Divine Sin – GW pics | slow built up, big pay off | supernatural

This is my first time writing a fanfiction. So please be gentle. The ideas may not be new but I have taken inspiration from several fantasy worlds, combined them and added an erotic twist.

Feedback are always welcomed.

Here we go!

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Prologue

Jeremy woke up in a stranger’s room, in a stranger’s bed, with a stranger beside him – naked. The curtains were drawn but what light that came through was blinding enough. He rubbed his eyes and tried to remember what happened the night before. And also how he lost his virginity.

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Chapter 1

Twenty four hours ago, Jeremy woke up in his own bed. An ordinary 20 year old university student, with ordinary grades and ordinary friends. He was from a small town two hours away from the capital. He, his best friend (Tommy) and his childhood friend (Sally) came to the capital for their studies.

Jeremy shared the student accommodation with Tommy and Tyler. Tommy’s build was very similar to Jeremy’s – nothing extraordinary. Tyler, on the other hand, was a bodybuilder and kind of an ass to both of them. The only plus side of having him as a housemate is his hot girlfriend, Veronica, who stays over very often.

Veronica is a gorgeous brunette. She is slightly on the emo side but she has a gorgeous smile with green eyes and smooth pale skin. Jeremy loved her smile. It also helps that she has amazing curves. And she has perfect grapefruit sized breasts which you’ll want to squeeze all night. Jeremy is guilty of thinking about her a couple of times during his “alone” time.

Face (Kitty_loveless): http://imgur.com/hxglvzC

And Veronica is very confident and is not shy about showing off her body. Once when Jeremy and Tommy was hanging out in the living room, Veronica came out of Tyler’s room wearing nothing but a tight t-shirt and a sexy pair of panties. She would walk pass the boys as if they could not see her nipples poking out through the thin material. And when she bends over to take something from the fridge, both the boys were treated to an amazing view.

Attire (Kitty_loveless): http://imgur.com/a/VrmsU

Perhaps, she didn’t care if the boys looked at her. Perhaps, she liked teasing them. Perhaps, she gets turned on by being looked at. Regardless, all they could even do is look and fantasise. Her boyfriend Tyler was better looking, stronger and richer. They were no match for that.

The other girl in Jeremy’s life is Sally. Sally is very smart and so she got a scholarship which included boarding in the campus. Elsewise, she would have stayed in the same house as Jeremy and Tommy. She has always been Jeremy’s neighbour when they grew up together. She was brunette, medium in height, and medium to large breasts – C cups if Jeremy were to guess. She has a cute smile and is very shy. Jeremy found her attractive but sees her as more of his sister than a potential date.

Face (thatonegirlfrommath): http://i.imgur.com/1F3H18t.jpg

So anyway, Jeremy was walking Sally home after class when Tommy asked both of them to join him for a party that night. Apparently a hot girl from his class is organizing a party at her place with her housemates – all very hot girls. Tommy is obviously hoping to get lucky up tonight and the idea really appealed to Jeremy.

Sally on the other hand was more reserved and declined so the boys walked her to her dorm. They decided to hang out at Sally’s place until the party started since it was closer. The boys started drinking and talking in the living area while Sally unpacked her stuff in her room.

Not long after, Sally came out of her room and went into the shower. Both the boys could hear the shower running. Tommy whispered to Jeremy, saying that how he would love to be able to see through the walls. Tommy finds Sally really attractive. Secretly, Jeremy hoped he had that power too. In the end, both boys had to settle at looking at her silhouette through the semi transparent door, until she came out of the shower wearing nothing but a towel.

But as she retired to her room, the towel slipped and both boys got a glimpse of one of her soft, tender breast – topped with a cute little pink nipple. That definitely got Jeremy hard and Tommy was practically jumping with joy. Sally ran into her room as quickly as possible, locking her door.

Towel (thatonegirlfrommath): http://i.imgur.com/fDsuemY.jpg

When the time comes, both the boys left Sally to her studies and went straight to the party. The girl who invited Tommy was slightly older than the boys. She had a cute confident smile. Her petite body was had curves in all the right place. And being around her made Jeremy slightly horny. He started imagining her without her many layers of clothes. He wanted her badly. She introduced herself as Caprice, welcoming them into the house.

Face (Ex-Stripper): http://imgur.com/a/FVtkN

The party was filled with people a couple of years older than Jeremy and Tommy. All the girls there looked like supermodels. Even the guys were all good looking and fit. Both the boys started to feel insecure about their looks. But the way Caprice smiled at Jeremy, nothing else in the world matters.

After a couple of drinks, Caprice seems to take an interest in Jeremy – which was odd considering all the other better options. She only spent her time with him and laughed at his jokes. Maybe – just maybe Jeremy might have a chance with this smoking hot girl. Tommy excused himself when he saw a hot red head across the room. Jeremy didn’t mind, he was glad to have some one to one time with Caprice.

As time goes by and alcohol flowed freely, the crowd started becoming more intimate. People were coupling up and making out. Some were groping each other, not caring if anyone were watching them. Some were even making out while watching others grope each other.

Caprice reached out and touch Jeremy’s arm as she leans in close and whispered into his ear: “Follow me. You won’t regret it.” and she started walking up the stairs. Jeremy couldn’t help but stare at her ass and it swayed left and right. They were not massive but they were toned. How he wish he could grope them.

Caprice lead them into her own bedroom, and closed the door behind them. She pressed herself onto Jeremy and he can smell the fruity scent of her shampoo as he felt her tender breasts touching his chest. She kissed him. Lightly at first, then her tongue found its way into his mouth and both their tongues danced.

