Hi all, first time post. Would be delighted for some feedback.
So… We’re in a country house with a grand leather suite, and you’re lying on the couch waiting for me as I return from work. You’re wearing a pearl necklace, a black basque and black stockings, but no pants. Your nipples harden in anticipation as you hear me open the front door. You smile as I enter the room, seeing my eyes light up, enjoying drinking in every inch of your body. You notice my trousers bulge immediately, and your smile grows bigger, knowing this is a fantasy of mine, how much this means to me.
As I move towards you, you play with the pearl necklace in one hand, caressing your left breast with your other. I pull you up gently with my hands around your neck, so you’re kneeling on the leather couch, and I start kissing you with a lust you’ve come to love. Our tongues entwine as you feel my hands run over your body, running from your neck to your shoulders, down your arms, down to your bum. I pull you closer as we continue to kiss and you feel my erection press against your body. Your hands come around and undo my fly as my hands come up and pull softly on your breasts through the basque, my mouth kissing your neck and working their way down to your bust. You start stroking my cock, feeling how hard it is, enjoying my mouth on your breasts, noticing the basque is pulled down to reveal your nipples, which I gladly take in my mouth. My tongue swirls around the right areola, hardening your nipples further, and you feel my teeth pull gently on your right nipple as my right hand pulls on your left.
I work my mouth back up, your chest to your neck, to just below your ear, and you feel me pull your hair back as we stare in each other’s eyes, the intensity of passion filling our gaze. I pull your head down onto my cock, your mouth watering as you anticipate what’s coming. Your lips press around my head as I guide you, and then I slowly pull you closer, inserting my long, hard cock into your mouth. My moans turn you on and you use one hand to rub your clitoris, and are surprised at how wet you are, and it feels amazing. You work the head of my cock beautifully, using your tongue and other hand to make it even harder, and you eventually taste some precum, which you gleefully slurp up. My hand pulls you off, and I press you back onto the couch by your shoulders, you give a soft moan – you know what’s coming.
I lift your legs up towards me, as I caress and kiss them, slowly working my way down from the ankles to the inside of your thighs. This is, as you know, my favourite area, and I spend some time kissing them, working my way to each side while teasing your soaked pussy. Then, you feel my tongue, lapping at your opening, then moving up to the clitoris, sucking and swirling and creating that amazing sensation you enjoy so much. You feel my fingers enter you and, finding your g-spot, they rub rhythmically against it, slowly, sensitively, and in time with my tongue on your clitoris. You get wetter as you are coming close to orgasm, but you also want me inside you. Your hands brush through my hair, your moaning gathers pace, in time with the awesome feeling of the incoming orgasm. It’s hard to tell whether it’s the g-spot or clitoris that is affording such pleasure but you don’t care, you just want to melt with the bliss. Your whole body relaxes as you feel your legs start shaking, the orgasm slowly getting closer and closer. My tongue and fingers work in such a rhythm that you don’t know how much longer you’ll last, when you suddenly feel my huge free hand grabbing your nipples together, and pulling them. This is too much, your moans turn into almost screams as the orgasm hits you, like a wave, sending that amazing sensation right through your body as it shakes and tingles in reception. The glow lasts seemingly for minutes, and you pull my head up and smother me in kisses, before our mouths meet and our tongues once again entwine, as you wrap your arms and legs around me.
“This is just the start”, I whisper in your ear.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/3dbszl/the_leather_couch_and_the_black_basque_m4f_pt1
any tips anyone?