Hi there!
So my girlfriend and I both love to read and write, although neither of us have dabbled in erotica before. So to spice things up a little bit, I decided to write her a story recapping one of our earliest encounters.
* indicates the start of the sexual portion.
Any feedback welcome before I give it to her :) Thanks!
*We started walking down to my room after chatting at the dinner table. You had just finished work, your first shift at the Farmer’s Market. You didn’t have a great night of sleep: your right hip was nagging you all day, you were sore from standing all evening, you were thoroughly exhausted. In anticipation of how much your body would be aching, I planned earlier in the day to treat you. Unbeknown to you, I had gone to Target to get some massage oil, and I already set out my candle on my nightstand to set the mood. As you turned the doorknob to enter my room, you still had no idea what was to come.*
*Immediately upon entering, you unbuttoned and unzipped your jeans, and removed your black long sleeve shirt. Then you proceeded to ask me for a pair of shorts and t-shirt to wear as you complained of the strong stench of smoke radiating from them. I responded, “Don’t bother. You’re fine.”*
*Slightly stunned, you turned to me and shot a smile. “Thanks, baby.” You trailed off as you threw your arms over my shoulders to embrace me for a few short moments before you crawled into bed. As you made your way under your sheets, I told you to wait. Turning to me, you noticed how I had turned off the lights and lit a black candle. After quickly taking in the sentiment you responded, “Aww, baby! I love this.” Light scents of sage filled the air as you turned on your right side gazing at me.*
*“I also stopped and picked up some of this today. I am going to try it on you!” I replied as I pulled out the massage oil, handing over the translucent purple tube to you to examine.*
*“Oh my God,, yes; finally! I can’t wait, babe!”*
*Immediately you got on top of the covers and turned onto your stomach. As you were doing that, I connected my phone to the speaker to play my singer/songwriter playlist that we had been accustomed to hearing while laying in my bed all those evenings turned late nights. You slowly shut your eyes as the many sensual memories we made to the playlist erupted in your mind. “Oh misty eye of the mountain below. Keep careful watch of my brothers’ souls” echoed in the background.*
*I climbed onto the bed, mounting you as I prepared to give you the rub down you deserved. I positioned my body so I was placed right on top of your ass. The click of the cap preceded the squirt of the oil onto my hands. Chills ran up your spine as the anticipation mounted. I warmed the thick and clear oil up in my hands by rubbing them together for a few seconds before placing my hands on the small of your back, one on either side of your spine. You gasped sharply, partially from the coolness of the oil and some from the erotic nature of my touch. I locked my elbows and began to slowly work my hands all the way up your spine, coating your back with slippery oil. You could already start to feel your pussy swell and ache; I had hardly begun.*
*You began to lightly groan as I worked each shoulder blade, pulling the muscles from the shoulder down towards the middle of your spine. The sores in your upper back from setting up and tearing down from work began to disappear. I lubricated my soft hands again then squeezed your traps with my thumb and tips of my fingers. Uncontrollably, you turned your head into the pillow and moaned out before turning again for air. Working my way up to your neck drove you crazy. I applied pressure off and on, with my thumbs, as I reached the back of your head; I repeated the same moving back down your neck. After a few times of this your breathing picked up as my hands slowly moved all the way down your back to the sides of your hips. The heavy, masculine, scent of the candle was more present as it tickled your nostrils. My cock pressed up into my shorts as my imagination wandered. What would it be like if I gripped those hips and slid my cock into her right now? You must have known I was in my head as you turned back to look at me longingly, wondering why I stopped taking care of you.*
