Genre: Erotica/ Horror
Word Count: Almost 12k
Critique: This is my very first Erotica and I picked a really hard one to get feedback on because the story is so violent (racial slurs/rape). Any feedback is welcome.
Most of the backstory is in the first 1/4, while the erotica kicks in for the rest of the story.
https://storiesonline.net/s/19908:211352/chapter-1-the-war-of-2020
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/b8fd7f/the_war_of_2020