Reluctant- Feedback wanted

An excerpt from a book I am writing….

He had her right where he wanted her. This was the first time he was going to do things to her that she gave hard no’s to before, whether she liked it or not. She had been a good girl up until now, submitting to him in all the different little ways she could to keep him happy. But now he was going to truly take from her the one thing he’s been denied, the final frontier before pushing her to complete submission.

Tonight, he was taking her ass.

She looked beautiful laying there, wrists bound to the headboard, blindfolded and gagged, legs lifted and tied at the ankles back to the headboard, leaving her wet holes exposed to him. He looked her up and down from her head, to her large 42DD breasts and thick erect nipples, to her thick and wet labia, to her tight, pretty little asshole, and back up again. He wanted to do so many things to her. He wanted to latch on to her areola and suck her nipples like he was hungry. He wanted to furiously slide his tongue inside her vagina and taste her. He wanted so badly to bend her over and forcefully fuck her from behind and shoot his cum into her cervix while pulling her hair back and spanking her naughty little ass until it was red and throbbing. But he wouldn’t be doing any of that this time.

He buried his face into the nape of her neck, kissing, licking, and biting her down to the collarbone, then worked his way back up to her ear, when he grabbed the rear of her jaw and upper throat with an authoritarian grip and whispered… “tonight, I’m going to make you my completely submissive little slut, because I’m going to bury my cock into your tight little ass and fill it with cum!” He then growled into her ear and bit her lobe.

All at the same time, her soaking pussy throbbed and creamed, her clitoris felt like it was on fire, and an intense fear enveloped her because she knew what was about to follow.

Pain. Intense and unbearable pain.

He was too big for this. She liked it when he fingered her tight ass while he was fucking her or eating her out, but this would be too much. They had tried one time years ago, but the pain she experienced when he finally got that big throbbing cock head into her sphincter was enough to make her swear to herself she would never let him do it again.

She knew he was punishing her by doing this now. She had denied him her ass for so long, refusing to even let him use a small plug to prepare her for it in the past. And she knew he would now try to bury his entire 8 inch dick into her bowels and fill them with his hot seed.

“No, please not that!” She tried to scream it through her gag, unsuccesfully, as tears started to roll down her cheeks. She wished he would change his mind and bury his dick in her soaked hungry little cunt, but she knew this time he was on a mission. She tried to jerk herself out of the restraints as he squeezed the tube of lube into his now monstrous looking cock, which looked bigger in her mind every second she came closer to having her tight unused ass being impaled by it.

He stroked the lube up and down his cock as he looked upon her tear soaked face. God, the tears made him want to stop. He loved her submission, he loved how she fought him sometimes, but he didn’t want to hurt her. However, at the same time, it made him want to pound through her tight little ass even more. Then and there, his resolve set in stone like a hungry wolf deciding to attack its prey. It consumed him as he bent over and hungrily lapped up her soaking pussy, pushing his tongue into her wet hole as her grasped her left thigh with his right hand, and squeezed her right breast with his left hand. Then he moved the tip of his tongue to her puckered up little ass, taking his left hand off of her breast and moving his thumb to her swollen clit, rubbing circles into it with increasing firmness. When he decided she was squirming enough, he moved his right hand off of her thigh and pushed the tip of his right index finger up against her sphincter. He barely had to push and she exploded in orgasm, which caused her ass to open and allow him to push his finger in up to the knuckle. As her muffled cries turned into orgasmic scream he pounded her ass with his finger and ate her out while her cum flowed from her convulsing pussy right into his mouth.

“See,” he said getting up from her, “you cry in anticipation of the pain, but you’re a freaky little slut and both you and your little unused ass know you want my cock in it.”

She continued to try to plead with him through the gag as he lubed her ass, and seized up as the cold lube filled her rectum when he stuck the tube into her opening to fill her with the first load of thick liquid her ass would take that night.

Her pleading did nothing as he stuck the tip of his hard throbbing dick up against her hole. She tightened up and clenched her fists and curled her toes in defiant expectancy of the painful invasion of her ass. She released the second she felt the slap. Ohhhh the bastard, he had just slapped her breasts, sending a shock to her now ravenous pussy.

He used the opportunity to start pushing his head into her ass. She moaned with pleasure at the feeling of his cock head pressed up against her hole, then screamed through the gag as it invaded, spreading her anal walls as he violated the very last sacred part of her body, the only part of her she had left to hold onto that he hadn’t yet gotten her to give to him willingly.

After the first couple of inches, the pain subsided due to him stopping. She thought that he decided he was either far enough, or was going to stop due to hurting her. Boy was she wrong. Her eyes widened in horror as she looked down to see him squeezing more lube out of the tube down onto the remainder of his cock. Then he dropped the lube, grabbed her thighs, and began slowly forcing the rest of himself into her bowels.

Once he reached the end of his length, he held still inside of her, and reached to his side and produced her favorite vibrator. He turned it on and started rubbing circles around her throbbing clit and this was when even her own body betrayed her. As she built to orgasm, her hips slowly started to grind, causing her to fuck herself on his cock. Damnit, she wanted to beat the shit out of herself! Why did her body have to feel so damn good being so full and wet and throbbing and “OHHHHHHH GOOOOODDDDDDDD” she screamed through the gag as he slipped the vibrator inside of her and went straight to her g-spot while he commenced to driving in and out of her ass. She moaned and sobbed and heaved through the gag as her body exploded with the strength of an atomic bomb as she started to gush, only aiding in his attack of her ass.

This drove him to the edge. Her gaping ass convulsed around his cock at the same time her vagina did so around the vibrator, sending a shock up his balls and sending forth a flood of cum into her ass. He growled like an animal, pounding into her ass with abandon as he left the vibrator inside of her and move his hands to her swollen breasts. “FUUUUUUUCK” he screamed as he unloaded inside her, squeezing her breasts hard, as the energy drained from him just as fast as his sperm did. He rolled off of her and into his back, breathing heavily as she road through another orgasm.

The fucker rolled off of her and left the vibrator inside of her! She shook with pleasure as the orgasm hit her with all it had, forcing her holes to convulse and push out the vibrator, whatever sperm was inside her and close to her gaping but contracting ass.

He reached over and pulled out the vibrator and removed the gag at the same time, allowing her to let out a scream that seemed like it rattled the windows and releasing her from any further orgasmic assault. She took a few deep breaths and passed out from pleasure, exhaustion, and pain.

He gazed upon her, fulfilled and feeling victorious, before his own exhaustion got the better of him and he fell asleep beside her.

***I know it can probably use work, and it is a work in progress, but I hope it was enjoyable and I’m looking forward to any feedback.

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