Powerless (New here, Please critique)

You wake up. Groggy and confused, slowly realizing you don’t recognize your surroundings. In fact, you have no clue where you are. Your eyes are dry, you want to wipe them clean but you can’t, your arms are tied tightly behind your back. You can’t free them, no matter how hard you try. You try to look around, but there’s a strap pressed tightly around your neck. You squirm, it’s useless. Your consciousness begins to return. You’re completely bound and tied down. Your knees are bent and splayed out to your sides. Your heels are tied snuggly to your thighs. You’re on your back in a dimly lit room. Some soft red-light glows from somewhere behind you. You slowly look around, searching for something, anything. Your heart starts to pound, you’re tied tightly to a bed, and you completely naked.

“You’re awake” a rough voice growls from behind you. “I was beginning to think of have to leave you here”

It only takes a second, but you recognize that voice, your master’s voice. Daddy’s voice. Your pussy spasms involuntarily. My voice drives you wild, the power. The desire builds slowly, deep inside you.

“You’ve been a bad little slut” I say, as I walk around the side of the bed. My hand slides down your face. Soft and firm. Sliding down your cheek, to your neck. Slowly across your collar bone, over your breast and around your nipple. I pinch it, hard. You gasp. “Now you’re going to be punished”

I twist your nipple, your back arches, the pain and pleasure flow through you. I pull a clamp from my pocket and trace it slowly around your breast. Around your stiff nipple. The cold makes you shiver. The clamp closes on your little pink nipple and you whimper as your body reacts to the pain. You see Another clamp, and you try to squirm away. You know I like it when try to fight me. And you love every second.

I walk slowly around the bed and stand between your legs. You can see my cock bulging against my pants.

I pick a feather off the bed and trace it across your neck, over your aching tits. A shiver races across your skin, you can feel your juices start to flow. I drag the feather down your stomach, over your rapidly swelling pussy. You try to push your hips up, but the restraints hold. The feather slides down your stomach to your inner thigh, you try to stifle a moan, but fail.

I drag the feather up your other leg and tickle your tight baled pussy. I can see the moister start to leak from your pussy.

“You horny, dirty little slut” I growl. I pull a riding crop from behind my back, and rake it across your inner thigh. You cry out, the pain turning to pleasure. The feather, tickling your pussy, mixing with the unexpected sting on your thigh. Driving you mad.

“You’re not allowed to cum, until I say so” I command. And you nod. You’re too far gone to protest.

I set the feather down and oil my hands. You squirm against your will, you can’t help it. A moan escapes your mouth, as you feel a finger part your lips, and enter your hot, dripping cunt. I know how to make you cum. I know what you like, what you need. With my other hand, I stroke your clit. Blood rushes to your most sensitive spot, quickly becoming even more sensitive. Back and forth, my finger slides, back and forth. You thrust as much as you can to meet my slow, methodical rhythm. You feel one finger, then another curl inside you. Your pussy walls grip my fingers, begging for my cock.

I hit your g spot, knowing every inch of your body I know how to make you squirm. You feel my strong fingers press against you and you whimper. Your hips twitch and struggle against the straps. I say nothing. You feel it building, like a wave on a beach, your orgasm builds. A tidal wave of pleasure, slowly gaining power. You give up trying to remain quiet. Your moans match my thrusts against your, swollen g spot.

I can feel you getting close. I can feel you start to tighten around me. It drives me wild, it’s almost too much. I want to take you, I want to plunge my cock deep into your dripping cunt then and there. I want to dump my hot seed deep into your waiting pussy. But I don’t, because that’s exactly what you want, and I’m not going to give you what you want.

“Daddy, please” you whisper. Barely audible through your moans. “Can I cum now” you know you aren’t going to last much longer.

“No” I growl, you can hear the passion in my voice. And you’re about to let it all go.

Abruptly I stand, sliding my fingers out of you the moment before the wave crashes into the orgasm you so desperately desire.

You stare at me, eyes wide with longing. You’re panting. You were so close. But now, you can feel the wave receding back inside you. I can see a flicker of anger flash through your eyes.

Smiling, I walk to the table behind me. And stand there, examining my options. I know you’re dying to get off.

I return to the bed, a glass butt plug, dildo and a gleaming white Hitachi wand in hand. A lusty smile creases your face. I set my toys on the bed next to you and pick up my feather.

“Do you know why you’re being punished?” I ask, tracing the feather across your dripping wet pussy lips.

“No daddy” you mumble softly.

“Because you were teasing me” I say, snaking the feather down tour wet slit, to your tight little asshole. You squirm and moan as I circle your little asshole with the tip of feather. “Because you were flaunting yourself around in front of me wearing nothing but a bathing suit, all weekend long. You and your sexy slutty girlfriends. And you knew there was nothing I could do at the beach house. With all our friends around all weekend. And you thought you could get away with it. But you were wrong.”