Jeremy’s heart skipped a beat when he felt her hands touched his stomach and slowly slid down his jeans. Her fingers brush passed his pubic hairs and lightly stroke the shaft of his raging hard cock. He got the hint and started reaching under her blouse and worked furiously to unclip her bra – and failed miserably.

Caprice chuckled and took a step back. She smiled as she slowly pulled her blouse over her head, proudly standing there half naked. She then bend over to pull down her tights. While sensually swaying her hips and staring straight into his eyes. She reach back and unclip her bra effortlessly, releasing her beautiful breasts in all their glory, And then she bend down to remove her panties. Oh how Jeremy love the look of her breasts.

She sexily walked towards Jeremy and pulled his t-shirt over his head, and pushed him onto her bed. She proceeded to climb on him and kissed his neck gently. Slowly working her way down his chest, and then his stomach. All the while, her hands deftly unbuckled his belt and basically rip Jeremy’s jeans and boxers off, tossing them across the room.

She then lower herself, Jeremy’s hard cock brushing between her left cheek and nose – she took a long sniff, taking in his aroma. She extended her tongue and lick him – starting with his balls and slowly work her way up his shaft.

Jeremy was in ecstasy. He would have said yes to whatever she asked of him right then and there, and she knew it. Caprice loved having that power over him. And as she finally reach the tip, she collected a huge droplet of precum on the tip of her tongue. Her eyes locked onto his. Jeremy felt like time slowed. Caprice swallowed his precum and spoke – her voice was mesmerizing.

“Does it feel good? Because you taste delicious. And I want to keep tasting you. I want you to be mine. Will you be mine?” she said.

“Yes, of course – anything you say” he replied without thinking.

With that, she opened her mouth and slide his whole cock in. Her deepthroat felt so good he arched his head back and let out an involuntary moan of pleasure. And suddenly, out of nowhere and everywhere at once, he felt the warmth and energy pouring into him. He felt stronger and more alert – his five senses working on overdrive.

Facial (Ex-Stripper): http://imgur.com/a/IyaT7

He can feel her tongue worshiping his cock. He can feel the texture of the bedsheet on his back. He can feel her breasts rubbing on his inner thigh. He can hear cars driving by. He can hear other people having sex in the other rooms – their moans were turning him on even more. He can hear a buzzing of a single fly. His eyes easily found the fly and was able to make out every single bit of detail, from the flapping wings and the huge eyes. It is like time slowed down.

Overcomed by lust and and the sudden rush of energy, the fly was quickly forgotten, and he turned his full attention to this beautiful girl pleasuring him – worshiping his cock. He lifted her up as if she weighed nothing and lie her on her back. She slide her arms over her head, under the pillow. Her legs spread open, welcomely. It is as if her body is saying: “Do whatever you want to me. I am your sex slave.”

Excitedly, Jeremy’s mouth went straight for her right nipple and grabbed her left breast with his right hand. She left out an involuntary moan. He looked up at her, their eyes met – she smiled at him and he licked her nipple one last time.

He tried to slide his cock into her pussy, but being his first time, he was unsure what he was doing. Then he felt her warm hands guiding his cock. As his tip touched the opening of her pussy, he looked up at her – she was biting her lips and her eyes were filled with anticipation.

His cock started to spread open her pussy lips and slide in. She let go of his cock, trusting Jeremy to do the rest of the work, she slide her arms back under the pillow. And Jeremy was glad to do the rest of the work.

Jeremy, started of slow, but then got excited quickly and began thrusting vigorously. It didn’t take long for Caprice for reach her orgasm but it felt like it lasted forever. She arched backwards, held for a long moment, her mouth slightly open in a silent scream of pleasure. And finally she collapsed.

That pushed Jeremy over the line. Not sure what to do, he said: “Fuck, I’m going to cum.”

Before he can finish his sentence, Caprice slide Jeremy’s cock out, quickly change position, got on her knees and started licking her own cum off his of cock. When Jeremy was reaching his limit, Caprice leaned back and opened her mouth – as if begging for him to cum all over her. With a few quick strokes, he burst all over her face. With thick warm cum all over her face, she smiled at him as if it was a badge of honour.

Facial (Ex-Stripper): http://imgur.com/i30SY31

That was the last thing he remembered before he collapsed into a sex-induced coma.

The next morning, Jeremy woke up in Caprice’s room, in a stranger’s bed, with a her beside him – naked. The curtains were drawn but what light that came through was blinding enough. He rubbed his eyes and tried to remember what happened the night before. And also how he lost his virginity.

As the memory came back, he smiled.

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Epilogue

Caprice soon woke up and started getting dressed. Jeremy has never felt healthier – stronger even. And he is acutely aware of his surroundings – seeing, hearing and smelling everything. And even being able to taste the air. Jeremy asked if this is what it feels after sex. She laughed.

Caprice told Jeremy about the Eternal War between the Angels and Demons, which the human world is oblivious to. The Angels are powered by the faith and devotion of the humans so they help and heal the humans. The Demons are powered by lust and desires so they… well they just fuck as many humans as they can.

And Caprice welcomed Jeremy to the Demon faction. This time Jeremy laughed. Well, until Caprice lifted up her queen size bed with one hand. And so Jeremy’s supernatural adventure begins.

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Stay tuned – Chapter 2 is being written!

I would love to hear your thoughts!

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