^The ^first ^two ^chapters ^of ^my ^attempt ^to ^write ^an ^erotic ^story!
######*Constructive* Criticism is welcome!
##**First Night Out**
Abigale is an awkward 19 y/o college student who has always walked the straight and narrow. With the help of her friend Sam, she starts to learn about life’s pleasures and begins to break out of her shell.
###[Act 1: Prelude To Party](https://filthy.media/first-night-out) [1st] [F/F] [NoSex]
Sam pressures Abigale into agreeing to go to the club with her. While getting ready, Abigale experiences her first intimate moment, she never expected it would be with another girl.
###[Act 2: Dining Out](https://filthy.media/first-night-out-act-2) [1st] [M/F] [Oral]
Sam introduces Abigale to her friends, Kriss and Jonah, before heading to the club. Shortly after arrival, Abigale finds herself alone with Jonah, who makes his desires for her quite clear.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/6pwpw9/first_night_out_act_1_2_ff_mf_shes_learning_how