*We held our gazes at one for a few moments. My fingers began to knead your hips; my thumbs doing the same on the upper part of your ass. The feather pillow absorbed your head as you laid it back down to rest. Your blue cotton panties began to darken as your pussy continued to tingle and heat up. The thought of my already soaked hands moving down south only escalated your situation. I began to emulate circle motions on your hips until I heard your breathing pick up, indicating your areas of sensitivity. Once I reached that point on your right hip, you gasped that familiar gasp again. Now fully erect, my cock flexed at the sound of your muffled voice. I carefully worked the tender area: applying short bursts of pressure with my fingertips, circling the soreness, and rubbing my thumb back and forth over it. Eventually you the soreness turn to numbness and relief. Your back and hips felt refreshed and exhausted from being worked on for such a period.*
**Without saying a word, your eyes opened once again as I pulled the sides of your panties down your legs. As I removed them, I couldn’t help but notice that your cum left a string connected from your pussy lips onto the cotton, only breaking once I pulled a few more inches away. Consequently, my cock flinched as precum leaked onto my boxers. I grinned as you had no idea I was nearly as wet as you. As I removed your underwear, I moved my way back up, lightly tracing my still oiled hands up the inside of your calves, grazing behind the ultra-sensitive spot on the back of your knees, and up the inside of your thighs. You could feel your heart throbbing faster and faster; you heard it as your left ear pressed deep into the pillow. “Please, Matt. Please.” You moaned in a soft and sexy voice. To respond, I decided to lightly rub my right pointer finger along the top of your pussy, collecting as much of yourself as I could.*
*“Shhhhh.” I whispered in your ear as my finger, covered in your juices, grazed around your lips. Your hips buckled up, the tip of my cock finally getting touched by your ass. You felt yourself dripping down, drenching your clit. Before you could lick your lips, mine locked onto yours for the first time since the massage began. I pulled back before licking your lips. I wanted to savor every drop I teased you with. Your pussy throbbed more. Your mind told you that you’d never received such amazing foreplay before. You knew you were on the edge of cumming and I hadn’t even touched you for more than a second.*
*“I need you NOW! Pleaseee…. Matt. I love you so much.” You said as you saw my body flickering in the candlelight. The darkness hid my face until the light revealed a devilish grin before taking it from your sight once again.*
*Without much teasing, I immediately inserted my middle finger deep inside you. You snapped your head back uncontrollably; it cracked twice. I removed it slowly as you tightened your grip on me, each knuckle rubbing tightly against the entrance of your pussy. I repeated the motion, with just my middle finger, a few more times to get you started. But unknown to me, you were right on the edge of exploding. As I pulled my middle finger out again, I turned my grip with my palms facing the bed and introduced another finger. I slipped inside of you and curled my fingers past your g-spot as I pulled out. I turned my fingers back again, not leaving you, as I leaned down into you whispering in your ear, “Are you ready to cum for me, baby?”*
*“Yes!” you moaned.*
*I sat myself back up, pulling my shaft out from between your ass. You couldn’t stop imagining my fingers being replaced with my dark, big, thick cock. How amazing it would feel once I was able to cum inside you, coating the walls of your already drenched pussy. Each shot going deeper inside you than my cock could reach. Your thoughts were immediately disrupted by my two fingers rapidly fucking you, each retraction pulling against your g-spot perfectly. You could feel the heat from your pussy spreading throughout your whole body. Your hips involuntarily thrusted downwards and your back arched. Your eyes slowly shut as the flame of the candle glew in your eyes. You threw your head back as your body tensed up. You screamed inaudibly as my fingers continued to rub inside you. I could feel your pussy beginning to shoot cum down my fingers as it leaked onto my sheets. Your body clenched for several moments, only able to moan, as I aggressively fucked your pussy with my sopping fingers. Slowly you began to regain control of your body after your release. My fingers moved out from inside you and I began sensually rubbing your clit as you laid evenly on the bed.*
*Your eyes gradually opened and you regained your vision. You turned your head to the left, only to breathe in the last breath of that wonderful sage candle before I blew it out, leading to total darkness.*
Source: reddit.com/r/gonewildstories/comments/8wf40g/by_candlelight_a_true_story_for_my_girlfriend