So awhile ago I went to my friend Emma’s birthday party. For those who don’t know Emma is one of my best friends and is largely a part of why I am the way I am today. She is the one who pushed me out of my shell and forced me to get with my first ever girlfriend.
We have always been close and shared basically everything together. We would always tell each other our dream what’s going on in our lives, our dream, fantasies ect. Even though I’m a slut with most of my current friends she and I never have had a physical relationship. There are just some people that though you like you don’t really think of getting together in that was you know?
The reason I’m telling you this is because being at her party was the last place I expected to be meeting some girl I would soon be fucking. The party was fun but pretty laid back and after awhile Emma and her boyfriend (Who I introduced her to by the way. Don’t say I never did anything for her in return) Introduced me to this cute girl Mckenzie.
We made small talk for a bit and I learned she had known Emma’s boyfriend since high school and had since became friends with Emma.
Emma made some remark like this is the person I was telling you about and Mckenzie suddenly became a bit shy and looked nervous. I actually got a bit worried that she was scared of me and wondered what she had been told about me.
Emma pulled me aside a bit later and said, “Please don’t be mad at me. But remember when I pushed you to get with Kaitlyn? (My first girlfriend) Well Mckenzie needs a similar push and I kind of told her you had experience with that.” She asked me not to be mad again that she set me up to fuck her without telling me even though I was over the moon at the chance to be a girls first.
I agreed and we went back to Mckenzie who got nervous and blushed a bit when she saw me. They left us alone to talk and as much as I wanted to just take her then and there I didn’t. I wanted her to be comfortable around me so I just talked with her for a long time getting to her and getting her to open up a bit more around me. We talked about a bunch of stuff but nothing really worth mentioning here. After awhile she asked if the stories Emma told her were true and we started talking about some of my past experiences.
When the party was close to over I asked if she would prefer to come to my place tonight or if she would be more comfortable getting to know me more first. “Please be ready please be ready, please be ready.” I thought and was thrilled when she asked if she could come with me.
When we got back to my place I held her hand trying to get her used to me touching her as I brought her into my apartment. I was going to try and get her more comfortable but before I could she kissed me. “Well I guess she is ready.” I thought in my head. I brought her to my bedroom still kissing her and grateful I had cleaned earlier. After we made out for awhile I started to strip her down a bit slowing down occasionally when I could tell she was getting shy from exposing more of herself. I ended up naked first so she might feel more open to being naked with me and soon enough she was.
I brought her panties down her legs and started to tease her kissing her thighs and belly but avoiding her pussy letting her get used to it more and hoping it would make the situation she was in register in her head more. After awhile I finally took pity on her when I knew she was getting a bit annoyed at the teasing. I licked fingered her to an orgasm while thinking about how hot it was to be her first and how I was determined to be her second and more as well.
After Mckezies first orgasm I would have liked to keep going but she needed a break from being a bit sensitive and she pushed me back so she could have her turn to lick me. What happened next was a bit embarrassing actually. I had forgotten I had a small butt plug in (I’ve recently started anal training) till I heard a slight gasp from her.
Luckily I think it just surprised her and didn’t scare her because soon her mouth was on my pussy. She wasn’t bad but she wasn’t good at first. I helped her adjust on what to do and soon enough it felt pretty good. She started fingering me to try to add to it but it didn’t help (long nails) but I didn’t have the heart to tell her in the middle of it. I just focused again that I was her first which helped and I asked her to finger my clit and she took her fingers with her long ass nails out and I was able to cum when she started rubbing me.
I finished the night with a strap-on and enjoyed feeling her body under me as I brought her to one last orgasm before she had to leave. But not before I got her phone number :P
I hope this wasn’t to cringy to read. I’m not used to writing things with vanilla sex so making it interesting feels harder. I wasn’t sure if I was even going to type this out but with a strong possibility of a future story with Mckenzie in the future I felt it was needed. If you enjoyed [here](https://www.reddit.com/user/EveTheSlut/comments/8bnzqs/list_of_my_adventures/) is a link to my adventures.
Source: reddit.com/r/gonewildstories/comments/8t5l5g/taking_mckenzies_lesbian_virginity_ff_xpost_from
Sounds like you showed her a good time. Hope you told her to trim her nails!
This wasn’t cringy to read at all. But if I may offer some writing advice for future stories, at least as far as what I enjoy, I would love if you included more detail – such as what you did, what you saw, and what you felt.
For example:
“She pushed me down on to the bed and climbed on top of me, so she could have her turn to lick me. A big smile revealed her anticipation as she ran her fingers down my body. Reaching my thighs, she wasted no time in pushing them apart, and I eagerly opened myself to her. What happened next was a bit embarrassing.
I heard a sight gasp, and suddenly remembered that I had a small butt plug in (I had recently started anal training). I feared it had scared her, but it must have just been surprise, and it was now my turn to gasp as I felt her warm tongue on my pussy.
Unfortunately, her tongue was darting all over the place, lacking the skill to match her enthusiasm. “Slow down,” I instructed as I ran my fingers through her hair, “Lick from the bottom all the way to the top. Yes, like that.” She was a quick student, and I felt the warmth and wetness of her tongue trace a path up from my butt plug, dart in and out of me, continue up and over my clit, and then repeat. “Now stay on my clit, keep the same speed, yes, just like that.” She looked up at me, and the excitement in her eyes elicited another gasp and caused my heart to skip a beat.”
Likewise, the strap-on sequence could have been several paragraphs instead of a sentence. There’s so much you can write about it – starting with the look on her face when you took it out, to you putting it on, to the sounds made when you entered her, to the feel of her body beneath you.
Anyway, I hope that helps, and I hope you keep writing. :)