Meeting parents of your significant other is always nerve wracking, but for him I knew his anxiety was running high as we got in the car preparing to get on the road. It’s different meeting the parents when you know you’ve found your person. You’ve got to make the best impression possible. He decided to drive so he could focus on the road and not the impending introduction. I knew I had to come prepared, be at the very top of my game. I had to keep him happy and satisfied, keep his anxiety at bay. I even brought surprises for him.
The drive is a few hours, so I waited until we were about an hour in and on a stretch of highway that was a bit less traveled. That’s when I pulled out the bottle of wine I had stashed in my bag and he immediately knew what I was up to. I popped out the cork and drank straight from the bottle. Then I pulled out the collar next. He had gotten me one as a presentation of ownership. I normally let him decide when it is worn, but me willingly putting it on is my complete sign of submission. He knows I’m there for him. To give him whatever he needs and I already see him grow beneath his jeans. The bulge is hard and obvious. That only sets me off more. I clip the leash to the collar and allow him to wrap the excess around his right fist.
Now he has the control. I’m there for him, and that is my favorite position to be in. He tightens the lead and pulls my head down to growing bulge in his jeans. I’m instructed to unzip his pants and I do so, hungrily. I love being his everything. I love giving him every desire he wishes upon. As soon as I zip his jeans and pull him out he springs in to full. I lick his shaft as he places his hand on the back of my head with the leash still coiled around. My mouth encircles the smoothness of his tip and I can tell he is ready. I feel the pressure of his hand on the back of my head as my lips move down his entirety. He pushes me to my gagging point and I can feel his smile behind me. The pressure of his hand releases as he allows me to take my liberty moving up and down, my tongue tasting it all as I lift up and circle the tip. I hear little intakes of breath as he is enjoying his toy, his sub.
I know he wants more so I tighten my lips and increase my speed. He tells me to go faster and I know he is about to release. I feel his hand wrap around my braid covering the leash. He takes over. Using my mouth as his depository. I feel every pulse as he unloads in to my mouth. I slowly suck off as I’m allowed to sit back up in my seat. He releases my hair and the leash and tells me to drink more wine.
We are coming close to a rest stop and I know he wants more. We park in the back lot where only a few might see. I’m half way through my bottle now and he knows I’m there for him. He moves me to the back seat, leash still in hand. He tells me to get on all fours and keep my head down and ass up.
I feel him slide two fingers in to my vagina with ease. I’m already dripping from having pleased him so quickly. Then he quickly shoves four in and I can’t help but gasp. He tells me to stay quiet and keep my head down. He shapes his and into a cone shape using all five fingers and shoves them in repeatedly. I try so hard, but I know I’m going to release. I reach my pinnacle by accident and squirt all over his hand. I know I’m in trouble for coming without permission.
Then I feel the spank before it’s even delivered. I know what’s coming next so I bite down on my hand to keep myself from making noise. He shoves his hand back inside me and I hear him spit on his cock before he thrusts it inside my asshole. I let out a muffled yelp and again I can feel that smile. He makes quick work of the rest so we can get back on the road. Pounding with cock and fist as I do my best to stay quiet. I can feel the build up again, but I know he is getting close. I know I’ll be allowed this time. He whispers behind me that he’s about to cum and we simultaneously release. He unloads for a second time, but inside my ass. Then we clean up quickly and get back in the car. He lets me finish my wine because I satisfied him in a surprising way. We get back on the road and I’m confident we are set for success in our trip.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/9aar69/road_trip_mf
Do you writers even check the output that Reddit gives you after submitting a story?
Two spaces in front of a sentence turns the text into a code block, which prevents line breaks forming naturally.
I realize that for writers it’s common practice to start new paragraphs with two spaces, but on Reddit that just doesn’t work the way you expect!
My advice, learn the syntax of Markdown before submitting here.
Don’t just copy and paste whatever you wrote in Word and click submit, but rather press the preview button, check the output, fix any errors and then click submit.
First one I actually read , good job ! Hot. Wish I would have been there type of hot. Again, good job writing.
Just keep writing and avoid anything negative. It’s a very good story. This story can be something even greater later. You can develop the characters and give backgrounds. This story could easily be a short novel of sorts.