“Breaking Lilly” [BDSM] [Mdom] (First time writing erotic stories looking for feed back.)

There’s nothing better than breaking a brat. When the initial defiance turns to submission after the struggle it’s a feeling unmatched by anything. That’s why I decided to meet up with this woman, a woman named Lilly.

We first started chatting online, we meet on a BDSM discord server. She was popular there and liked to be a tease to the various users. She would post selfies of herself in really skimpy clothing but would never post full nudes, She’d take pics of herself hand braing when posting pictures of her tits or she would have her panties on when posting her ass. Honestly, I think the only reason she wanted to meet up was that we lived in the same city and no one else did.

Obviously, she was the queen of the server. Her fire red hair, pale skin and a voluptuous figure that had the right amount of thickness while still maintaining an hourglass shape. The way her tits looked squished against her arm in here selfies resembled a dam that was barely holding back its reservoir with her breast spilling over her forearm and her panties barely covering her ass in her pics leaving the bottom half of her cheeks to hang out but never revealing the whole cheeks.

The entire time we were in the coffee shop that we chose to rendezvous I was feeling a mix of many emotions disbelief, excitement, anxiety, and; annoyance. You see, as you may already know Lilly was a brat. And to meet me, she wore a typical little black dress that contrasted against her porcelain-like skin and black heels no doubt to get me excited and to put me down in case I showed up dressed casually. I was glad I decided to dress up and wear khaki chinos, brown dress shoes complimented by a belt of the same color and a navy blue sweater over a white dress shirt. However, that didn’t stop her from making all these backhanded compliments and would say things to get under my skin inside the coffee shop.

“You’re pretty tall but, not as tall as I thought you would be from your pics. you look about 6ft.”

“Wow, you’re toned. Not buff but, toned.”

“You have lovely blue eyes, they’re almost like mirrors I might be able to look see myself cum in them while we’re doing it later. If you’re able to make me cum that is and don’t just blow your load right away.”

Stuff like that, I was half irritated but half excited. I was determined to break her and make her beg me to let her cum, to tame this brat and have her submit to me would be my goal for tonight. So after we finished our coffees we went back to my apartment for the true reason we decided to meet up, for me to dom her.

As soon as we arrive at my apartment we waste no time and begin making out and fondling each other on the way to my bedroom I passionately kissed her and nibbled her ear while hiking up her dress to grope her ass and slap it she let out a sound that was mix between a moan and an eep from being caught by surprise. Her ass felt soft and jiggly in my hands and her tits were squished up against my chest as I guided her to my bedroom where I had everything we would need for the night already neatly laid out on the bed a scarlet colored silk rope, a paddle, a riding crop, a Hitachi wand, and a vibrator.

Lilly stepped away from for a minute to look at them and glanced back at me and said in a playful tone “Wow Leo you really thought ahead, And even took the time to neatly lay them out.”

She walked over to the bed to inspect the toys, checking them to see if they were cleaned properly, and getting a feel for the materials they were made of.

“The vibrators silicone and my favorite color red.”

She tapped herself lightly with the paddle and riding crop.

“This kind of sting, nice.”

“The rope feels nice and shouldn’t splinter and I like the scarlet color”

I walked over to her and asked her if she was ready to begin.

To which she replied, “if you are.”

“I’m not soft on any bratty behavior and for being so rude earlier I won’t let you cum until you beg me too and apologize for being such rude little slut”

“We’ll see about that she said smugly I think I could make you give up on trying to correct this rude little whore”

I walked over to her and turned her around and unzipped her dress and bent her over on to the bed and pulled off her bra and panties. I then I had her put her arms behind her back down by her lower back and proceed to restrain them with the rope by wrapping them up in a bight and knotting it and then I used the excess rope to secure the wand on top of her pussy resting it on her clit forming a rope harness with the wand in it.

I turned on the wand to the lower end of its dial to warm her up while I kissed her and played with her plump breast. I was in awe that I was the first person on the server to actually see them. I began groping them and teasing her nipples while kissing her she began breathing heavily and sighing as I began biting her neck and nibbling her ear.

I started teasing her tits, even more, I began kissing them, sucking her nipples and getting them erect as she began breathing and whimpering from the wand. I slid a finger down to her pussy and felt that it was getting wet, it clenched around my fingers as I slid them in, I then brought my fingers up to her mouth.

“Taste yourself you slut,” I said authoritatively as I slid my fingers into her mouth.

She began sucking them clean and moving her head back and forth up and down my fingers like she was sucking a dick and moaning more and more I turned the dial up more and her face that was pale white was now beet red and she began closing her eyes and whimpering. I knew she was close to cumming.
I turned off the wand and flipped her over.

“Wh-what!” She said surprised.

I grabbed the paddle and began hitting her on the ass with it until it was red. *Slap Slap Slap.* The sound of her plump ass getting spanked echoed throughout the room. She tried to hide her pain but she still let out whimpers of discomfort after each strike.

