Shiver Down My Spine

Hope you folks enjoy reading this as much as I did writing it. I made this a couple of years ago. Thought it was pretty good but didn’t get a lot of attention. I’m posting again, just to gauge reaction in a sub with a little more activity.

Part two in the comments…

Based on a semi-real event. I took some liberties with the details.

Feedback is very much encouraged. I hate posting these things and only getting tumbleweeds as a response. I’d like to know if I’m any good at this stuff. Ya know?

Feel free to ask questions etc…

We hadn’t seen each other for years, but our chats on the internet as of late have been getting kind of, well… steamy. Nothing specifically overt, but suggestive and sultry, and just really hot. Oh how I revel in the wonderful age of social media.

So I’m a little nervous. We’ve been talking about seeing each other for a while, but it’s a long distance thing now. She only comes into town once in a while to see family. This visit though she says she has some time. We’re going to meet at the boardwalk on the beach.

It’s sunny and warm, just on the edge of hot but not quite. Enough to make you sweat a little, but it feels good when the breeze kicks in.

I arrive early, and so I see her from afar as she approaches the walkway up to the steps and then the boardwalk proper. She’s older now, it shows, and I think to myself, so am I. I imagine that when she sees me she’ll think the same thing. She’s still got that smile though, those beautiful eyes, and that pouty mouth that drove me crazy back in school, so long ago.

She spots me. Her smile goes wide and her pace quickens. No pussy-footing around, she walks right up, wraps her arms around me, and goes in for a quick kiss. I’m surprised but I go with it, and I’m rewarded with a longer, deeper kiss, than I think she’d intended at first. She squeezes me hard and I reciprocate. Holy hell, she smells amazing. Some kind of musky perfume mixed with the sea salt air and just a hint of her natural smell and fresh sweat. I find myself turned on and have to take a deep breath to keep myself composed.

I push her away from me just so I can see her face and take her in a little. She only reluctantly allows me to break the embrace, but smiles big when she sees that I’m looking her over. She takes a dance-like step away from me, spins around one time to show off her sundress, and as she turns, flips it up a little in the back exposing her cheeks framed by the bikini she has on underndeath. She giggles at my surprise while I do my best to not turn red-faced.

“Older maybe”, I think to myself but damnit, she’s holding it together really well. “Turned on” is turning into full blown horny, and much faster than I anticipated.

We walk the boardwalk from end to end, making small talk, touching each other lightly, little carresses, and holding hands. Once every few moments she playfully bumps her hips into mine pushing me away, but then pulling me back with her hand entwined with my own. We round the bend at the end of the walkway and then out onto the beach. She pulls me in close, nudges my nose with hers and then comes in for another kiss, deep and long. After a few moments we both come up for air, giggle a little at each other, and then she asks me if I’d like to get a drink. We take the short walk to the beachside dive bar, drink one while reminiscing, and then another and then at some point I lose count. I’m about to say I’ve had enough when she grabs me by the hand and leads me out to the parking lot. Another breathtaking smooch, or two, and she invites me up to her room.

After some heavy groping and petting in the elevator we make it inside. With no hesitation, and before the door is even closed well behind us she strips down and heads for the shower. The excitement sends a chill down my spine. I feel the hairs on my neck standup, and I can see the jiggle of her ass as she walks towards the shower replaying in mind.

“Join me” she somewhat ‘commands’ without turning around. I’m eager to obey. I strip my clothes off, and even I’m surprised at the hardness of my erection as I make my way to the shower.

I ease back the shower curtain and slip in beside her. The water is a little chilly, immediately doubling my goosebumps and I notice her skin is as goose pimpled as my own and her nipples are standing at attention. Her face and chest are a little reddened from blushing. She’s got her eyes closed and shes massaging shampoo into her hair. I take her momentary blindness as an opportunity to take her in with my eyes. I’m amazed at how gorgeous she is. Blonde, medium sized breasts with nipples that point straight away from her. Tanned skin contrasting with her blonde hair and bikini-line. She has a plump but taught ass and legs that are no stranger to a workout. Her eyes are a little more blue than green, and she has a striking mouth with pouty lips and dimples.

