MY FIRST EROTICA STORY IS FREE! Advice appreciated ;)

I posted my first ever erotic story “The Business Trip.” I had SO much fun writing it and decided to post it on Amazon. I’m making it free this weekend and would appreciate any opinions, constructive criticism, or help understand what genre of erotica I’ve written. It’s my first one, and quite tame, I expect to get a little more adventurous once my feet are wet ;)

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