Hey guys,
I’d love if you could read my new erotica story- “Fucking Lena”
[https://chyoa.com/story/Fucking-Lena.20239?game=reset](https://chyoa.com/story/Fucking-Lena.20239?game=reset)
Logline-
You’ve always been a slacker, but somehow managed to keep Lena by your side. A strange series of events will open your possibilities for MMF and FFM threesomes, lesbian fucking and cheating.
I would love to hear your feedback but please be gentle! It’s my first time writing an erotic story of this caliber.
You have different options and can choose different chapters. This range from things to say to ways of fucking.
There’s 18710 words in total, you can get different amounts depending on what you choose.
I’m interested mostly on these aspects-
1. Is it well written, hot and believable?
2. Is there balance between the sex scenes and the more expository parts?
3. What would you change or improve for the next time?
Thanks a lot and I hope you enjoy it.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/aq0hjr/fucking_lena_choose_your_own_adventure
That was awasome. Good job.