[This is pretty much a prologue tester / teaser opener to see if this garners enough interest that i would write out the series or leave it as it is like a one shot.]
It was the usual cold freezing night in the middle of the winter season here at New York where at one of the particular apartment blocks of the city’s many other middle income affordable apartment block projects that this is focused on. A simple Wednesday night where outside the temperature was already getting colder and colder together with reports earlier that morning of a massive snow storm about to hit the city were coming true as slowly the loud roar of nature came and built up from a light tune to a huge crescendo of noice as snow flew and fell covering every inch of ground in greater and larger amounts of snow.
Yet even with that the usual things were going on that night in many of the other units even though with the storm happening as they all had heated rooms and had prepared for the storm. Couples were enjoying each other’s company, small families having their personal family time together, single guys & girls just resting after a full day of hard work and other things as well. Yet there was one particular unit on the fifth floor of the block that behind the front door of unit 504 that the slight and barely audible sound of a bed frame thumping and slamming against the walls of the bedroom could be heard over the storm.
*Thump* *Thump* *Thump* *Thump* *……. Again and again as the sound repeated loudly inside of the unit where it seemed like it was almost two thumps for every second that past.*
Inside the unit where if anyone looking around the well decorated area with a homely loving kind of feeling could see just how much the couple loved each other from the decorations they had all over their home. Photos of their marriage day was on frames on a nearby shelf as well above the LCD television screen that faced the couch in the living room. Looking on it anyone could see just how happy they were, the young incredibly beautiful asian woman smiling widely as she looked radiant in her white wedding dress as for the man he is an asian man as well with a modest looking kind of face that wasn’t handsome but neither was he ugly as many people had commented before that he was a weird fit to be with a woman like her that seemed to be out of his league. Yet he looked incredibly happy in the photo as well as he was holding onto his fiance now turned official wife while he smiled brightly as well.
Yet why was that very same man now laying down there on the living room couch in the dark with nothing but a thinly piece of towel covering his body as he shivered and shaked there as between his legs his small tiny manhood was hard and erected as he willed himself with excruciating difficulty not to touch and stroke himself under the towel that was covering his body as he strained his ears to listen to the sounds of his marital bed rocking hard, squeaking and slamming against the walls of his marital bedroom as his eyes stared focusing on the photos of his marriage day. Recalling the times when he and his wife were still dating in college and the amount of love she had for him in her eyes each time she looked at him back then.
*”That’s right take it take it you little asian slut. Your my bitch now!” the voice of a man coming over the thin walls separating the marital bedroom from the living room could be heard yet not a sound of a woman’s voice could be heard at all besides the rhythmic slamming of a bed against the wall*
He remembered the times that he and her laid together in bed during their university days and stared into each other’s eyes after they had sex and was falling asleep in each others arms.
“I love you.”
“I love you too.”
*The thumping of the bed against the wall was getting more and more faster now as anyone could tell the man was reaching his climax very soon.*
*”Im getting so close now… Moan baby dont hold back on me! You want this as much as I do so just let loose!” As the man could be heard panting harder & harder now but a few seconds later the soft moaning of a woman could be heard and was getting louder rising towards a feverish pitch as every second passed as it became a mixture of squeals as well*
He remembered the day he knelt down on his knees at the same place he first asked her to be his girlfriend but instead then he had asked her to marry him. He recalled so vividly the tears in her eyes as she said yes and they hugged each other so tightly as their lips pressed against each other so hard.
*The thumping and slamming of the bed was too fast and crazy now as it would almost seem like the bed might just break or slam through the wall itself but finally there it came as the slamming stopped so suddenly and immediately as it was followed by the loud roaring of a man climaxing and having his most primal need to mate be satisfied as his carnal needs were met. Loud grunt after grunt could be heard as his ball sacks contracted, his ass cheeks flexed hard and his shaft jerking with every shot he let out at the same time with the high pitched squeal of the woman climaxing as well at the same time as her body does its work as nature intended as it milked and squeezed out everything the man could offer and give to her. It would be several tens of seconds before finally all was quiet*
The man on the couch with his cock straining so hard and painfully in his pants as he couldn’t touch himself at all even as he heard the two in the room just having enjoyed an amazing orgasm together. But he was thankful that its ended so he can get to sleep and cursing at the same time as he wanted to hear more!
As the minutes ticked by in silence and somehow his tired cold body suddenly became more and more sleepy as he was so close to falling asleep was when it happened again.
*The sounds of a single slam…then another…and another….and another until it built up till a steady rhythm and doesnt sound like it would be stopping anytime soon as well.*
*”Hope your not tired because there’s going to be a third…then a fourth….then a fifth…..we got the entire night with this snow storm so dont expect your getting any sleep tonight!”*
Hearing it start up again the man under the towel felt his small cock getting rock solid hard again as the sounds of highly satisfyingly sexual intercourse echoed all over his apartment. Sighing hard as he finally gave into temptation as his hand reached out from under the towel as it moved towards grabbing the lotion and tissue paper roll on the nearby coffee table. He definetly wasnt getting any sleep tonight as well.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/b2upmp/unexpected_falling_out
Your story may well have been good, but your complete lack of punctuation had me punching out after the first two paragraphs.