Running Into An Old Friend (MFF)

Ok so this is my first time posting a story here so I’d love any criticism you guys have.
I don’t normally like going to clubs, but it was my buddy Casey’s birthday so I felt like it was something I had to do for his sake. The music was loud, I couldn’t hear anything, and the drinks were super expensive. My buddy was getting drunk, hitting on every woman that would come within two feet of him. Suddenly, I notice one of the girls Casey was talking to. “Ashley?” I say, knowing the sounds would get loss in the abyss. However, Ashley turned and saw me and her face changed from indifference to joy. Boy did she looks good. She had firm 34C tits that really stood out in that tight black dress. She also pulled off those sheer tights that showed up her nice thick thighs and long legs.

She walked over and gave me a big hug, “Oh my god Tristan how are you doing?” I could hear her voice clear as day through the noise, but was very distracted by how her large tits were pressed up on my chest. It was hard to hide my erection poking through my khakis. “I’m doing well Ashley, how are you? Sorry about my friend, it’s his birthday and he is very drunk.” “Oh it’s okay! I’m just glad to see a friendly face.” Her smile was mildly seductive as I could tell she was giving me a quick look over, which turned me on immensely. “Are you here with anyone?” I blurted, almost wishing to take the words back. Ashely giggled, “No, just with a friend from school.”

Nice, I thought, so maybe I can get a dance with her. She never took her piercing green eyes off me as I asked, “Hey, you wanna dance?” “Sure,” she immediately responded, huge smile on her face.

I led her onto the dance floor, trying to fix my erection so that it would be a comfortable dancing experience for her. Ashley immediately backed her perfect round ass up onto my crotch and I grabbed her hips, letting her grind all over my crotch. She knew how to fucking work her ass, finding exactly where my cock was and making sure to grind extra hard. I could see her impressed look as she turned her head and smirk at me. I forcefully pulled her closer and kissed her neck, which shortened her breath. While I was kissing I got a good view down her dress and her tits were fucking perfect.

“I never knew you were hiding a nice cock from me for all of these years. You’re exactly what we’re looking for.” We? Holy Shit is this what I think it is???? “You never asked,” I reply, trying to hold in all of my pure excitement. “Well would you like to meet my friend?” “Sure.”

We get off the dance floor, me not even hiding my erection and excitement anymore. We got to a far off corner of the club and I see her friend sitting down. I can tell she has a nice rack and I can’t help but stare. The girls giggle as Ashley introduces me. “Tristan, this is Rachel.” “Nice to meet you. I see you’re already a fan of me.” I get embarrassed and meekly reply, “Sorry, I just couldn’t help myself. Rachel giggled and looked at Ashley, “He’s perfect.”

We get into a cab where I sit in between both ladies and they are both touching me and talking between me. “From what I can tell he’s got a nice cock.” “Oh I can tell, good work Ashley.” I can’t contain myself as I rub my hand on Ashley’s thigh and Rachel rubs my crotch. “Oh yeah Ashley this will definitely do.”

We finally get to Ashley’s apartment, and as soon as the door closes both ladies push me to the door and wrestle my pants off. “Oh my god I want this cock so fucking badly.” “You and me both Rachel.” I can’t believe this is happening. My cock pops out of my underwear and all eight inches almost hit the girls in their faces, precum squirting out of my tip. Ashley licks up the precum from my cock and Rachel licks my shaft and sucks on my balls. Ashley and Rachel look up at me as they start to take turns kissing my cock. After a while Ashley sucks as Rachel stands up to me and I pull her head closer to me and we passionately make out. I insert my tongue deep into her throat as Ashley takes every inch of my cock and plays with my balls.

“Oh god you taste so good Tristan.” Ashley moans as she takes me deeper and deeper. I start to play with Rachel’s huge tits. I didn’t think Ashley’s could be topped but I was so wrong. Rachel’s nipples were already hard and they were begging to be bitten. “Oh fuck yes. Don’t ever stop.”

“You like her tits Tristan?” Ashley gets her mouth off my cock, which is soaking with saliva. “Haha yeah I do, but I wanna see yours too Ashley.” “I bet you do but I have something else in mind.” Ashley tears off her bra and takes out her tits and wraps my hard cock around them. “Fuck them Tristan. Fuck them hard.” “I want a taste first Ashley. How about you fuck both of our tits at the same after that? Does that sound good Tristan?” This isn’t happening. “Of course ladies. But not too long I wanna see those wet pussies.”

They both giggled and knelt in front of me and pushed their tits onto my cock. The feeling of fucking those giant boobs was something that could not be topped. “Lick the precum ladies. I know you love it.” Ashley and Rachel tease the tip of my cock with their tongues. I didn’t want this moment to end. I fucked the ladies’ tits so hard with my wet cock. I decided I needed to fuck them for real, and I could tell they wanted the same.

I asked, “Okay ladies who’s got the wetter pussy?” I see Rachel still playing with herself as Ashley turns and replied, “Okay you get him first, but I want you to play with my pussy. Deal?” “Deal.” Rachel bites her lip as she looks at me and my cock. “Get on the bed Rachel.”

