The absolute key thing to remember is to try and make sure that the prostitutes you hire don't hate each other. There are other factors as well, but that one is pretty key.
Let's call our big spending customer Alex. For the 6 months I'd been working as a prostitute he'd been a regular of mine, for the most of it.
He was a bit weird, and a lot of the other women at the agency didn't like him, but I got on with him pretty well. With me at least he directed a lot of his energies towards role play and light humiliation, rather than the more extreme stuff he often wanted with other women.
He was that key thing, a regular. Someone that would adjust his booking around your timings. He'd book me for two hours twice a month on whatever time was convenient to me, so it spared me having to fight for bookings with the agency.
Let's call my colleague Alice. Straight off Alice called herself an escort rather than prostitute. Despite the fact that like the majority of the women at the agency rarely actually did anything that included the social aspect of escorting with the clients. Rather than a descriptive term, I felt she used it as a kind of euphemism, for how she earned a living.
Her attitude to clients, I also found hard to take. She'd be stand offish and even rude to them, which I’d witnessed on the occasions when we did in calls together, yet was notorious at the same time for letting clients do whatever they wanted to her. It was a combination that seemed strange to me.
The key thing a lot of people said about Alice was that she brought the worst out in the clients. Considering that she had been working for a lot longer than I had, it was doubly strange.
Up to that point I’d done quite a few group bookings, usually with the same small group of women that I got on with and that typically went quite well. Alice too used to actively seek to do group bookings, but again only with other women that were in her little clique.
The agency had tried to discourage Alex from requesting us both together, the management feeling that it might not work out, but he specifically requested both of us together, and the management caved.
Like I said Alex was into role-play, mixing it with his other interests of anal sex, water sports and humiliation (us not him).
His roleplay with me always played to a similar format, he’d dress me in a masculine way, as a soldier, policewoman, etc. I’d act all bitchy, then he’d get assertive and take charge so to speak.
I’d fall to my knees overawed by his masculinity. I’d be so overwhelmed I’d pee myself, then acting thoroughly cowed, I’d let him bend me over and fuck me.
He had this really weird line he’d always use ‘if you dress like a man I’ll fuck you like a man’ which was his prelude to fucking me in the bum.
I’m not a tremendous fan of anal sex, and I discovered after the first few times, that I could steer him away from it by acting super girly and saying something horrendously corny line like ‘teach me to be a woman’ which he loved! And would then obligingly switch to fucking me vaginally.
I was quite proud of how I’d managed to arrange our bi monthly meetings to just how I wanted them. No anal sex, some spanking water sports and other bits, but nothing too taxing.
Now I should mention that’s what he liked to do with me, and he was pretty repetitive. However with other women he did different things, also tending towards role-play and just as elaborate.
I won’t go into details about why Alice and I didn’t get on, but essentially we didn’t talk. So it was only when we got there and saw both our uniforms laid out that I realised he did the same fantasy with her.
The costumes were all authentic looking, he did have an eye for detail. The undies were what he usually had me wear, a pair of mens boxers and a sports bra. I think he’d read somewhere that was what female soldiers often wear under their uniform.
Usually when I did this fantasy on my own, the scenario would begin with him walking in on me while I was masturbating. I’d stand up fix my uniform and once I was looking smart again he’d start.
This time the scenario would start with Alice and I acting as lesbians and he’d come in and catch us in the act.
Alice and I still hadn’t had a proper discussion of what was going to happen that night, which in retrospect was quite silly.
Once we were fully dressed we got on the floor of his study and started to snog each other. He’d laid an absorbent rug out on the floor for us to do it on, remember the directions called for us both to pee ourselves at the beginning, and I’d been keeping myself well hydrated to assist with that!
As we did our little show, he watched from the hall. I wasn’t quite sure how far he wanted us to get. Alice jumped straight into it, getting my shirt open and trousers down. Sports bras aren’t very sex friendly, but she didn’t hesitate in jamming both her hands underneath groping my boobs.
Deciding I wasn’t going to let her dominate me, I pushed back, getting her own trousers and knickers down. When I felt between her legs I was surprised to find how wet she was. My body usually responded appropriately when I was working, but I always classed it more as a functional thing.
I found her insistent efforts to work her tongue into my mouth, to be harder to put up with than her fingers which were worming their way into my vagina.
I was more than happy when Alex announced himself and stormed into the room. Acting appropriately affronted. We jumped to our feet, and began to fix our clothes, once we were finished and looked proper military again, Alex continued his routine, insulting and swearing at us.
With the instincts of a frustrated actress I began to tear up. I had what I thought was a good line “ I’m only doing it because I’m afraid of men!”.
