Today was a beautiful day. Clear blue skies, upper 70’s, and no humidity. I unexpectedly was free for a few hours and decided to take a hike. The location of the hike has a series of waterfalls. We’ve had a lot of rain recently, so I knew the falls would be roaring with water. I encountered no one along the trail as I hiked in. I took my time, enjoying the peace and quiet. I made it to my destination and found that I was completely alone. I hiked on a little further up river and found a secluded spot where the sun was shining on a rock, right on the water’s edge. I worked up a little sweat from the hike, so I decided to cool off in the water. Since I was certain I was alone, I stripped completely naked and stepped into the water. It was very cold, but felt amazing. After a couple of minutes, I climbed back on to the rock in the sun. I just stood there, completely naked, surrounded by nothing but nature, and dried off in the sun.
I’m always super-horny, but something about the location and seclusion, being naked outside, made me hornier than usual. I decided to lay down on the rock so I could feel the sun over my entire body. I began to stroke my cock very slowly. All I could hear is the roar of the water rushing by and crashing over the falls. I felt all alone in the world and I loved it. I continued to stroke my cock, which was completely hard. I just laid there with my eyes closed, enjoying everything about my day.
I heard the crack of a footstep on a stick on the ground and it startled me. I had been lying there on that rock for probably 30 minutes. I opened my eyes to see someone partially obscured by the thick foliage. They were moving toward me. As I quickly moved to grab my clothes, a young lady stepped onto the rock where I was laying. She had her dog with her. She had obviously decided to enjoy this perfect day just like me, but found more than she bargained for.
As I grabbed my shorts to cover up, she spoke up and said, “It’s ok, let me see you.” Remember, I had been stroking my cock and had a raging hard on. She was smiling. It was obvious that she wasn’t scared or embarrassed or afraid. Much to her surprise, she had stumbled upon a naked man, cock hard as a rock, in the middle of nowhere, and she liked it.
I pulled my hand back away from my shorts and propped myself up on my elbows. I looked up at her to find her smiling still, her eyes looking me up and down. I’m now getting a good look at her. She looks familiar. I think we both realized that we knew each other at the same moment. Her name was Lauren. She ran track with my son for their high school track team. She was a sprinter, 100 meters was her event. She had just graduated and she was absolutely beautiful. She was just a little over 5 feet tall and had the muscular legs associated with sprinters. She had dark brown hair, tanned skin and green eyes. My emotions rattled between embarrassment, shock, and continued arousal. I was trying to formulate a response. She found me naked, stroking my cock out in the middle of nowhere. There really wasn’t much I could say.
Of course, all of this transpired over the course of just a few seconds. It felt like longer, though. She turned around and tied her dogs leash to a tree branch. She then turned back around and began to move toward me. She took a couple steps, knelt down, and grabbed my still hard cock with her soft hand. I’m still on my back, propped up on my elbows. We’re now eye to eye. She is beautiful. I lean slightly forward and begin to kiss her passionately. Our tongues swirl and slide in and out of each other’s mouths. She slowly strokes me. I set up the rest of the way. She’s on her knees. I begin to lift her tank top off. It’s loose fitting and comes off easily. Under her tank top was a sports bra. She takes it off and reveals a beautiful pair of young, firm breasts with the sweetest pale pink nipples. I reach for them. She straddles me now and leans forward. I caress and lightly squeeze them. She reaches her arms up and rests them on her head, which pulls her sweet breasts up a little. I now begin to suck on her nipples.
