting his to-be wife.
Eshaal could hear the men outside the door, chatting among themselves. She knew once Darius had finished his shower, she would be at their mercy. Six men would be witnessing an invasion of her most private areas.
“Maybe…” she began to talk to herself “…if I just relax, gently submit, it will all be over with quickly. They’re not here to hurt me”
Tears ran down her cheeks. She was so horrified. She wanted nothing more than to think about kicking them away, but she knew that they would easily hold her down. Darius’s family took their personal health seriously, and were always so proud of their weightlifting and strength training. She sobbed deeper, trying to mentally comfort herself.
“Ok… ok… when they come in, I’ll submit. I’ll put a sheet over myself, like a doctors office. And then what is it, one finger? Yeah. He won’t need to do more than that. Not at all”
Darius finished his shower, dressed, and headed out the door, not before giving his father one last hug, and handing him the key to the home office Eshaal was locked in.
“Make sure you give her the keys once you’re done. I’ve never had to lock her in a room before, but after this test, I’m sure she will be back to her usual self” Darius assured his father.
“Don’t worry, young women with no experience are always nervous before this, but her family should have warned and prepared her mentally for this. Ah well. Have fun, my son”
Darius ordered an Uber, and waited patiently outside, ready to head off to his night out.
“Now, my brothers, we shall go and inspect this fine young lady”
The men walked towards the home office, and watched as Eshaal’s father in law unlocked the door, firmly opening it, and marching in.
The men stood in a semi circle around Eshaal, her pretty face looking up with tears in her eyes.
“We heard you were defiant against the will of your future husband, Eshaal. You must begin your wifely attitudes early” her father in law sternly said. “You are to be inspected today, and I suggest you open yourself to us willingly”
“But Jo-“
“YOU will address me as FATHER only, and these men as your uncles. You are a part of our family now, and I you will respect the status of our earned titles. Now, this room seems good enough…” He looked around at the spacious home office, and pointed towards the closet “…one of you, get the camera out”
Eshaal began to panic even more, holding her hands close to her chest. They were going to film this??
“We need to ensure proof of virginity is kept on tape. Don’t worry Eshaal, if you truely are a virgin, this tape will help you in the future case of a divorce. They can show the whole court you were a virgin to begin with. And if you were not…” A sly smile grew on Fathers face “…well, it will help us prove to Darius what a whore you have been”
Eshaal saw she was not in any place to protest, and more tears fell from her eyes. One of the nephews reacher over and wiped her face with a cloth pulled from his pocket, silently admiring her beauty. His shy-ness fell away, and his smile too, made Eshaal realise that these men are certainly will be enjoying witnessing her miserable humiliation.
The camera was set up by one of the uncles, sitting in the corner, with him standing behind, ready to focus the lense when Eshaal was spread out.
“Take off your skirt and underwear. You can leave your shirt on, but the bra should also come off, for your comfort”
“Now, my dear daughter, please, sit back into the couch, and spread those legs and get comfortable” Father said with an air of authority, and Eshaal noted he slightly tugged his crotch, before reaching his hand up and scatching his neck.
“I… Let me grab a sheet. Just like a doctor would”
“WOMAN, you will be FULLY exposed so the camera knows it is you, with no trickery.” Father yelled, startling Eshaal. The uncle began to focus the lense, as Eshaal slowly spread her legs, and gasps filled the air.
She was completely bare, a completely waxed pussy and asshole. Her outter labia completely covered her inner lips, not even her clit poking up through. It was one long thin line along the slightly raised mound, down to her pert asshole. Dry and hairless, she had been making sure she was clean and perfect for her first night with Darius.
“You are clearly preparing yourself for your future husband well, my dear. You know how men do like a nice looking pussy” Father joked with a grin. He knelt down, and ensuring his face did not get in the way of the camera view, looked closer at her exposed genitals.
“Now, good men, gather around and look here. We already have good signs of virginity, with the outter labia unstretched…”
Eshaal gasped. She thought he would be just putting a finger in her to poke around, and that was it. This was turning into what she felt to be a whole medical exam. She already felt so exposed, what were they going to bother looking at next?
The men looked intently at the pussy, murmuring and smiling, being quite subtle in rubbing their crotches just ever so slightly, trying not to give away their growing boners.