She eagerly gets on the bed and I see her pussy dripping down her leg. I grab a condom from my wallet and slip it on as I follow the ladies to the bed. Ashley goes further down the bed and seeing her on all fours was a perfect sight as her huge tits hung low as her pussy moved closer and closer to Rachel’s pussy, who had laid down on her back waiting. “Fuck me already Tristan. Fuck me with your huge cock.”

I oblige and grab Rachel’s legs and slide my cock in with ease. God damn she was super wet. I start out slow as Ashley sits on Rachel’s face and I see her moan as Rachel’s tongue plays with Ashley’s clit. I pound faster getting turned on by Ashley’s erotic joy. I lean in and passionately kiss her, getting my tongue down her throat as I fuck Rachel’s tight, wet pussy. I then give and bite her lip and pull it away while I pound Rachel faster. Holy Shit, this was everything I wanted it to be and more.

“Fuck her faster…I wanna make sure she cums while you’re fucking her tight pussy.” “I’m close.” Rachel replies while licking Ashley’s pussy still. I break away from Ashley. I break away from Ashley’s lips to grab Rachel’s hips and pound her pussy and watch her beautiful 32G tits bounce up and down as I fuck her harder. “Oh my god fuck me fuck me FUCK ME!!! Oh my god I’m gonna cum!!!!!” I grab her hips and force my hard dick in as far as I possibly can and Rachel screams and moans with pleasure as I feel her pussy tighten around my cock.

“Oh God, I’ve never been fucked like that before!” Rachel sighed as she remained motionless on the bed. I look at Ashley and wryly smile and say, “Your turn.” Ashley winks at me and says, “I want something a little different.” She turns around and backs her ass and pussy to my cock as Rachel is sitting next to her rubbing her pussy. I move towards Ashley’s hypnotizing ass and get ready for doggy style. I start to play with her pussy. “No, not there.” She turns and gives me a sly grin. “Get some lube from the dresser.” I quickly grab it and give myself two fingers worth and play with her asshole.

“Oh yes Tristan, right fucking there. Give me your cock now.” I take my fingers out and slowly push my cock inside her asshole. It feels okay at first but the condom really takes away from the experience for me. Almost reading my mind, Ashley says, “Take that cursed thing off, you’re not going to need it anymore.” I immediately get harder inside her asshole, as Rachel giggles and plays with my balls as I struggle to get the condom off. I lube up my cock and slide it back into her asshole. “Much better,” I instinctually respond as we get back to it.

I start slow to try and get a rhythm as Ashley moans and Rachel crawls over to her after a couple of minutes of playing with my balls. “You wanna see us make out while you fuck her?” Rachel asks knowing the answer. “You tell me.” I respond as I pick up the pace fucking her asshole. “You like that Ashley? You like crush fucking you in the ass while your best friend makes out with you? You naughty slut.” “I’m your slut Tristan fuck me hard so I can taste that cum. What do you think Rachel? You wanna taste his cum?” “Definitely Ash.”

“Okay ladies, I’m gonna cum all over your filthy mouths and tits.” I fuck Ashley harder and harder as I hear her moan and scream “OH FUCK YEAH OH MY GOD YEAH I’M CUMMING!!!!!!!!!!! I’M CUMMING SO FUCKING HARD!!!!!!!!!!!! DON’T STOP!!!” This was starting to put me over the top so I gave some more deep thrusts deep inside her tight ass and told them, “Get on your knees I’m going to cum.”

I pull out of Ashley and she joined Rachel on the ground, tongues open as I jerk off right into Rachel’s mouth. I quickly move to Ashley’s mouth and her chest. I see Rachel spit on her tits and play with my cum on her nipples. As I finish Rachel and Ashley take turns sucking me dry and kissing each other with what they have left in their mouths, before ultimately swallowing it whole.
“Well this was fun. I’m glad I went out to the clubs tonight. Let’s do this again sometime?” “TRISTAN, you aren’t leaving yet. Sure we may be done for tonight, but I think we can do this again in the morning if you are up for it.” “I think I will be willing and able for sure.”

Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/5sp8lq/running_into_an_old_friend_mff

2 comments

  1. First I want to say this is good, not great. It’s definitely good enough to get the job done.

    I have a few suggestions, first of which is to be careful of your dialogue. It can be difficult who is speaking when, breaking up your sections of dialogue can help this. Additionally it can be helped by making a new paragraph in between different individuals’ speaking or by breaking up dialogue with narration or exposition.

    IE:

    “Good evening, mistress” interjected a kindly old man in a butler’s uniform. The busty mistress replied hurriedly “Of course Beuford.”

    “Be careful tonight, ma’m.”

    Secondly, be less specific on numbers/sizes and use more discriptions.

    Instead of saying “his throbbing 8 inch cock” say “his cock that easily fills both hands and dwarfs the length of the woman’s face.”

    Instead of “her sizable 32c breasts” say ” her mounds of supple flesh that overfills my hands.”

    Using a discription rather than solid numbers allows the reader to build a more personal and detailed picture in their mind rather than them trying to figure out how big 32c is or if 8 inches is bigger than them.

    Aside from those couple of things I think you have great potential, keep up the good work.

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