I slowly and confidently stroll up to your naked body as stands before me. You're staring at me with a somber, blank inquisitiveness. I grab your throat holding your eyes on mine, I stare back sternly, looking into your soul, searching your thoughts. I pinch your nipple with my other hand and as you gasp, I release you and slap you across the face. Then swiftly spin you around. A handful of hair pushing your body half bent against the wall. I plunge deeply in your wet cunt, giving you a taste of what you want, then I take it away again. Now I lay you on your back, knees lifted and spread open, eyes covered. I have a heavy flogger in one hand and crop in the other. I drag the flogger across your shoulders and chest, down your stomach and bring it up to swing softly across your inner thighs, teasing you as it brushes across you clit. Now I bring the crop up and trace randomly around your torso, every time you moan in pleasure I pop an unexpecting nipple or tender inner thigh. When I think you've had enough of this I wrap one fist firmly in your hair and grab your tit in the other hand. I shove my cock deep down your throat testing just how much you can take and how long I can hold you there. Now I reach down and with a well lubed hand slip in in 2 fingers, now 3 and 4, thumb....'POP!' as my last knuckles penetrate you, I hold it there ,wiggling my fingers inside you. I pull out and look you over, deciding you haven't earned my throbbing cock yet. I slip a finger in your ass tonguing your clit lightly and giving you a hard bite on the inner thigh with every loud moan. my licking increases slowly in pressure and pace. I suck your clit in as deeply as it will stretch, flicking it with my tongue. Then I give your asshole a little swirl and plunge with my tongue and decide you're ready. I climb up slowly between your legs and give you a few hard thrusts, just before you come, I grab your wrists and roll both of us back. Grabbing a handful of hair in one hand and hold your lower back tightly, my other arm wrapped around you. I bite deeply into the sweet spot on your neck as we both come. You lay there on top of me, barely conscious, only able to focus on my huge vein running up the side of my cock and throbbing deep in your soaking wet pussy. Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/2vyame/mf_intense_sensual_sm
I slowly and confidently stroll up to your naked body as stands before me. You’re staring at me with a somber, blank inquisitiveness. I grab your throat holding your eyes on mine, I stare back sternly, looking into your soul, searching your thoughts. I pinch your nipple with my other hand and as you gasp, I release you and slap you across the face. Then swiftly spin you around. A handful of hair pushing your body half bent against the wall. I plunge deeply in your wet cunt, giving you a taste of what you want, then I take it away again. Now I lay you on your back, knees lifted and spread open, eyes covered. I have a heavy flogger in one hand and crop in the other. I drag the flogger across your shoulders and chest, down your stomach and bring it up to swing softly across your inner thighs, teasing you as it brushes across you clit. Now I bring the crop up and trace randomly around your torso, every time you moan in pleasure I pop an unexpecting nipple or tender inner thigh. When I think you’ve had enough of this I wrap one fist firmly in your hair and grab your tit in the other hand. I shove my cock deep down your throat testing just how much you can take and how long I can hold you there. Now I reach down and with a well lubed hand slip in in 2 fingers, now 3 and 4, thumb….’POP!’ as my last knuckles penetrate you, I hold it there ,wiggling my fingers inside you. I pull out and look you over, deciding you haven’t earned my throbbing cock yet. I slip a finger in your ass tonguing your clit lightly and giving you a hard bite on the inner thigh with every loud moan. my licking increases slowly in pressure and pace. I suck your clit in as deeply as it will stretch, flicking it with my tongue. Then I give your asshole a little swirl and plunge with my tongue and decide you’re ready. I climb up slowly between your legs and give you a few hard thrusts, just before you come, I grab your wrists and roll both of us back. Grabbing a handful of hair in one hand and hold your lower back tightly, my other arm wrapped around you. I bite deeply into the sweet spot on your neck as we both come. You lay there on top of me, barely conscious, only able to focus on my huge vein running up the side of my cock and throbbing deep in your soaking wet pussy. > FTFY
Thanks, I’ve only been on reddit about a week and couldn’t figure out why it formatted that way.
You started each line with a bunch of spaces (probably because your normal editor indented the first line of a paragraph). That’s what did it. What you need to do is write without any indentation, and leave a blank line in between paragraphs. Good story, btw.