I stood at attention bubbling up begging for forgiveness. Then at an appropriate moment I concentrated and peed myself. Which is actually quite hard and doesn’t come naturally. The urine worked it’s way down my leg, soaking my knickers and trousers.
Then there was a pause, I really wanted to get my trousers off, which would usually happen about now.
However I’d forgotten about Alice, so caught up in my own performance as I was. I turned to her and saw she was standing there expressionless. Alex turned to her and started shouting the same things he had at me.
It was at that point she told him to ‘go fuck himself’.
Then everything started to go wrong.
Source: reddit.com/r/gonewildstories/comments/3b8w73/when_hiring_two_prostitutes_to_have_a_threesome
For fucks sake! Now I have to know what kind of train wreck you got yourself into.
I’ve read a couple of your stories and they’re all basically like click bait. Maybe some things to try: "You’ll never believe what happened next." "Everything went bad from there – and the reason will shock you!"
What a cliff hanger….is jon snow dead?
You know nothing.
You know nutting.
I think that’s a legitimate literary technique! and isn’t the whole point of posting something on reddit for people to read it?
Writing is hard work, originally I was just going to write a few paragraphs and then it just ballooned.
This story seems to have got a more negative reaction than my last one.
It is a legitimate technique when it’s followed up. And cliffhangers don’t increase the reading you get. If your first couple paragraphs are good enough, most will read. Others will scroll to see if you use this ‘literary device’ and promptly move on. The reason you’re receiving negative feedback is you haven’t followed up before and thus probably won’t follow up on this either. Your storytelling is good, just work through a story and hold off on posting it until done.
The reason I was did it was more to gauge my own interest that anyone elses.
So why would you want to read more if you didn’t like it?
It’s not funny how interesting your story was and how frustrating to be left almost mid sentence
Oh my god, you need to stop doing this shit. Not finishing a story is getting really old. You have another I was following and you cut off both parts and haven’t even finished it yet. No, we don’t like it. I want to read a story to get horny, not to eagerly await the next part. Stop posting stories of you aren’t going to finish them. You don’t get more karma for doing so and it’s just frustrating. Consider me done with your stories! The writing is great, but this style you have adapted sucks. I’m being honest. I’m frustrated.
If your story isn’t interesting with a literal title, then perhaps it isn’t worth posting? At least not here. Maybe an erotica subreddit would be a better audience.
Wow even that comment got down voted.
What do you mean by the title isn’t literal? Also it’s not intended as a work of erotica, it’s an attempt to recount a real experience.
I don’t think it’s this particular story, as much the clear pattern of writing something interesting, building up to something, and then stopping suddenly. If your want to write for you then no one is going to stop you. But if you’re going to consistently leave out the parts people are hoping for, don’t expect a lot of up votes.
Internet gets pissed when you don’t deliver!
Lol okay.
For fucks sake it’s only been a day since I posted the last bit! Yet another reminder why men demand instant gratification.
It stops at a natural point. Then the next chapter of the story picks up from that point, I think it’s a tried and trusted method of writing.
It’s not mid sentence it’s a natural point to end that chapter at.
Jesus christ it’s only been a day since I posted the last story! I’m writing the story in chapters, which is I think a pretty normal method of story telling. Incidentally I posted another part to my last story.
Not just men, western people in general.
I’m a woman.
It’s these short bursts that have people frustrated. Also, this one isn’t marked as a series. I read through the whole thing not knowing any better and it was a waste of time. This style doesn’t work for erotica. If you’re writing a story anywhere else, sure. But accept the fact that people come here to read things that make them horny while they get off. No one is dragging their masturbation session out for five days to keep reading the story. It’s a let down and a mood killer. It’s a fine method for other genres, but not this one. Also, a series or multiple part story usually has a story in each part. So you would finish this sexual encounter and refer to a future one which you’d write another story on. The people who enjoyed the first story would read the second, and so on. For example, if you titled all your stories "Adventures of a Prostitute 1, 2, ect" and had one complete story for part one, when another "Adventures of a Prostitute" story came along, people would know it was good. Check out other series on here and they don’t just give little bursts. Just like pornos don’t just cut off halfway through and say "to be continued". You’re writing porn, not works of art. If you can’t write a whole story, don’t bother. I hope you take this advice seriously, since continuing with your current style is going to get you nothing but negative feedback, especially since you seem so sure that your way is right despite multiple readers telling you otherwise.
Your readers will like it better if you do one story at a time. People check back to get another installment, and instead just get the first part of another story. I mean, readers here aren’t going to like this cliffhanger approach either way, they’d rather have ‘chapters’ that are self-contained. And they’ll read the next chapter for sure, because they liked the story. You don’t need a cliffhanger. But if you insist, if you at least just do one narrative at a time, it’ll go over better.