Wrote another story! Please give me feedback! HALEY BULLIES CANDY (18+)

Candy Alenso was a short, tan, brown haired girl. She had always been shy and quiet around other students at her school. It was senior year, and the petite teen couldn't be anymore excited to be done with highschool. It wasn't the amount of homework, the drama, or the boring classes. The real reason candy wanted to be done with school was Haley. Haley was tall, athletic and beautiful. Candy was always a little bit jealous of her. But the worst part was the way she bullied her. Since the 6th grade, when they had first met, Haley repeatedly humiliated her, teased her, and even occasionally pushed her around a bit. But none of that could prepare candy for what Haley would do next. The childish name calling and wedgies would seem like nothing compared to the abuse Haley would cause her this year.

It was the first day of school, and candy had found the first 4 classes of the day rather easy. It was now 5th hour and Candy began to make her way to psychology class. As she walked through the door of room 213, she noticed everyone checking the seating chart in the front of the room. Candy found her name and looked at the desk she would be sitting at. She felt her heart drop to her stomach when she saw who would be sitting behind her. There she was, still 6 feet tall and gorgeous. Haley gave Candy an evil grin as the much shorter girl tried to ignore her bully, and sat in her seat. "It's going to be such a fun year for you and me." Haley whispered, and candy felt a shiver go down her spine.

After the first day of school had ended, it was time for the first girls soccer practice of the year. Haley had been a star player since freshman year which had caused Candy to become all the more jealous of the sexy bully. The hour long practice passed by rather quickly, and the girls made their way back to the locker room to head home for the night. Candy changed back into her regular clothes, and called her mom to come pick her up. As she hung up the phone, she glanced around and noticed she was the last one in the locker room. Or so she thought. "You should tell mommy your going to be a couple minutes late." Said a voice from behind her. Candy turned around to see Haley leaned against the lockers, with a smirk on her face. "Just leave me alone." Candy said nervously and, continued packing up her things. Her heart began to beat faster as Haley got closer. "I don't think so hun." She said, towering over a now quite frightened Candy. She quickly threw the short girl down and pinned her with little effort. "I'm just so sweaty from getting twice the playing time that you do." Said Haley as Candy squirmed underneath her. "Do you think you help me clean off?" And with that she began pulling off her shorts with one hand, while still holding candy down with the other. She was much stronger than Candy and was now naked from the waist down, still pinning the panicking girl. "You're going to eat my ass out, or I'm going to beat the shit out of you." Haley said in a cheery voice. "What the hell?! No!" Candy squealed. Haley simply laughed and swatted her across the face, hard. A tear rolled down her face as Haley held her weak little arms down, and sat her bubble butt on candy's face. The muffled screams amused Haley as she said "Your going to have to lick if you want to breathe hahaha." Candy, now becoming dizzy from the lack of oxygen, had no choice. She forced herself to glide her tongue down the salty, sweaty crack of Hayley's big ass. "Good girl!" Haley said lifting her hips off of Candy's face, hearing her gasp. She gave her a few seconds to breathe and sat right back down. She felt candy lick her way out of suffocation again and again. The mixture of tears and saliva on her ass made Haley groan in pleasure. After 15 minutes of forcing Candy to suck on her tight pinkish brown ring, she finally let up. She grabbed Candy by the throat, and passionately French kissed her. Then she stood up, smiled, and said "I told you this would be a fun year!" And walked away. Candy sobbed in humiliation, with the taste of Haley still on her tongue.

Candy laid in bed wide awake. She was still in shock over the events that had taken place in the locker room. What would be next? Would this happen everyday? What could she even do to stop it? Her mind raced as she thought nervously about seeing Haley at school the next day. She awoke the next morning in a cold sweat. She shakily went through her morning routine, as images of Haley's thick backside clouded her mind. The salty taste, the indescribable smell, and the vivid texture seemed to constantly reappear in her thoughts. As she started her car, she began to question weather or not going to school was such a good idea. Haley could do anything. She nervously backed out of the driveway and made the decision to go. As the day progressed, Candy became increasingly panicked. It was 3rd period. She would have to see Haley in her next class. The bell rang and Candy slowly walked to psychology. With her head down, she started towards her desk feeling Haley's cold, evil stare. Without even looking, she knew that Haley was displaying a satisfied grin, knowing just how weak, and humiliated Candy felt. Trying her hardest to avoid looking at her, Candy sat in her desk. Class began, and everything seemed normal. For the first 5 minutes at least, until a note landed on Candy's desk. She felt her stomach curl as she opened it and read:

"Piss yourself right now in class, or I'll make tonight worse than our last little play date! xoxoxo :) – Haley."

Tears began to well up in Candy's eyes, knowing she had been given such a horrible ultimatum. What could be worse than last night?! She turned around and whispered, pleading "Please Haley, I can't." Haley simply giggled and responded "I love it when you cry for me. It makes me so fucking wet. I almost hope you don't do it so I can punish you tonight." Candy was terrified. She closed her eyes, and began to wet herself, ashamed of how weak she was. "Oh my god Candy, did you just piss yourself?!" Haley said aloud. Candy felt her face getting dark red as the entire class turned their attention to the small frightened girl. (To be countinued)(?)

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