*As a sub, I love to serve. As a particularly bratty sub, I haven’t found anyone to submit to – until now. Shall we?*
The day starts with you, eating breakfast at the table. You read your newspapers, check international news on your phone or laptop while you have your morning coffee and smoke. I kneel at your feet, quiet and waiting, until you beckon me over. I crawl over to you, black penmanship stark against the smooth lines of my thigh and smile up at you.
You move to let me kneel at your feet, smoking your cigarette and paying little attention to me. I brush fingertips against your thighs, lips planting quick kisses as I move up towards your cock. Lips parted, I run my tongue from base to tip, grinning up at you as I take you in my mouth, inch by inch.
You’ve always been silent, but I hear you muttering under your breath, one hand moving to stroke my hair as I bob up and down on your cock. I move faster, hands on your thighs, wanting so desperately to make you cum. I push a little too deep, the tip hitting the back of my throat: choking, gagging on your cock, my throat convulsing around you. I hear you sigh, murmured words that make little sense as tears prick at the corner of my eyes.
Unfortunately, we’ve run out of time – and we both have to go to work. You pull me roughly off your cock, eyes dark with lust and desire. You bend me over your knee, and I know what’s going to happen.
You tell me that since I didn’t make you cum within the allotted time, I deserve a punishment. You ask me how many do I think I deserve. My mouth falls open, closes. My thighs are quivering, bare skin hot against yours. Meekly, I tell you two.
There’s tension between us, and I feel the rush of air as your palm moves to hits one cheek. There’s a sting, my hips buck involuntarily against you, pain and pleasure mixed together. You caress my face, tell me what a little slut I am, a brief respite before you spank the other cheek. A choked moan escapes my lips, eyes going wide at the pain.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/4ear70/breakfast_mf_bd_ds
This is great. i love when Dom/sub fiction keeps it simple and focuses on mundane, day-to-day life.