I've been reading this subreddit for a few days now and have been thinking about contributing and have finally started writing up one of my experiences.
I was wondering whether to include background information in the form of a shorter story (the actual "gonewildstory" is much longer) but I do think some background information would be great for the readers understanding, but the majority of the background information isn't very sexual while the story makes up for it.
Thanks for any potential feedback, and I hope to have the full story posted soon :)
Edit: Background information for everyone involved in the story seems important so I'll do so, because personally I enjoy knowing a little bit about the people involved in the story so I hope you do too
Source: reddit.com/r/gonewildstories/comments/3gwowg/a_few_questions_before_finishing_off_a_story
Yes, definitely put in background information. It helps the reader get "into" the story. If it’s too much or too boring, they’ll skim to the sexy parts. But backgrounds make the story better. I don’t just care that pussy was being eaten, I want to know whose pussy it was, and why it was being eaten. >… And there was a time in this country, a long time ago, when reading wasn’t just for fags and neither was writing. People wrote books and movies, movies that had stories so you cared whose ass it was and why it was farting, and I believe that time can come again!
Thank you for the feedback, I appreciate it
Do background, but not like a whole installment worth!
Do you think background should include a vague description of what the people involved look like?
Oh yeah, quick description and one of the local, at least it’s country or city.
At the very least! The buildup is my favorite part, personally, I like to feel that tension. When it goes straight to fucking and sucking I move on to a different story.