Setting the feather down, I trace your asshole with my finger. I feel it relax under my touch. One a slow thrust and my finger slides into your tight little asshole. You gasp with pleasure.

I work my finger deep into your tight brown hole, and slowly back out again. You feel the glass plug replace my finger, pushing against your waiting hole. I can feel you try to push yourself onto it, fighting the restraints. You’re dying to have it inside you. I savor the moment, toying with you. I use the juices dripping from your pussy as lube, and slowly push the tip inside you.

Your eyes go wide, pain and pleasure mix once again and you grunt as you feel your tight hole stretching. And you love it. You pant and sigh as your asshole swallows the smooth plug. You can’t fight any more. You want to cum, need to cum. You keep your mouth shut however, as I pick up the dildo. A chill passes through your body as I toy with your cunt. Gliding the thick rubber cock up and down your wet slit. You shake in anticipation. As you feel the head pass between your swollen lips you let out a long moan, the big rubber cock fills your pussy and you shake with excitement. You savor the feeling of being stuffed with my toys.

I push the dildo deep inside you, letting you feel the ribs and pumps touch your hidden walls. Slowly I pull it out of you, making you long for the fullness you’d just so quickly enjoyed. I push it deep inside you once again and begin to thrust it in and out. You feel every ridge, each pump sending chills down your spine. Amazed at how fast you feel the wave come again, you whine and close your eyes, preparing to hold back the orgasmic tide once again.

You don’t feel me reach for the wand until a powerful hum fills your ears. Your eyes snap open as the vibration rips through your body. Your clit on fire. The fire spreads through your body. The world becomes blurry and you let out a deep guttural grunt. You find my eyes, and fix me with a desperate stare as you try to hold back the fiery tidal wave of pleasure coursing through your body.

I thrust the dildo harder in and out of your pussy. Faster, faster. You can’t hold on it back much longer. “Daddy please” you plead, “I can’t…. oahhhhh” I hold your stare for a moment, but it seems to last a lifetime. Just when you think I’ll let you cum, I rip the dildo from your dripping depths and throw the wand on the bed.

Your pussy pulses, walls contacting around a dildo no longer there. The sensations are almost enough to send you spiraling into orgasmic release you so desperately need.

Your eyes grow wide with delight as I rip my pants off and my hard, throbbing cock springs free. You can see precum dripping from my throbbing purple head. I walk back to your side and straddle your head. You look greedily at the length of my cock and lick your lips.

I know you love feeling my cock in your mouth. I grab your cheeks and tilt your head back. You open your mouth and wait for my hard cock to slide down your throat. You moan as my throbbing cock enters your throat. You’re powerless, and getting hornier by the minute. Slowly at first, I fuck your throat. Watching as my member slides in and out of your throat. You take my shaft, as I lean forward, gasping as my wet tongue meets your engorged clit.

I know I won’t last long. I begin to earnestly fuck your face. My cock pounds your throat, sliding deeper with every thrust. You moan into my balls, and push your hips against my tongue. I feel my balls tighten and my cock begin to twitch. I moan into your snatch as I shoot ropes of hot seed down your throat. As my tongue frantically works your clit, you moan in with delight, knowing you’ve made daddy happy. Thinking you’re next.

I sit up and slide my cock from your mouth with a slight pop, ropes of cum dribbling down your cheek. You gasp for air and smile. “Were almost done” I say, roughly.

“Remember, you’re not allowed to cum without permission” I repeat as I pick up the wand. I know it won’t be very long.

“Yes daddy” you whisper as the wand hums to life. You feel the vibrations before the it even touches your skin.

You moan loudly as the vibrations surge through your clit. Almost instantly the orgasmic tidal wave comes roaring back. Massive and powerful, larger than the previous times combined. You buck your hips into my wand. Willing it to vibrate harder. You want to cum, no you must cum. You’ve been starved for too long. You shut your eyes and moan loud and long. As the wave rushes towards its crest you look at me, and plead one last time. “Please daddy. Please, can I cum? I’m about to cum daddy, please let me” you beg, moaning more than speaking.

I smile, a warm, kind smile. Just as you’re about to let it all go, I pull the wand from your clit and set it between your legs, still humming. I stand and walk towards the door. You beg me to come back. “please daddy, I have to cum” You plead. The pleasure is so powerful it hurts. I don’t turn around. “Oh, please daddy, I’m so sorry I teased you, I won’t do it ever again” you beg. Still I don’t turn around. I open the door, and step into the blackness beyond. “This is what happens when you tease your master” I growl. And shut the door behind me.

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