This is my first try at erotica

Fa-fa-fa-fantasy

“I’m actually kinda tired” I said to Amanda and John.

We were chilling in our hotel room, waiting for the evening to pass and enjoying each others company. Amanda and John were a couple and i was friend with both of them so it made sense that the three of us would hang out. Earlier in evening we had been with our other friends in the swim team, but as we got bored with them we eventually retired to our room.

Of course Amanda didn’t actually live in this room with me and John, but she might as well have seeing how much time she spent there. That was fine though, we all got along fine and I was friends with Amanda.

“Well then let’s get in bed hahaha!” Amanda replied. “Whatever” John said. Then they both went on the bed. John stripped to his underwear immediately. “Aren’t you coming?” John asked me. “Sure I guess” I replied and then followed them. After a while of talking about nothing John asked me “Are you going to sleep in all that?” and then Amanda answered him “of course not” and then she took off her shorts and pants, leaving only her bra and underwear. “Lol” I said and followed suit, pulling off all my clothes except for my underwear.

So there we were, three teenage athletes, in barely any clothing, with two of us making out, all on the same bed.

Too be honest, deep down, I was kinda bored of being the infamous third wheel. I decided that right then and right there i had had enough. Suddenly I rolled over and climbed over John so that I was standing over both of them on all fours. They quickly discontinued their kissing and looked and me in bewilderment.

I said to them “I’m in control now and you will do as I say. Start making out again and don’t stop until I say so”. They exchanged puzzled glances, but mumbles something like “okay I guess” and went back to it. I then proceeded to execute my carefully thought out plan.

I went to work on them. First on Amanda. While she was still kissing John I started licking her neck. I used my tongue, expertly moving in swift, sensual strokes. I could tell that she was not used to this kind of treatment and that she was growing more agitated.

I moved from her neck to her ear, blowing lightly and biting just enough to tickle. I had laid some of my weight on her, making her feel like a warm heavy pillow was comforting her, not so much that she felt suffocated, but enough that the intimacy between us was a dense fire that warmed and illuminated her sensual feelings. I moved back to her neck, choosing a route that went along her cheek and chin. This new territory was soon left with a warm sheet of saliva left by a pair of lips and a tongue that were so soft they felt like a warm touch of flame gently licking her face.

After tasting Amanda for a while I moved my attention to John. I shifted my body so that I was laying more on him and I started licking his neck.  Amanda and John were still tasting each others mouths with their eyes closed, moaning softly. I made sure to give John the exact same treatment, carefully caressing his skin like a mother cuddling her newborn. He was slightly sweaty from excitement, and the salt mixed lovely with the chlorine from the pool creating an irresistible fragrance on my tongue.

As I was chasing john’s soft skin with my mouth I let one of my hands wander over to Amanda’s body. My hand squeezed and stroked her arms and her shoulders, moving slowly across her body and under her armpit on the other side. I broke my contact with John and put the entirety of my focus on now both my hands touching Amanda’s body. I gently reached under her back to where the clasp for her bra was.

Amanda and John had stopped kissing and were watching me attentively. I undid the clasp on Amanda’s bra and was about to pull the bra off when John started saying something. Before he could make a coherent sentence I put a finger on his lips and made a small “shhh” sound. He silenced immediately and I went back to my task at hand. In one simple gesture I pulled of her bra. They. were. Beautifull.

Her breasts were perfect orbs of the softest fat. Smooth like a baby’s but. “Supple” I murmured for her to hear. I covered them with my warm hands and squeezed. They felt amazing. I will never understand how they felt so soft and smooth, yet still nice and firm. I wasted no more time and put my mouth on her left nipple. I drew my tongue in circles around the nipple while still maintaining an even suction with my mouth. I released my hold and took a deep breath and then did the exact same thing to the other nipple.

When I was done I could tell that Amanda was in an extremely pleasant sense of euphoria. However John was visibly discomforted. I moved of their bodies and stood at the end of the bed. “Amanda, you lay right there. John you get on all fours and play with her boobs and kiss her.” I commanded them. They did what I said without a word, and I got ready for my next assignment.

As Oskar and Amanda had their hands and mouths on each others bodies I was to give my attention to one area only. I put my hands on her panties and lifted her legs up so that I could pull them off. I pulled them all the way off and threw them at the floor. I spread her legs apart so that I had a clear view of what was there, and what a great view that was. She had obviously done some hair removal not too long ago, and what I saw what a clean, dignified woman with nice looking lady parts. The lips were engorged and I could see that they were already wet. I was ready to get to work.

I blew straight into the sensitiv holy areas causing Amanda to squeal and try to push her legs together. I hold them apart with both hands and stop blowing. I inhale and then go in. I lick first from the bottom to the top, taking my time. Immediately Amanda squirms and her heartbeat increases exponentially. I cares the outside of Amanda’s vagina a bit more, keeping slow steady movements up and down.

Finally I stick my mouth beast into her. My little sex-machine impaling her most private cavern. I stick it in and out, in and out, repeating until my tongue gets tired. This is when I introduce my hand into the mix. Whilst keeping my tongue in place I place my two main fingers on my right hand right under her bellybutton and then I slowly “walk” them further down. Once I reach the tip of her pussy I lay them flat and move them back and forth.

By now the space between Amanda’s legs has grown very wet, both from my saliva and her own juices. I contract and release the muscles in my tongue while it is inside of her, moving it in all sorts of waves and patterns. I increase the speed at which my fingers are moving. I start shaking my head. I get rid of every sense of gentleness, now putting all my effort into my hands and my mouth. Amanda’s breath starts to shorten. Her pulse quickens. I am now a maniac driving my fingers furiously and spitting and licking for all my life is worth. She breaths very shallow breaths now.

She finally has had enough, and cums. Her orgasm is so powerful her whole body is shaking. I do not stop though, I keep going at her pussy while feeling it shift and squeeze and contract and almost vibrate. John, who up until this point had been kissing Amanda passionately, now had to stop because she was moving too much. Amanda was arching her back, rolling her eyes, biting her teeth and curling and uncurling her toes. This orgasm keeps up for seemingly forever forever before eventually subsiding. Amanda was left twitching in an unparallelled daze of euforia. Her mind was blank and she could only lay there, blinking, trying to come to her senses.

Feeling satisfied with myself I decided to again turn my attention to John. He looked to be enjoying himself, so when I said “Stand on all fours with your ass towards me” he did so without hesitation. Amanda was still lying next to us, not fully present.

When John reached the position I yanked his boxers of his ass and down to his knees. His asshole was now standing very close to me. I pulled his butcheeks apart to get a better veiw. He was significantly more hairy than Amanda or even me, which was gross, but I had come this far and at that time I did not really care. I summoned up a big glob of spit from my throat, and promptly flung it out of my mouth and into his asscrack. I spread it around a bit with my fingers before going to town with my mouth.

I licked around the hole, wanting to take my time before I penetrate it. I use my hands to spread his cheeks as far as they will go. I spit some more directly on john’s hole, and lick it back, and spit it back out. I slip a finger a little ways into john’s asshole, like dipping my toe in the water before jumping in, just checking out the water. The tip of my finger is engulfed in a dark warm and wet place. “Pucker out your hole so it’s easier to get into it” I command Oskar. His hole is now puckered out eagerly awaiting my tongue to penetrate it. Which it does. Oskar can not help a growl which quickly turns into a squeaky yelp.

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