She turns around and I help her rinse the shampoo from her hair. We both try to clean ourselves while we are bumping into each other and laughing at our own inability to keep our hands off of each other. We giggle and laugh some more… step out and then dry each other off in about as serious a manuever as we’ve managed so far.

We let our respective towels fall to the floor near to simultaneously. We’re looking into each other’s eyes, grinning like teenagers. She reaches out for my hip with one arm, pulling me in, while the other hand and arm reach down and grab my cock. She grips it tight just above the base, tugs a little pulling me closer, like my dick is a leash. I don’t mind and my smile tells her I don’t.

I wonder for a second if I’ve ever been this hard before. I’m swolen so much that it’s almost painful. Almost. She keeps a tight grip with the one hand, while caressing with the other. The duality of the sensations has me only barely in control. My breathing is coming in rapid bursts and my heart seems like it might come out of my chest. I feel a little light headed and gently steer our activities toward the bed.

As I guide us that way, the backs of her legs make contact with the edge of the bed, and she falls over onto it. She closes her eyes, stretches… let’s out a big wonderful sigh, opens her eyes again, arms out to the sides and then lifts and spreads her legs at the same time, resting her ankles on my shoulders as I lean into her. I bend down for a kiss, her legs drape my shoulders and I feel my cock come into contact with the little bit of bush she keeps trimmed just above her clitoris. My cock jumps and flinches outside of my control. We kiss for a while. I gently squeeze her tits and roll her nipples around with my tongue. She reaches down and begins to rub my cock head against her clit and then a little lower, and when it slips and slides I know how wet shes become.

I can only barely stand it. It’s like being on fire. I bend to kiss her again, and then drop to my knees. My mind is telling me to go in slowly… work up to it, but I can’t help myself. I push my face into her wet mound and find her clit with my tongue. She wiggles and moans and though I was worried about going too fast, she seems appreciative, so I dip down lower, scoop some of that wetness with my tongue and spread it around her clit. I lick and flick and massage. I lift the other hand and slip two fingers into her just a tiny bit. I’m rewarded with a contraction and another moan. Her legs tighten around me pulling my face in tighter I keep slowly maneuvering her clitoris back and forth while I slip my fingers in and out oh so slowly. She tries to move her hips to drive my fingers deeper but I pull back, forcing the anticipation to grow a little more.

Eventually I have to come up for air. I grab a pillow case and wipe my wet chin… smiling all the while. She stays laid back on the bed. Smiling up at me, swishing her hips back and forth with her legs spread, showing off. She touches herself… massages her clit and I see that she’s staring at my dick.

I take the few steps to the side of the bed and begin to slip down beside her when she spins around, pushes me down none too gently, raises herself up to her knees and crawls over to situate herself just above my groin. She takes my dick into one hand and balls in the other, bends down, and without any hesitation takes me into her mouth almost to the base. She holds it there for a moment and I almost convulse with the shock of it. The warmth, the wetness, again I can barely contain myself. It feels so amazing and I think I might cum right then. She sits halfway up, letting me slip from her mouth. The cold air tingles and I shiver a bit. She dips her tongue down onto the head and ever so gently licks at the tip, pulling with her tongue the pre-cum that’s beginning to form there.

She licks the tip some more. Takes just the head into her mouth and begins to stroke it with her lips and tongue. In and out, she’s fucking my cock with her mouth. She begins to go faster and grips the base tight with her hand, stroking in a counter rhythm with her mouth. I know I can’t last. I think to warn her, but my hips are bucking outside of my conscious control. She uses her other hand to push me down onto the bed, never missing a beat. The head slips in and out, in and out… and then she goes down deep and holds it there for what must have been two seconds by feels like an eternity, then raises her head up, only to go down deep again, again, and then I can’t hold it any longer. I feel the pressure in my thighs, my ass, the contraction beneath my balls intensifies and then I cum so hard that my heart feels like its about to come out of my chest. I get lightheaded, a little dizzy, and let out a great big moan while my cock pumps cum into her mouth while she swallows it with every push of my hips driving the head into the back of her mouth.

I fall back onto the bed. Somewhere in the back of my mind I wonder when I sat up.

She rolls over onto the bed beside me, pulling up close into a snuggle, her arms wrapped around me, she says “take a few minutes to recover, but then I need you to fuck me”.

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