Hi guys! So, I wrote my first ever Erotic Shortstory and I would love some feedback! Also, english isn’t my first language so please bear with me for spelling mistakes etc.. Other than that, I hope you’ll enjoy it, I know I enjoyed writing it.. ;)
[page 1](https://i.redd.it/ky2pjph5rsx11.png)
[page 1.1](https://i.redd.it/36ybind4rsx11.png)
[page 2](https://i.redd.it/podbe4m0rsx11.png)
[page 3](https://i.redd.it/l315w52yqsx11.png)
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/9w97t2/misty_evening_in_berlin_my_first_ever_erotic