“If you don’t beg to cum I won’t let you and I’ll just keep hitting you until you cool down,” I told her in a stern voice.

“I’m still not gonna break! I’m already cooled down!.” She snapped back defiantly.

“Okay then,” I said smugly.

And proceeded to turn the wand back on her pussy was now completely soaked and so I decided to up the ante and slipped the vibrator in and turned it on as well. The wand and vibrator began overwhelming her making her moan extremely loudly.

“MMMMMMHHHHHHHH, AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH, UMPH!” She was completely incoherent from the overwhelming stimulation.

Her face was blushed red and she was sweating a lot. The fluids from her pussy were dripping out on her inner thighs and my sheets. She was so close to cumming.

“So are you gonna beg now?” I said teasingly.

“Please let me cum I’m sorry for being a rude little slut!” She barely managed to string together.

I turned up the dials on both the wand and vibrator to the max settings and let them do their jobs. She began moaning more and whimpering. She began to twitch and spasm from the pleasure and lost all control and start cumming loudly and hard. Her pussy wrapped around the vibrator squirting her juices on it she began shaking and twitching more and became completely incoherent. Until she made some weird high pitched noise that sounded like a mixture of a moan and a shriek of some kind which I took to mean she was almost done cumming. She stopped moving for a bit and I turned the wand and vibrator off. She was breathing heavily and panting.

“That…was intense,” she said exasperatedly.

“But you didn’t do anything yet.” She said looking at my crotch and seeing my erect cock.

I pulled off my clothes and revealed my dick that was thick, hard, drenched in pre-cum and twitching with excitement.

“Leon I want you to fuck me with your dick this time,” She said staring at me.

“Me too,” I said.

I slid my dick into Lilly’s now sopping wet and messy pussy. It went in with next to friction after all the fluids that were made from our fun before. I slid it in gently and thrust it slowly and moved it in and out steadily following a consistent rhythm while sucking her tits once more.

“Why are you being so slow!?” She whined.

“I like teasing you,” I said playfully.

“I have to beg again don’t?” She said impatiently.

“Looks like I’ve trained you well.” I retorted.

“Please pound my slut pussy until I cum again! Please just fuck me like an animal! And be rough!” She pleaded.

And so I complied I gradually picked up the pace until I was moving in and out harder and harder until I thrusting into her with all my might and pounding away at her pussy. She let out enthusiastic moans.

“UMPH, AAAHHH, UUUHHH!”

I began slapping her leaving red marks all over her pale white skin, striking her on breast and thighs. I felt her pussy squeezing snugly around my cock tightly like a warm wet blanket as if it never wanted to let go if it. I was close to cumming and so was she and she looked into my eyes and sure enough she was able to do what she said earlier. See herself cumming while looking into my eyes. She began moaning loudly like she did before and shaking. Her pussy clenched my dick and she came all over my cock. Which cause me to cum I pulled out quickly and blew my load blasting her stomach and chest with and a deluge of cum.

I untied Lilly and we went to the bathroom for a shower to clean ourselves off. We both got in the warm shower and got the juices and filth off of us. In the steamy bathroom, we began kissing and groping again. She grabbed on to my dick and began jerking it again.

“Haven’t had enough?” I said.

“Of course not.” She said.

I propped her against the shower and then slid my dick into her from behind. Kissing her neck and nibbling her ear as I thrust into her pussy from behind while slapping glistening ass as pellets of water flew everywhere. It was the warmth and closeness of her that was great. Her pussy wrapping around my dick as if it was hugging it.

“I don’t want this to ever end,” she said lovingly.

“Me neither” I moaned out.
I began thrusting into her passionately with all my energy, holding her tightly from behind until She started giving the now familiar signs that she was close to cumming and so was I was. This time I lost control and as she was cumming I came right into her pussy filling with my cum.

“Oh shit I’m sorry,” I say apologetic and panicked.

“It’s fine I’m on the pill.” She says reassuringly.

We both finished cleaning up and proceed to the bed and collapse on the bed from exhaustion, cuddling next to each other. Lilly’s head rested on my chest as I felt her warm embrace as we both fell asleep in each other’s arms.

The next morning she kissed me goodbye and left for her job.

“I want to do this again sometime.” She said hugging me.

“I’m okay with doing it anytime,” I replied warmly.

And with that, she left and I looked forward to our next meeting. We would meet again and again until we would start officially dating and she moved in and I would keep having kinky sex with her at night and doing cuddly things with her by day. I knew that I had broken Lilly.

Source: reddit.com/r/sexystories/comments/8t8i27/breaking_lilly_bdsm_mdom_first_time_writing

3 comments

  1. This was really great for a first time story! Amazing job! (Sorry praise is not criticism but I don’t have any criticisms cause I was really amused with this!)

  2. Great story! One note though; make sure you proofread for missing or redundant words. There are quite a few of both throughout. Thoroughly enjoyed it regardless!

  3. Really great story. I agree with Pman, you might want to reread it as it seemed a couple of words were missing, and a couple of misspellings. They were not enough to distract from the story.

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