Story Feedback?

I’m in the editing process of erotic story I wrote in a fervor over the last day or two, hoping to make it fit for publishing. I’m looking for people interested in reading and giving some criticism and feedback. If you’re interested, shoot me a message and we can talk more.

The story is question features beast/dog elements as well as sister/sister incest.

Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/7f2g0v/story_feedback