Father reached out a single finger, and ran it from the top of the slit to the bottom, ever so gently feeling the skin just on the top, not sliding it in.
“Now my fellows, we shall inspect the inner labia..” and he used two fingers to gently pry apart the outer labia, exposing her inner lips running up to her clitoris. They were incredibly small, slightly a-symetrical around her urethra. Completely dry, she winced at this invasion, feeling absolutely exposed. She continued to weep, which seemed to only turn the two younger nephews on, their boners now obvious through their pants.
“Such small labial lips don’t always indicate virginity. I’ve inspected 18 year olds with 2cm lips hanging out with nice firm hymens” the men around Father nodded, as he ran his fingers over the lips.
Eshaal was not getting turned on by this invasion, as Father slightly pinched the lips around her urethra. The sudden urge to pee came across her, but she held it in, causing her pelvic floor muscles to flex, and her vagina to visibly twitch.
“OH! My dear daughter, you are quite reactive to this. You must be quite unused to such a feeling”
“Ye… yes father. I’ve not ever had such a feeling over my body”
“Well, have you felt this before?” And father let his fingers slide up to the hood of her clitoris. She had a slightly larger hood, which he pulled back, to reveal the little nub of flesh that would bring her all the pleasure in the world.
“Look here men, this is what all your wives should be submitting to you at all times. If you play with this long enough, they will be faithful to you always” Father laughed, as he gently touched and began to rub the clit under is index finger.
“Father what on earth are you doing??” Eshaal protested
“Well, in order to feel your hymen, you need some lubrication. The best lube is one you produce, so I am simply ensuring your comfort, my dear” he said, continuing his assault on her clit. He pulsed it with the tip of his finger, and bent his head down. Eshaal closed her eyes, but it was no use, as the feeling over came her… she felt the tip of his tongue grace her tight, young clit.
The men around began making obscene jokes with each other, and laughing at her. Father stopped his oral assault on her for a moment, as Eshaal tried her best to ignore the pleasure waving through her. He ever so gently sucked on the nub, and flicked his tongue over, eventually circling his tongue around and around it, as it grew slightly.
“Now, before I continue my dear daughter, do you tell us the truth in your knowledge of your virginity?”
“Yes father, I do. I am a pure virgin”
“Well then…” Father reached his finger up, running it down from her clit, over her urethra, down to her hole opening “Lets see if you’re telling the truth”
Father felt her moisture, now slightly dripping from the virgin hole in front of him. He slowly slid his finger up, feeling the ridges and smooth walls, until he hit her firm hymen.
“Well boys, we’ve got a truthful one!” He announced, as the men around cheered. The camera had caught the whole interaction. Eshaal was releived, this was to all be over now…
“And as our tradition holds..” his finger stayed in her, just poking the hymen “… we can enjoy her as we please”
“WHAT? No STOP!” Eshaal yelled, as two uncles held her down to the sofa.
“This was meant to be you finding out if I was a virgin!! What are you going to tell Darius??” Eshaal began to squirm, as Father removed his finger and began going back to playing with her lips and clitoris, the hood still pulled back.
“We want our boy’s wives to know how to please men, and virginal women are so bad at enjoying themselves. No, my dear daughter, you will please us all, and if you defy us, I will tell Darius you were a whore from the beginning, and you will be homeless in no time. He is a smart boy, he knows a woman does not need a hymen to be a virgin. But he will believe me…” He paused as he spread her lips open again “… when I say you’re a virgin after being reamed by six men”
“This is madness! No please!” Her cried became muffled, as the nephew who had wiped her face earlier stuffed the cloth into her mouth.
“And after we have our fun, we will get rid of this nasty hood covering your clit. Female circumcision is so brutal back home where they take the whole clit, but here, we will ensure that your clit is simply always exposed, so you are always ready for Darius… or myself…” Father continued to play with her lips, pulling on them, and pinching her clit, sending pain and pleasure through her body. He rubbed her urethral hole, just to add to the humiliation.
Eshaal’s eyes widened, as fear grew in the pit of her stomach. They were going to rape and mutilate her.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/cy741g/marriage_inspection_chapter_1_fmmmmmm_forced
nice pretty hot, but is the family middle eastern, are they muslims
Is this based on that one post on AITA?