My first time ever doing anything like this, all criticism is welcome.
“You really fucking sucked out there.”
She said in a way too sweet tone. She sat down next to me tossing her bag on top of mine. Even in our schools stupid uniform she looked pretty. Her name was Melinda, she was quite a vision long silky hair dark as onyx, small, magnificently curled eyes, resembling a crescent moon when she was thinking on something hard.
“Fuuuuck. I blew so much.”
I took my hands out from over my face, and look at the navy clad young woman sticking her tongue out at me. If she wasn’t so annoying she’d be so perfect. She took off our school’s disgusting sweater, to show the basic white button down we all wore daily.
“At least you still have next week to make it.”
She started to undo her two top buttons, and I couldn’t help myself. She was wearing a dark green bra that made her breasts look amazing. They were about the size of mangoes, fully round, and on her tiny framed, caramel kissed body, were both gravity defying and hard to ignore. She caught me so fast.
“Umm, I know you’re single now but stop staring.”
Fuck I hate her serious voice it is so cute sounding but I know I shouldn’t laugh but I couldn’t help but chuckle at it.
“You’re such a pervert Jamie.”
She says it so adorably I couldn’t stifle another laugh, she decides to push me at the window and laughs herself.
“So now that I’m finally free from the wicked Maria, does that mean we can get together finally?”
We always joked like this, I really wanted her though, ever since we were kids, she even stole my first kiss before we knew better. I could never tell if she was serious about it all though.
“If you really mean it, I will show you what you’ve been missing.”
She said it in a hushed tone leaning closer to me. Her eyes curled so she definitely had something on her mind. I felt a knot in my stomach but my body acted. I touched her cheek and just blurted it out
“I’ve always meant it Meli.”
Before I even grasped what was happening she pushed her lips to mine and just like that she was on top of me and all I could think of was how much I have wanted her body all these years. She tasted tart, like the sour patch candies she always carried in her pocket. I never felt this kind of spark from someone. It was like I was just drawn to Melinda’s mouth and I couldn’t resist.
I thought she was joking, I never thought her firm little bottom would be on top of me, But here we were, my best friend had unzipped my pants, unbuttoned her own shirt, and was forcefully stroking me, and staring dead into my eyes. Kissing me passionately, grinding her body against mine. I manage to whisper out.
“Fuck, you’re beautiful Meli”
She pulled me by my head into her chest, I couldn’t help but lick, and then nibble clumsily on her breast, my hands firmly glued to both her hip, and her bottom, she pulls me away, I lean back, and she undoes the button on my pants, while looking me dead in the eyes with a thought on her mind. I was blank. Lost in the pair of dark fire filled moon eyes staring down at me.
I had no idea she was this into me, she finally pulled my cock out of my boxers, and slowly stroked it. I let out a sigh of relief, and pleasure, she took it from me eagerly with her lips. Her kisses were drugs, and I was hooked.
“I’ve waiting a long time to try this Jamie. Be quiet.”
I take a deep breath that quickly turned into a gasp, Meli slid on top of our bags, and without missing a beat, took the tip of my cock into her mouth, staring happily up at me and swirling her tongue around it like a snake.
Wildly, she just stares at me, pushing forward on, taking every last bit of my into her mouth, Something no one had ever come close to. I bit right into my lower lip I had the taste of copper filling my mouth, as lightning shot up and down my spine but I didn’t care. I grab her silky hair, holding on to it tightly, as I try my hardest to just relax as she rocks my world like none before.
She starts wiggling with my manhood fully inside her, finally closing her eyes for a few moments, my toes and legs tense as my breathing becomes shallow, and then her head shoots back quietly gasping as I quietly thank God I didn’t cum already.
She puts her hands on my thighs and grips them roughly, digging her nails into them, slowly taking deep breaths, once again staring deep into my eyes, but now a wicked smile comes across her face as she envelops my manhood once more.
I put my hand on her shoulder and grip it hard, she gasps and nods on my cock sending my muscles into overdrive, I keep biting my lip and squeezing her to keep myself from exploding in her little wicked mouth. No wonder her boyfriends were always so happy.
There was no slowing her down. Every inch of myself was inside her as she slowly slid her tongue out under it, and slowly pulled her head back grabbing my cock firmly in her hand. Looking at me, then smiling like a succubus once again, she starts licking slowly at the glistening head of my throbbing cock.
She giggles and says,
“Am I doing good?”
I couldn’t even muster a response I just nod and pull her hair toward me so I can feel the magic that is her mouth again before I cum. I can’t stop from panting and pushing my hips at her as she just keeps nodding with my manhood inside her as if she owned it. I couldn’t even warn her but she knew. She held my hips tightly still as it happened. I just hunched back , grabbing the side of her face gently, she just breathed heavily, staring right into my soul, as she swallowed my entire cock and every drop it was full of, I try to keep eye contact, but just lose it and end up looking at the ceiling of the bus.
I sit there motionless as she licked at my cock, and sucked the head till every last drop was inside her. She put my cock back into my boxers, redid my button, and mounted me, wrapping her arms around my neck and laying upon my shoulder.
” I’ve been waiting for so long to see if I could take all of you Jamie.”
She whispered it into my neck but she might as well have put it right into my brain. Took me alright. Her mouth was better than sex. She was truly the greatest thing to happen to me. I was awestruck at how she handled everything.
“No ones ever done any of that for me Meli.” I say flatly, as I decide to just go for it and slip my hand into the back of her pants, I squeezed her firm bottom rough, and I decide to just say it to her.
“I know a few things too, we still meeting after dinner?” I smirk and she picks up her head staring into my eyes once more, I instinctively
press forward and kiss her sexy little mouth, while squeezing her bottom, rougher, and rougher, until she squirmed, saying to me all heated, and quickly.
“You better bring a better game than you did the meet tonight. There’s no second chance.”
She giggled and lay on my shoulder again, pushing her bottom out into my hand, knowing she got to me in every way possible. I squeeze her rough, kissing her when she gasps. That was it for me, tonight was the night I wrap myself in her, and do what I should’ve done years ago. I’m going to take Melinda’s virginity.
Source: reddit.com/r/gonewildstories/comments/82s06q/mf_18_losing_the_swim_meet
Dude, not gonna lie i got hard reading some of the bits in here. Nice piece of work.
Write another story.
Excellent !! The writing flowed so smoothly !! Keep it up matey !!
/r/eroticliterature
This sub is for true stores that happened in real life (or it’s supposed to be). This is clearly erotic fiction.
Idk, it reads like an anime almost dude too clean cut. Good writing though.
Wonderfully written. Good descriptions and good conversation.
My mind was having a hard time creating the setting. I knew where to place her and you in relation to a bunch of gym bags. But not where it took place.
Thank you for your time and story.
We HAVE to hear the after dinner events