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Part 1: Change
Autumm woke up and found that she could not move. The side of her face felt wet with saliva. She was gagged. Not having her glasses, Autumm could not make out much in the dim room. She was aware the was stripped nude, and she was strapped into stirrups. Her neck was intensely sore.
“Finally woke up eh?”
She glanced left and made out the figure of a hulking man.
“I pumped you full of a drug to prep you. It should kick in any second now.”
Her body felt swollen and hot, but the effect was grossly pronounced around her groin and nipples. Autumn’s vulva was slick with juice trickling out, and unnaturally swollen and red. Her labia were puffy and hot. Meanwhike, her nipples were purple, engorged, and tender.
Desperately, she tried to protest, but being heavily sedated, she could inly manage some weak whimpers.
Shocks rippled through her body as the man roughly handled her teats.
“Ah? That much just from me feeling your milkers? What if I grabbed your nipples…”
Shaking her head desperately, she resigned herself to her fate as he put his mouth on one of her oversized nipples. It was the size if a cotton candy grape, and she convulsed and moaned as he ran his tongue up and down her nipple as he sucked her teat.
He released it with a pwah.
“I was wrong to call them milkers…Let me fix that.”
He walked behind her, and she heard the sounds of rummaging for a bit before he returned with a machine resembling a shop vac, albeit with more tubes and suction cups.
She felt two pricks under her breasts, and a heat filled them. Milk beaded from her nipples, as her breasts grew heavier. The man put two hoses ending in bullet-shaped cups onto her her nipples, and they began to suck. Her nipples filled the cups, and went deep into the valve. A third cup went over her swollen vulva, and she felt it begin to pump. A pins and needles feeling spread as her full lips expanded into the vacuum.
He then flipped the the table she was strapped on, and her breasts dangled towards the ground. Her vulva was now flowing with juices and a puddle formed on the floor.
“Ah, one last thing.”
He slid something slimy and knotted into her anus. Autumn convulsed as inch after inch continued to snake into her intestines, feeling as each knob stretches her entrance. Finally, she felt a giant ball stretch her asshole before going in with a pop. The long tube was now stuck in her. The man pushed a button and she felt the long snake begin to push against the walls of her colon, then she felt many small pricks inside of her. The man then poured a liquid in it, and she felt it pool at the end. The head had bloomed in her, and she felt the length begin to massage her insides, stretching her tract.
“That should stretch you out.”
“Have fun, I’ll leave you like this for a bit.”
And a bit turned out to be hours.
Chapter 1.5: Transformation
“Wakey wakey!”
Autumn woke up, and cried as she realized the events prior were not a bad dream. Her once pert breasts were now huge and veiny, and her virgin pussy was a slobbering pile of meat. The cup had grown double its size. Her once tight asshole was now bulging around the ball, which had grown since it first popped in. The man ripped out the needles in her udders, before popping her nipples out of the cup. A spurt of milk wet the ground, as Autumn took in the changes to her body. Her nipples were now even more obscene, long and thick as hotdogs with milk trickling down. The color was an even deeper purple and her areola were now big as saucers. The man remove the cup around her pussy, and the ground was soaked with her juices. Finally, he pushed the button in her anal snake and pulled it out of her asshole. Copious amounts of juice poured out of her, and she felt the snake easily come out of her now wet and loose anus. It felt much more sensitive, and leaked constantly.
“I have some friends for you!”
Autumn could make out a bucket near him, but what was in it evaded her sight. He pulled out 2 large starfish, and put them on her sensitive nipples. Immediately, she felt them suck in her nipples before feeling a piercing pain. She felt her long nipples begin to expand. Her nipples were being hollowed out! The starfish continued to suck and expand, and she felt he nipples stretch wider. Their rasping tongues continued to bury deep into her breast, as she thrashed about from pleasure and pain. Their tongues finally bottomed out, and she felt the starfish feed on her milk and fatten up. Their tongues now begain to swirl around in her breasts and her holes gushed with juices as she came. As they fed, their tongues became fatter and longer, and she felt them begin to thrust in and out of her breasts.
The man picked up two more starfish, with thicker, longer tongues. He pasted them onto her holes and she felt them rhythmically thrust in and out of her pussy and asshole.
Finally, he ungagged her, only to paste another starfish onto her face. She felt its tongue reach deep into her stomach, and begin to exude liquid. She lapped hungrily at its tongue instinctually, and felt her body warm as her hips began to flare and her skin get softer. An odd ache radiated from her abdomen as her ovaries expanded, filled with an inhumane amount of eggs. Her muscle began to deteriorate as her rear became more plush. An ache filled her pelvis as her body begged to bred.
She felt the starfish in her groin and anus extend their tongues get even longer, and coil around her insides, lapping wildly at her walls. The tongue in vagina felt for her cervix and entered it. Meanwhile, the one in her asshole began to expand and plug her tract. Both began to pump a thick hot liquid into her. Soon she was packed full. The starfish that was on her vulva sealed her up with a thick plug and plopped off. However, the one on her anus had its tongue bloom into many fine tendrils as it began to modify her bowels.
Hundreds of tiny needles once again embedded themselves into her soft intestinal flesh and began pumping chemicals into her, changing her biology. the starfish spat out a final jelly like plug, sealing in the serum deep in her gut, before it too fell off. Her stomach sloshed uncomfortably from the liquid in her stomach, womb, and gut.
The man pulled the starfish from her mouth, but Autumm was too high on the hormones and pleasure inflicted upon her to protest, nor think straight.
“After this, your asshole can be impregnated. There is also another side effect…The starfishes’ cum modified your wombs so that any creature can impregnate you.”
The two starfish on her nipples finally had their fill, now fat sacs of flesh. They began to gurgle as they turned the sustenance from her breasts into countless eggs. Their fat tongues expanded until her breasts and nipples were taut and shiny, before emptying their eggs deep into her bosom. After dozens were laid, she felt a gush of hot cum inflate her lukpy egg-filled breasts, and the starfish capped off her nipple holes with a thick gel before plopping onto the ground wetly.
Her nipples got even more obscene, now sporting gaping, wet, hungry holes, and her breasts were inhumanely swollen with eggs, seed and milk. The weight was too much, and the gel gave as eggs slowly slid out of her nipples, one by one, slick with milk and cum.
Autumn felt a sharp prick in her neck, and heard barking as she blacked out.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/c5pt1w/femalebody_modificationdrugsbreast
Omg! Please write another that turned me on so much, I wish that could happen to me