This is my first attempt at writing anything remotely sexual but after reading stories on here for far too long I thought I would write down one of my many stories. So if this goes as planned there should be more to follow.
This story starts with me getting a buzz from my phone, and recognizing that as a tinder notification made me check it instantly. It was a match from a girl we shall call Katie (because that’s her name) and while I was smiling to myself about the hot girl that I matched with Katie sent me a message, which is always a good sign. Katie had a great profile, she was just my type, blonde hair, blue eyes with a gorgeous smile and the bikini shots showed off her slim tanned body amazingly well. As for myself I say I’m fairly attractive, stand 6 ft tall with an athletic build from playing sport all my life, short dark hair, blue eyes with a clean shaven face that isn’t half bad. So we instantly hit it off as we work in similar industries (I’m a bartender she’s a waitress) and are both students at the same college. We were talking about what we were having for dinner and both of us were craving pizza so I offered to bring some round. We ended up deciding to enjoy it while parked at a great look out overlooking the sea.
We had a great time sharing some amazing pizza and laughs and after we had finished I asked if she wanted to go get some dessert to which she said “I don’t know, what do you want to do?” “I actually just want to kiss you” I replied as I leant across the car. I was met halfway with the most interesting lips I’ve ever had the pleasure to kiss. They are difficult to describe as they are soft but also have some sort of firmness to them. Our kiss was slow and delicate with my hand finding its way to rest on her bare thigh below her skirt. Slowly the passion and intensity increased as we kissed harder and harder, Katie lay back into her chair giving me no choice but to follow. At this stage there was a pretty generous bulge forming in my shorts which only got bigger as she pulled my hand from her thigh and roughly pushed on one of her amazing DD boobs. Now being the boob guy that I am I wasted no time in getting to work and started squeezing both of them as I made my way to her neck where I started nibbling and kissing. Katie started moaning as my kissing went closer and closer to her boobs until I eventually freed them over the top of her top and I couldn’t resist wrapping my lips around her beautiful pink nipples.
Thankfully there was nobody else nearby so she didn’t stop me as I moved my lips back to hers and my hand between her legs. I traced my fingers lightly over her skin until I met some resistance in the form of her sexy red underwear which at this stage were starting to get pretty wet. I pulled them to the side and just placed my hand over her smooth pussy and held it there with a tiny bit of pressure. I broke off our kiss and pulled back to look into her eyes which stared back at my very clearly saying don’t you fucking stop, and I had no intention to. So I started gently rubbing my middle and ring finger over her lips getting them wet and slipped one inside which produce a gasp from Katie and she responded by biting my lip. After a minute or two of exploring with one I slipped in another, buried them to my palm and started moving my hand up and down. Another favourite of Katie’s as she grabbed me by the hair and pushed my face back down towards her amazing boobs. I was lost in another world and spent the next ten or so minutes trying to get her to say those two magic words. I could tell she was getting close by the way she was moaning and running her hands all over my back and head. Finally she breathed, those two words that I was craving “I’m coming” which she couldn’t help repeat another 15 times.
“Holy fuck that was amazing” she forced out as she lay there catching her breath. And almost as if someone had flipped a switch she sat up, grabbed my cock through my pants and said “now it’s your turn.” Wasting no time at all she had my belt unbuckled, pants off and boxers pulled down in world record time and about half a second later she was kissing down the length of my cock with those perfect lips I mentioned earlier. I pulled her hair back and held it out of her way just waiting for the moment she allowed me inside her mouth which she soon treated me to as she stared up at me. Katie had an amazing technique of using her mouth and hand perfectly forcing me into whispering “Wow you’re amazing, I’m so close already” which only encouraged her into working harder stopping only briefly to tell me not to hold back. An impossible task that would’ve been with this beautiful girl sliding five of my seven inches in and out of her mouth. Soon after I was telling her I was about to cum and she ignored me, hungry for me to finish in her mouth, moments later I felt the rising pressure and the pleasure wash of me as I came hard in her mouth where Katie happily swallowed it all and licked me clean afterwards.
I hope you all enjoyed my first attempt, any and all feedback is encouraged. Now I just need to decide on what I’m going to write about next.
Source: reddit.com/r/gonewildstories/comments/3eem59/fun_with_a_tinder_date_in_my_car
Honestly, it wasn’t very believable. The people sound like they were created by a horny teenager, and are ridiculously over the top stereotypical. She’s blond, blue eyed, big tits, he’s some sort of smooth, athletic college jock. The whole story seemed very shallow and wasn’t engaging at all. Not bad for a first attempt but keep writing and you’ll get better at it. Good luck!
Cheers for the feedback. I’m an average at best writer as it is so writing something like was very weird. As for the believably is it really that unbelievable that two attractive people match with each other on tinder and something happens between them. I mean thats essentially the whole point of tinder.
I loved it. My biggest complaint for stories like this though is that there aren’t 7-8 parts to follow up on.