I took all the chapters so far and merged them, as well as fixed the awful spelling and grammer, I also added a few extras and tidied up.
You can read it fully at r/https://amaazingpages.wordpress.com/2018/10/20/the-ymiri-saga-chapter-1-6/ as it is now too long to post here completely.
Those familiar with warhammer 40’000 lore and background will probably understand the context of the series better, but I think anyone can follow along aswell, reminder that the series is VERY adult and NSFW and contains depictions of non consent and slavery.
Please leave feedback as I will be continuing the series and suggestions will help. enjoy!
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/9pxg6c/warhammer_40k_themed_story_series_the_ymiri_saga
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