She looked delectable. She wore a long, fluffy, purple hoodie accompanied by a stretchy, dark coloured tank top, and denim shorts. She looked like a delicious treat, with beautiful curves in all the right places, her wavy hair which flowed like paint with different shades of brown, her upper body slowly rising and falling as she slowly breathed in… and out. She was casually sitting on our bed with her legs crossed, such that her feet was pushing downwards and compressing the soft bed sheets below. She slowly glanced at me. Her eyes, shining like diamonds. I was starstruck. I was aroused. I could feel my muscles starting to tingle with anticipation. I was getting lost in her hypnotizing, seductive, frisky stare. It was slowly inviting me, tempting me, making me feel thirstier and thirstier.
‘You know what I want.’
I let out a soft moan, trying to release all the excitement which had slowly built up over the night. She looked stunning. My heart was racing.
‘Struggling to control yourself?’
All I could do was nod silently.
‘I have a feeling that what I want is what you want too, isn’t that right, sweetie? Well then, show my body how much you want it.’
I squealed and moaned again.
‘You sound adorable.’
‘I… have had enough of you toying with me!’
I carefully but firmly grab her forearms, then let her cling onto my back with her legs. I carried her out the front door, into the meadow. Now, night had already befallen quite a while ago, and the driveway was so long that no one could hear us. It was just me, and her.
She had a beautiful garden. With the lush, green grass that she diligently maintains every week, the colorful flowers that adorned it like jewels of a crown… it was a relaxing place to be in. However, tonight, it would be more than just relaxing.
Once we got there, I gently placed her down on the ground, and started snuggling and spooning her. I cuddled her tummy close. After passionate kisses on her neck, making sure to use the smooth, underside of my tongue, I slowly reached into her tight shorts, caressing her supple butt as I did so. My hand brushed against her thighs as I continued moving downwards. She was moaning and whispering into my ear. ‘This is heaven.’ Effortlessly, all her clothes were off, showing me her pure self in entirety. She looked amazing. She helped do the same, and eventually we were both undressed. Naked, under the shining, shimmering stars that decorated this night, summer sky.
I stood up. Once again, I helped her into the same position as earlier when I was carrying her. I let her wrap her legs around me as I held onto her arms. I tightened my core a bit more to allow myself to lean back. Her head was tilted back such that she was facing the sky. I secure myself on to the ground a bit more.
I pull her towards me. Squish. I penetrate.
One.
Two.
Three.
Four.
Five.
Again, and again. Pulling her left arm, then her right, then relaxing. Again. Prodding her insides. Caressing them. Making love. Slowly activating her. Again, and again.
Electricity.
Passion.
This was the pinnacle of human evolution. Pleasure.
In,
deep,
relax,
again.
In,
deep,
relax,
again.
Left arm, then right. Rhythm. Composed music. Moan, relax. Steady, but sexy. Not forceful, but right. Perfection. Deep, then release. Like a soothing massage.
As I pulled her in again, she gave me a passionate kiss. Our tongues, rolling and pushing against each other. Her hot, fiery breath caressing my face. I could feel her tightened muscles while she was pressed against me.
Drive. Desire. My beating heart. Beyond sexy. Bliss. Infinity. Feelings. Rhythm. Waves. Touching the shore. Breathing, moaning, thrusting, penetrating. Time, standing still. The laws of science, evaporating into thin air, gone. Just me, and her. Nothing else matters.
Gradual increase. Harder. Faster. Stronger. Louder. Hotter. Going beyond infinity. Divine intimacy, flowing between us. Lightning, sparks of electricity. We were both moaning at the top of our lungs.
Cumming. Control, lost. Wild, hard, fast. Strong overwhelming pleasure. Thrusting and penetrating, again and again.
‘I love you! I love you!’
Tingling vibration. Like an explosive earthquake, I gave her a hot creampie that surged through her insides like a cascading flood. While I was at orgasm, she forcefully pulled me close and we started kissing again. My mind could not comprehend how pleasurable this felt.
I place her back down. I continue to drive her wild with the touch of my hand rubbing against her erogenous areas, tickling the lips of her pussy. She was giggling and squealing, like she was still full of energy.
To finish off, I let her clean my dick from all its mess. Using her tongue, she massaged it, then swept all of my love juice into her mouth, and was lovingly drinking it like it was the only thing keeping her alive. She smirked, saying how sweet it tasted, and I looked into her eyes, and smiled again.
The glow of her body at the end of it all confirmed that I wanted to go down on her again, some time in the near future.
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