I’ve now engaged this young lady sexually. I’m nervous about what would happen to me if word got out or if we got caught. She’s 18, so no worries there. But my reputation and marriage would likely be ruined. There is no turning back, though, because she now stands up, pulls her shorts and panties off, and steps forward. Her teenage pussy is right in my face. She wants me to eat it. I do. I reach around her and hold on to her round, rock hard ass as I begin to lick along the length of her slit. She’s already wet and I can taste her pussy juice on my tongue. I begin to slide my tongue in to her pussy. I move back up to her clit, sucking it and flicking it with my tongue. She reaches down and grabs me by the head. She begins to rock her hips, grinding her pussy on my face and I love it. I breath deeply to take in the unmistakable and unique smell of pussy. I pull one of my hands from her ass, bring it around front and slide my thumb in to her pussy as I continue to suck on her clit. It doesn’t take long before her breath begins to quicken. I can feel the muscles in her legs begin to tighten. Then her orgasm begins. Her pussy is pulsating, squeezing my thumb. She’s moaning. Her chest is heaving. She continues to hold on to my head and grind on my face. A flood of pussy juice begins to flow. I continue to make love to her pussy with my mouth until she steps away. She’s still breathing heavily and lets out a slight giggle. She gathers herself, looks me in the eye, lays down between my legs and begins to suck my cock. I’m in heaven. The water is rushing behind me. The warm sun is beating down on our naked bodies. I lay back and enjoy her warm, wet mouth as it strokes my cock. I’m not sure if I’ve ever been his aroused. As I begin to feel my own orgasm approaching, I gently pull her head up from my cock. I am rock hard. My cock is pulsating. She raises up on to all fours and turns around. Her perfect ass in the air and right in my face. I lean forward and begin to lick her butthole. She wasn’t expecting that. After the initial surprise, I can tell she loves it because she arches her back to make it easier for me to get to. Her butt tastes like her pussy because all of that pussy juice spread between her cheeks after I ate her pussy.
I stand up and pull her up with me. We’re now chest to chest and staring in to each other’s eyes. I lift her right leg up with my left hand. I put my arm under her leg to hold it up. With my right hand, I guide my cock toward her pussy. We’re staring in to each other’s eyes. We both want it so bad. I slowly slide my cock in to her teenage pussy and it is almost overwhelming. Once my cock is completely buried in her sweet pussy, I stop and stare at her, looking her up and down. I can’t believe this is happening. I’ve known her for several years and could have never imagined something like this happening.
We continue to stand on that rock, her leg up over my arm. My right hand moves between her back and the back of her head as I support most of her weight. I’m being gentle, sliding my cock in and out with long, slow strokes. I’m certain she’s had sex before, but I doubt more than a time or two. I now reach down and slide my right hand under her left leg and completely pull her up. Her legs are dangling over my arms and my hands are holding her ass. She places her hands behind my head. I pull her body close to mine so her clit can rub against my body. I want her to cum again, this time on my cock. She gets in to it and begins to rock her legs up and down. Our pace is quicker than before. I’m still taking long strokes, but now my cock is sliding in and out of her sweet pussy rapidly. Her head is now on my shoulder, she’s breathing heavily in to my ear. I can tell she’s close to cumming. She’s panting and whimpering a little. She loves the way I’m making her feel. I’m barely holding back my own orgasm. She then begins to moan loudly and buck her hips. She’s cumming on my cock. I start to slam my cock hard and deep. I’m cumming deep in her pussy. She pulls up and we stare in to each other’s eyes as we cum together. The sweet expressions on her face as she cums for me are beautiful. My orgasm lasts longer than I can ever remember it lasting. I pull her up off of my cock and see my cum drip from her sweet, pink pussy on to the rock below. I set her down and kiss her sweetly. We smile at each other as we catch our breath. She bends down and slides my cock back in to her mouth. She enjoys the taste of my cum and her own pussy juice. She gets dressed, kisses me one more time and hurriedly get her dog and heads back the way she came. I lay there for a few more minutes before deciding to get in to the water. I realize I need to wash the smell of sex and teenage pussy off my cock before I go home.
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I would love some feedback. Thanks.
Great pace and description. Was no dialogue the plan?
I’d like to give u my opinion on the story as I do write erotic stories as well. Tbh ur story is really a good story, but it’s more of a porn scene than a story. I like the description of the characters & the environment around. The sex was nasty and not really arousing. An arousing story doesn’t need so much sex, it is more about the dialogue and the acts of the characters. The sex scene u just described is what I see in almost every regular porn scene, which became a cliche. As this is a story, u need to focus more on the characters, their feelings and the conversation between them. Try adding dirty language to the conversation, it’ll give it a stronger effect. Also try adding some funny lines, it is such an important component of erotic stories. Overall, I give u a vote, but next time try to create sth new not regular porn.
I loved it!