I’ve written a short story where this girl I know Madyson fucks all 4 of her brothers cocks and makes them cum all over her. Any thoughts/feedback would be appreciated, I like descriptions of what I did well as well as what I should add next time! HMU !
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/cp384z/critiquethoughts_wanted_on_short_story
I wouldn’t mind taking a look for you :) although I may be very delayed in giving you a reply.