[Short] Captivate

This is one of my earliest attempts to leak what lurks in my brain onto paper.. or rather, digital space.

Your feedback, harsh and gentle, will be highly appreciated and will help me grow.

Enjoy.

و من الوحدة عوالم خفية تولد.

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I was already aware of my surroundings, the cold layer of air that coated my naked body rushed through the hills and valleys, climbed up the mountains and rushed through the jungle of hair, both shaved and wild. The blanket humbly covered parts of my legs and belly, however, it proudly left my half asleep shaft and large sacked balls i’ve always joked about with my friends. My fingers quickly ran against my skin, some spots were itchy, some cried for attention. As far as i can remember, i’ve always masturbated before going to sleep, then gave myself morning pleasure as soon as i woke up. It has, of course, worn me out to the point that i no longer dream, except when i skip self pleasure due to being too tired. It has also made me more focused in the morning, although a bit more susceptible to losing track of time sinking in fantasies while at work.
Sometimes, i imagined a silhouette of “her”, the one that may or may not exist. Her smile was gentle, i couldn’t describe her well, she was blurry, like my future. I tend to find her imaginary bite marks and heckies all over my neck. She loved to dig her beautifully polished nails into my shoulder and back too, today she had them in neon yellow.
I get up, my heavy body swaying, my soles ache as i take a few steps to the bathroom. Everything is so cold in the morning. I tend to take a dumb only once a day, during the morning. That, however, didn’t prevent the occasional ghost farts that plagued me with having to enter the bathroom at work. She follows me in, locks the door, even when nobody’s there except me and her in my mind. She sits on the toilet, spreads her legs apart and draws a broken smile on her half asleep face. I kneel closer, appreciating her understanding of my often considered sick fetish. I watched her pee, the warmth almost warming up the cold floor. Golden showers, i’ve enjoyed the idea of appreciating a woman’s bodily fluids, especially those that are often neglected. After she was done, i helped her wash, making sure the cold water rests in my palm to warm up a bit before gently rubbing her. She kept a tiny batch of hair that i usually teased her about, she teased back asking: Who had it stuck between his teeth after an hour long dessert session?
We giggled, she hugged me from behind as i brushed my teeth, her tiny arms unable to grasp my huge body. After finishing, it was her turn. I loved playing around in her mouth. She had an oral fixation, and she was my fixation. I parted her pouty lips, her beautiful row of teeth welcomed me. I made sure to kiss her gently before she brushed her teeth. She objected, but i whisper against her lips something romantic, that she’s always beautiful and desirable no matter what. I usually helped her brush her teeth, mainly because i enjoyed watching her suck on the brush and fight me back when i tickled her and made her spit the paste all over us. After we finished, it was time to get dressed. She sat on the edge of our bed, waiting for me to finish. I got dressed rather quickly, it was her turn now. I went to her closet, she had to wear formal cloths to work but, today was her free day to wear whatever she wanted. We were going out after work, i wanted to dress my flower the way i wanted to see her afterwards. I picked a white dress with tiny flowers around its collar. Sleeveless, it needed a complimentary black short jacket. Then, i pulled a matching pair of string thong and a lacy bra. She giggled, knew i was up to being kinky tonight. I helped her hook the bra, and after a long french kiss to her bottom lips, i turned her around. Her beautiful ass cheeks were tingling and had goosebumps. I kissed each cheek respectfully, parting them to give her winking slightly darker asshole a kiss and have my breakfast. She was moaning, asked me to stop before we decide, like many times before, to skip work and fuck for almost 16 hours non stop. I giggled, popped a tiny bubblegum and chewed on it quickly. I climbed up slowly, my lips pecking her back, up her spine and gently swaying around her shoulder. Her slender neck bent my way as she was ticklish. I gently leaned over her ear, whispered with my warm breath coating her beautiful ear folds.
She blushed, i usually knew what to say to make her disoriented for most of her day before she’s back into my arms again. I helped her into her thong before gently sliding her into the dress and jacket. She smiled, knowing i was about to enjoy myself in the next phase.
I went to the shoes cabinet and opened it to reveal its fruits. I picked up two options that matched her dress. A black heeled sandal that had crossing strings all around the top of her feet, going around her ankles a few times and up her leg was the first. The second one was a red stiletto that had a single loop that goes around the ankle. I knelt before her, she crossed her legs to give me easier access. Her feet were marvelous. She kept them clean, i helped her keep them fresh and beautiful. My lips were eager, i couldn’t wait to press them against her smooth skin. The taste always gave me the time of my life. I pecked her foot rapidly, from side to side, along its top and raised it up to enjoy her soles. They were cold, my lips and breath helped warm them up. I welcomed each of her toes into my mouth, making sure to brush my tongue against them, giving them a thorough massage and coating them with my love. Her feet were getting wet, she asked for the red stiletto to keep them warm and i helped her slide into them, my lips still running against her skin upwards and down. She looked at me, her eyes told what words couldn’t fathom. I climbed up, she came down, our lips met and we almost fainted as we usually forget to breath.

Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/afjmbh/short_captivate

2 comments

  1. Enjoyed! Did very well at being descriptive, when reading you can picture what is going on, keep writing…I’d personally love to read more from you.

  2. I really liked it, especially given that this was a mix between kinky and romantic!

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